The Red String Theory (Chapter 17 updated on page 59) - Page 11

Originally posted by: mirage123

hi naila
projects & deadline...emphatize with you.. Ahh thank you. As of today I am free as a bird...well free from study anyhow :)..fab ud...they met again ...loved their convo...naku moved away from dutta once again...waiting for them to catch again...pls ud fast Yes they picked up where they left off...even if the ending was a lil frustrating.
first to comment😊 :)

Originally posted by: uwith

hi naila Helloawesome ud...dutta & naku meeting was like never parted... Indeed they picked up where they left out. No-one would think it had been years since they last saw each other.

elevator scene was too good...reminded of shaadi vaadi...although it had your touch...OK this really intrigues me. Tell me more. How so? I'll let you in on a secret, this lift scene I had written a long time ago. In fact most of this story, even quite a few chapters down the line I already have written, I just need to polish them. SO the fact that this chap reminded you of Shaadi Vaadi does intrigue me.

they parted again...next meeting hopefully will be together with junk out😆i m enjoying this story...pls ud soonHaan when will the kebab mein haddi go hana? that is the questionthanxs for making time for us😊

Originally posted by: FASSBEN

HI Naila HI FASSBEN :)

Glad your back and you reached your deadline Relieved is not even the word! Even if it is all bittersweet.

Now the UD Loved It so Nakku and Dutta meet again In a elevator they whole covn with one another was really nice. Dutta sees Nakku In arms and kissed some other man Nakku also sees Dutta looking at them and feels that she might have did something wrong. Has she start having feeling for Dutta. Hmmm so something is brewing between them right? Sidenote: I very nearly when it came to the 'mood' part wrote "Kuch Kuch Hota hain" but then in the end I decided to paraphrase Taylor Swift instead and went with "Happy, confused and lonely all at the same time."

pls ud really soon

Take care now

Originally posted by: tahera57

Thanks for a great ud Naila, enjoy their comfortable convo, they get closer each time yet still apart, for 10 whole years ... waiting for next ud.

Hi naila

I sure your project will get best grade😊...you r too good with words & it shows your knowledge...once again thanks for taking time for us

Loved the ud...they met but it seemed they never parted...initial hesitation..Hug from naku's side reminded it of shaadi vaadi...I know it copied your concept coz your ff start before their...runaway bride...😆

Dutta still has traces of his misadventure in phuket...fear does remain...naku eased the situation...what she sympathized with the bride selected by dutta's parent...thankfully he saved her & himself...😆

phone ringing brought naku to her senses...dutta caught sight of jerk...jerk get out of pic...waiting for next meeting...hopefully jerk not around ...plz ud soon😊

Hi naila

Superb ud...like first meeting second was brief but showed their feeling for each other...third time lucky 😳if u decide ...dutta & naku once again...meeting soon pls

Originally posted by: Nakusha

Hi naila Hello Nakusha, how are you?

I sure your project will get best grade😊...you r too good with words & it shows your knowledge That is so sweet of you. Just keep me in your prayers :) ...once again thanks for taking time for us AND thank you for taking the time out to read my work

Loved the ud...they met but it seemed they never parted...initial hesitation..Hug from naku's side reminded it of shaadi vaadi...I know it copied your concept coz your ff start before their...runaway bride...😆 LOL I won't go as far as that, but awkward hugs are my thing. It's probably because I'm not a hug/touchy/feely person myself. I don't even hug my mum. LOL. The last time we hugged was after praying the eid namaaz-and then hug to banta hain. LOL. But yeah I had to have an awkward hug somewhere.

Dutta still has traces of his misadventure in phuket...fear does remain...naku eased the situation...what she sympathized with the bride selected by dutta's parent...thankfully he saved her & himself...😆 Yes nothing against Priya, I'm sure she's a lovely girl but woh Mrs Dutta Patil toh ban nahin sakti.

phone ringing brought naku to her senses...Hmm makes you wonder what would have gone down had her phone not rung right then. dutta caught sight of jerk...jerk get out of pic...waiting for next meeting...hopefully jerk not around ...plz ud soon😊 Time will tell my dear ;)

Originally posted by: jedy25

Hi naila Hello Jedy, how are you?

Superb ud...like first meeting second was brief but showed their feeling for each other...third time lucky 😳 Now that would be telling! all in good time my friend, all in goo time! ;) if u decide ...dutta & naku once again...meeting soon pls Milenge toh zaroor, as to how soon, well picture abhi baaki hai mere dost.