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naila

@goody2shoes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: mirage123
hi naila
another fab ud...👏.i enjoyed reading as much as you enjoyed writing ...dutta & naku met...dutta father & naku's obnixious 😡as rightly said by leela...waiting for next meeting of dutta & naku...ud soon

So we're TeamLeela on this are we? We don't like this lawyer dude muscling in on Dutta's lady? aaah keep reading, I wonder if your mind will change as it progresses.

Thank you for reading and the beautiful image. I THANK YOU :)

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Hi naila

Thanks for anno... Changing to different dialect & maintain consistence is difficult...hats off you manages too well...don't talk abt ending so soon...I m enjoying every bit😊

After flight they met & dutta will be sharing the honey moon suite with naku...I know she is helping him😆

I agree with leela Mr. obnoxious doesn't deserve naku...sometime people do foolish thing..I guess this is one of it

Dutta's father is terrible dad...planning his wedding ...or selling him

Hope Mr. obnoxious out soon & our Tasha for us...depends upon the story & writer...😳plz ud soon

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naila

@goody2shoes

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Nakusha

Hi naila

Hi Nakusha :)

Thanks for anno... Changing to different dialect & maintain consistence is difficult...hats off you manages too well...don't talk abt ending so soon...I m enjoying every bit😊 Aww thank you. I try, I'm aware there are some mistakes. But thank you. LOL, don't worry it's not near the end, yet! I just like to stay on top of planning :)

After flight they met & dutta will be sharing the honey moon suite with naku...I know she is helping him😆

Yes one thing has to be said, these guys always seem to meet in the strangest ways: in a medical tent, on the plane/sharing a hotel room, and the next two (meeting 2 and 3) shall be just as, erm what can I call it, Awkward? Yes let's go with that ;)

I agree with leela Mr. obnoxious doesn't deserve naku...sometime people do foolish thing..I guess this is one of it Interesting take, as I have said before, I wonder if you too maintain this view as the story plays out.

Dutta's father is terrible dad...planning his wedding ...or selling himYes Mr Patil is a nasty piece of work. (SPOILER ALERT: this is only the tip of the iceberg!)

Hope Mr. obnoxious out soon & our Tasha for us...depends upon the story & writer...😳plz ud soonHAHA shall I go all evil and tear them apart? NOOO of course I couldn't do that to our beloved Tasha

As ever thank you for your kind words and comments. It really does make my day.

Interesting thoughts, I like to see how well readers warm (in some cases not warm) to fictional characters.

Next update: Tasha meeting number two, up soon! :)

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

TRST chap~ 6

Hey love the title of this chapter.. kind of personal.."I , me. and myself" bhai.. salman ke words but I use them for hammie to..[ eshtyle hai bhi..]

Love their bickering .. baachoon ke theran larte hain, actually corrections cat and dog.. but love the day to day current references! you have chosen all the fav hotels of back home.. , Marriott .. Intercontinental.. back home PC.. pearl continental..[me larfing!]

Loved the Leela/ Naku conversation.. they seem very close.. instinctively, this lawyer chap , Leela doesn't warm too, but Naku does .. wonder why she has latched on to him too? is it just to avoid proposals?

Wowie loved the father and son talk..we see a forced marriage of a son.. it seems the son has defied the orders of the family.. is it because he is a male? Hence easier for him to walk out of his parents life.. something tells me he will settle elsewhere easily not because of his money but because of his gender.. kya hota if he was a she? mind you we have the example of Roops, hers too is a forced marriage , but she complies.. why? .. and Dutta being the son does not.. just a thought.. that was provoked by the final bits of a very interesting and well described chapter... thanks mate.. waiting for the next bit.. much love hammie..

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Hey Naila, sorry for the delay but finally I'm back :)

Chapter One:

You've definitely got the corner on intriguing. Right from the start I was hooked.

Nakusha ditches her groom-to-be and does it with a bang!

I'm curious to know her reasons...but hey she's off to paris and well the story's just beginning, right? I look forward to seeing just where this new journey is taking her...and well I have a sneaking suspicion this stranger who sits beside her is very important...

Chapter Two:

We've gone back in time and you've given great insight into Dutta and Naku's lives before. Not just where they were professionally and personally but also what time period they were in...with the references to fashion politics etc.. very well done. I'm loving your writing style!

Loved Baaji and Dutta's part. They truly share a special relationship and it's always fun to read about it!

Chapter Three:

Life never goes per plan. It's ever changing. Situations, incidents, events do that. Her reflection on her life because she'd lost the only parent she knew...one that had her own demons inside and then never having her father in the picture, it all must've been a tough upbringing. And surely it's had some consequences. But the girl's got grit...she blossomed despite her conditions...stuck through it somehow and wants to get over it too.

Well, you gotta hand it to Dutta for helping even though he isn't trained for this kind of situation. His intentions were honorable if stupid.

But hey, it's led to his meeting Nakusha so who's gonna complain? :P

Chapter Four:

Haha LOL fixing that dislocated shoulder was a rather amusing scene. I mean poor guy but still her tactic was good!

They are bantering...already! And both intrigued with the other for reasons even beyond them. I like that they already are learning things about each other and I doubt they realized it at the time. Spilling their guts about their backgrounds.

It's interesting how parents can be so clueless about their own children. Always expecting them to be who they want instead who the kid wants to be...especially in families with high status whose hiers are meant to take over...

Ahh, there it is. The consequences as I mentioned before. She thinks she needs to live her life indepently. Have no expectations of others so she can't be let down. Or that's what she tells herself but Dutta hit the nail perfectly by pointing out she was lying. That she does want it all...but wanting it and letting herself take/get it is two different things.

Naku's words hit him even if he doesn't say as much and I hope that changes something..

See their meant for each other. In each other's company such a short time and they've got the soul-deep read on each other. But interesting to note is both have issues rooting from their families...but do they realize they have the power to change that...to make what they want of their lives. Maybe even together...considering they really seem to fit together...

I'm really enjoying the pace of this story :)

Chapter Five:

Back to present. I really liked what you penned about strangers and the chances of meeting again or even whether or not those faces are remembered. It surely does happen...

So Dutta's requested to be moved and lucky us look where he lands...it must be fate. Here they are again...and I'm guessing that four means there was more before...

Back in time again. I like the way it goes back and forth :)

Threes years since that first meet and he's still remembering her. That speaks more than he even realizes. Let's hope they meet up again soon...

So back to Patil Manor for this one...and well clearly his life is still where it was where his parents are concerned. His strained relationship...and can't really blame him for wanting to flee with a mother like that...scary!

Ah, Nakusha has fared no better in forgetting Mr Sir Patil :P And she's wondering where he's at in his life. She and her stranger connected just once but clearly it was enough to leave an impression...let's see how these two find their way...

Oh someone else enters her life...this should be interesting.

I love how she's taken her stranger's line ;)

So who is the jilted groom-to-be...? hmmm...the man she just met perhaps.

Chapter Six

LMAO the stars are shining...we need to kiss whoever royally screwed up and left Dutta without a room...because haila...he's just gotten a honeymoon suite...with his unforgettable doc...and they've still got their bantering going I see

A steady relationship with someone her closest friend seems to dislike. You know sometimes friends see what you can't. So if Leela's assessment of the man is correct, what is it Nakusha sees in him?

Oh poor Dutta. He's really being pulled like he's a puppet or something. Seriously, it's irritating when parents make decisions for you about your life *rolls eyes* and this family is only worried about image and money and the likes of that...which makes it that much worse! But glad he stood his ground and walked away...what's interesting is that before he had seemed resigned to the fact that one day he'd marry whoever his parents chose and live that life...and yet now he had not intention going that direction...

So what's next for these two? And I'm waiting to see what this second meeting is about.

Naila, I have to applaud your writing! It's absolutely amazing. And the way the plot is moving forward...it's perfect. An element of mystery behind all the revelations!

I am thoroughly enjoying your work. So please do continue and thank you for sharing your wonderful talent on the forum :)

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jedy25

@jedy25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

hi nailasuperb ud...flight landed...dutta & naku together...flash back mode...i like leela😆...ud soon...very interesting

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naila

@goody2shoes

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: jedy25
hi nailasuperb ud...flight landed...dutta & naku together...flash back mode...i like leela😆...ud soon...very interesting

Leela has a way with words, don't you think!? LOL

Thank you for reading. Next update soon hopefully :)

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: goody2shoes

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sona89

@sona89

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Hi naila

Awesome ud...dutta dysfunctional family...naku falling for wrong guy...what next...liked reading ...pls ud soon😊

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naila

@goody2shoes

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi naila

Awesome ud...dutta dysfunctional family...naku falling for wrong guy...what next...liked reading ...pls ud soon😊

Dutta and Naku meet part two! :)

Thank you dear. Next update soon hopefully :)

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