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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi naila Hello Sona hope you're well! :)

Awesome ud Thank you ...dutta has put on weight...wife was great cook😆... I think Naku was just chiding him lol. Always the tease, he may not be as slick and trim as his Sydney self but I assure he is still a gorgeous man! ;)

naku had terrible time with jerk family...Yes makes you wish that you are never ever in that position doesn't it! Poor girl.

he has ring on his finger...not divorce yet😕 Now that would be telling. Keep reading, all shall be revealled soon enough ;)

Dutta naku are together...clear the air...Aah so you've picked up on something. Good! Hold onto that thought. clearly there last meeting (Ie the third one) does seem to have created some sort of havoc.

enjoying reading this story...and I enjoy writing it! Thank you dear for the image and reading :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Naila! I couldn't resist the next chapter so here I am...

Chapter 8: But then things changed

It's remarkable that they honestly are so comfortable with each other regardless of how much time passes between their meets...

Oh he's got a wife. Honestly, usually I'd have been appalled since I'm team Dutta and Nakusha lol but considering this story and the fact that they do in fact lead lives that are away from each other...it's realistic to see that he'd have made some progress in his personal life and maybe met someone...and anyway even she was dating and ready to marry...there was no future for them with each other in those situations...

But I sense there is something important regarding his wife...or marriage...whether a tragedy or just plain misery or maybe a rough patch in the marriage...who knows...only you! ;)

Oh you're throwing in bones but holding us back!! What happened in their last meet and that name Rosie...comes up again...how did he lose right to call her that? And why did she never wish to see him again?? Hmmm I am curious! He did something???

And the children remark or wife remark...possibly both has hit a nerve and it's only making me more eager to learn why!

Hmm she's not in his life anymore can mean a lot of things...

Back in time...

I think Nakusha is ignoring all the warning signs or maybe making up excuses for them...but seriously when the man you're with (especially for as long as them) isn't really listening to you or doesn't know much about you...wouldn't you think it's all wrong? And then she feels misplaced, ignored, overlooked, and their lives are separate even while together ...but she's not doing anything about it? You know What's interesting, with her and Dutta even when separated their lives seemed to line up whenever they were together!

And lying to her friends...another warning sign. She is becoming a bobble head in the name of a relationship. She's unable to be herself...and she's making excuses to be that person...why? Why doesn't she see what's really going on...what's stopping her from making that conclusion that this is all wrong??? He really knows nothing about her...does he? Oh and don't you just hate it when people answer for you as if they know you! Argh...

A trophy wife, how strange that she's regarded as (and possibly agreeing to - for the time being) the very thing Dutta's mother wanted for him...

She's really in a pickle huh...left alone in a room full of people who care nothing about her...

Another wonderful UD. I am loving the way the story is moving forward...l am eager to see it unravel and reveal the many layers and stepping stones in their lives...

Continue Soon!

Take Care, Phir milenge chalte chalte...

Edited by -daya- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Naila! I couldn't resist the next chapter so here I am...I am so happy to see your comment LOL.

Chapter 8: But then things changed

It's remarkable that they honestly are so comfortable with each other regardless of how much time passes between their meets...It is quite beautiful isn't it? :)

Oh he's got a wife. Yes uh oh.

Honestly, usually I'd have been appalled since I'm team Dutta and Nakusha lol but considering this story and the fact that they do in fact lead lives that are away from each other...it's realistic to see that he'd have made some progress in his personal life and maybe met someone...and anyway even she was dating and ready to marry...there was no future for them with each other in those situations...I like that you've pointed that out. It's easy to forget that while Naku may have ditched her groom (eventually) she was already dating while Dutta was not, so the fact that he seemingly settled (eventually) too points to something.

But I sense there is something important regarding his wife...or marriage...whether a tragedy or just plain misery or maybe a rough patch in the marriage...who knows...only you! ;) and at this point I REALLY want to scream out and say what it is, but alas I am afrad but you must wait a little. All in good time my dear. All in good time. In the mean time hold onto your theories. :)

Oh you're throwing in bones but holding us back!! I'm quite the tease, and I am not even sorry lol.

What happened in their last meet and that name Rosie...comes up again...how did he lose right to call her that? And why did she never wish to see him again?? Hmmm I am curious! He did something???So many questions (and good ones too) but I will have to leave you pondering for the time being. All I can clarify is that indeed something DID happen. As to it's severity I shall let you all judge that for yourselves, soon as I have it written and posted :)

And the children remark or wife remark...possibly both has hit a nerve and it's only making me more eager to learn why! indeed it is curious that he is alone in Paris. Where is this wife?

Hmm she's not in his life anymore can mean a lot of things...;) it sure can.

Back in time...

I think Nakusha is ignoring all the warning signs or maybe making up excuses for them...but seriously when the man you're with (especially for as long as them) isn't really listening to you or doesn't know much about you...wouldn't you think it's all wrong? And then she feels misplaced, ignored, overlooked, and their lives are separate even while together ...but she's not doing anything about it? curious and curiouser isn't it. A girl who is seemingly adamant about her life and being in control (recall her vini vidi vichi stance?) now seems resigned to a dead end relationship- and I use that term in the loosest sense. It's not quite clear yet but Nakusha seems to be hanging on. May be she needs a wake up call? usually that comes from your family, since she doesn't have any, then her best friend, Leela? but again L's warning's fall on deaf ears, so someone else...Dutta?

You know What's interesting, with her and Dutta even when separated their lives seemed to line up whenever they were together! yes which is why both suddenly realised how alone they have been when they met again.

And lying to her friends...another warning sign. She is becoming a bobble head in the name of a relationship. She's unable to be herself...and she's making excuses to be that person...why? Why doesn't she see what's really going on...what's stopping her from making that conclusion that this is all wrong??? He really knows nothing about her...does he? Yep he really doesn't something you will come to know more of in the next few chapters.

Oh and don't you just hate it when people answer for you as if they know you! Argh...Yes. If anything Kudos to her for keeping her cool, especially since we know the type of person she actually is.

A trophy wife, how strange that she's regarded as (and possibly agreeing to - for the time being) the very thing Dutta's mother wanted for him...Yes if Nakusha moved in the same social circles as Dutta, I can pretty much see Mrs Patil arranging a Jain-Patil alliance. (this kinda makes me wat to explore a story now where both are filthy rich and arranged to be married. kind of a 'Taming of the shrew' sort of banter will ensue lol!)

She's really in a pickle huh...left alone in a room full of people who care nothing about her...Yes and despite knowing that, she doesn't seem to do anything, considering that few years down the line she seemingly is set to marry the guy. Hmm!

Another wonderful UD. I am loving the way the story is moving forward...l am eager to see it unravel and reveal the many layers and stepping stones in their lives...As ever Thank you Daya, I'm glad you're enjoying the pace, sometimes I fear that it is going too slow.

Continue Soon! Thank you for taking the time to read the update and posting your lovely thoughts :)

Take Care, Phir milenge chalte chalte... ;)

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Posted: 11 years ago

HI Naila

Awesome ud So dutta Is married he tells nakku she Is not In his life what happened I guess we have to wait soon to find out. Why did Nakku say he lost he right by calling her that name what happen two years ago that made her tell him she wish ever meeting him again. Can't wait to read more about they past. Pls ud really soon

Thanks as always
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks Naila, great ud so many questions rising about her and Dutta what happened where ? when and how? he must have touched a sensitive nerve on last meet or told her the other guy was not good for her... what to say about his parents ... funny how she worked it out in one meeting about his family but not of him in many years she was with him... sad case of rose rimmed specs...
now for Dutta he's keeping his marriage problems closed for discussion for the moment.
great ud..and added bonus fantastic comments from all!
thanks long may you continue with this FF. ... the way it's going I don't mind if it goes to 500 pages or more.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi naila

Awesome ud...nothing seem to have gone good in past...he isn't with his wife...she left the jerk for good...hope they find happiness...pls ud

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi naila

Loved the ud...naku had moved away from jerk...in actual sense...roses seemed liked thorns...naku knew dutta is married ...have he met her while he was married...or .guess from the ring...somewhere felt pang that dutta is married...time & tide wait for none...there was no commitment here

Jerk wanted a trophy wife...naku wasted 5 long yrs ...maybe to feel a sense of family...which she never had

They have time to spend with each other...let see how they make up time they missed

Loving it...ud soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

TRST chap~ 8

Hellooo.. naila goody gum.. sun, ye Marriott wale using chabeis in their door.. fob! Kyun nehin[ me chuckling] bill tu itna lete hain paer night..[ haaahaa] ohhhok.. she did get a card for the bling! lights..

Dutta with a pot belly.. really..? hope he has a hairy chest too.. naila Dutta without a mat of curly hairs..is unimaginable.. sorry doing my own thing...parrdoon!

He's married??? ooh ok ring on his finger.. how can he not be taken? loaded, young, wicked looking..? but is he bound? Not quite..Ok end of her.. biwi..

So as for her, jerk head! didn't work out for her either ..heaven's he and family typical aristocratic back ground ..tour of the house! more like show the girl our worth! overtly made her to feel a misfit, poor Nakusha.. naila loved your description of the loo.. drenched with air fresheners .. haahaa.. How, snotty.. into tennis and not football!.. spelling bee cup! Haaaha.. Surprised this family not into cricket and cucumber sandwiches! Oh lordie! now come their requirements for their, vakeel beta.. first port her profession.. phir her beauty and hain ,pretty babies tak phooch gaye ye log? Sab appearances.. well I don't blame the girl for turning down the lot!, as waste of spaces.. brainless gits! And the son.. thinks like his folks.. can he make judgments? How can he not conclude , Naku will be incongruous in his family? maybe he doesn't know her that well?

Have to say ,noted what her mother queried about Nakusha being the only child?.. hence no hassle with her side of the family.. do I detect, poor girl has no one, so easy to control.. he of course tells his mum, her folks are dead.. seems clearly ,he's ashamed of her past..

What an eye opener.. overhearing how this/his family perceives her..

The feeling is beginning to come to me.. that this has to be the two lost souls.. come across each other as though they were destined to meet.. theme.. gradually surfacing..

Thanks naila.. loved the descriptive sections.. please carry on.. and I hope you are asleep..

Much love , yours hammie.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tahera57


Thanks Naila, Aww :)great ud double awww :)

so many questions rising about her and Dutta what happened where ? when and how? all the right questions are flouting in your mind. Hold onto them some if not all shall be answered soon enough :)

he must have touched a sensitive nerve on last meet or told her the other guy was not good for her...;) very observant

what to say about his parents ... funny how she worked it out in one meeting about his family but not of him in many years she was with him... sad case of rose rimmed specs...It is odd isn't it how she takes an instant dislike towards his siblings and even his parents don't come across well, yet when it's clear to anybody watching the spectacle that he is pretty much the same. The apple doesn't fall far from the tree as they say, yet somehow Naku does not see. It is odd. Anyone from the outside would...aah but may be that is why. Naku isn't on the outside. Let's not forget 6 years is an incredibly long time to spend with someone, and a long time of your life to give to someone as well. But she does walk away granted it's not until her wedding day but she does which then begs the question: what was the last straw? hmmm
now for Dutta he's keeping his marriage problems closed for discussion for the moment. I'm glad you noted that he's remaining schutum on the matter. Interesting really considering how open they are with each other when it comes to their wounds. Makes you wonder how deep is he cut?
great ud..and added bonus fantastic comments from all! Indeed I think I enjoy reading all of your comments more than writing the fic, which says a lot considering how fond I've grown of this Tasha universe.
thanks long may you continue with this FF. ... the way it's going I don't mind if it goes to 500 pages or more.😃 OH MY TAHERA, now that is what I call flattery. I am humbled. Genuinely humbled. That means so much to me. THank you so much. :) :) :) :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hi naila HELLO :)

Awesome ud Thank you dear :)

...nothing seem to have gone good in past ...he isn't with his wife...That's an interesting take, that the fact that he is supposedly married-yet-not is a sad thing. I guess it depends on what perspective you take. I like that comment that you made ;) That

she left the jerk for good...hope they find happiness...pls ud Yes she left him. BUT the question I put to you, will he let her go? hmmm


Thank you for reading as ever :)

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