SS~Dutta~a trilogy~ thread 1. Follow the Heart. continued on thread 2 - Page 79

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jedy25

hi hamlet helloo jedy , we meet again..
it ended ...wish it went on & on..superb story start to finish ..reader can't ask anything better than this too good story...i liked the happy ending dutta & naku happy together..as nakusha said we are waiting for next story ...👍🏼..request from all of us..
hey your lovely words are so moving,me swelling up with a big head.😆 ..yes dear reader the new SS will start soon.. after i complete all the annot... thanks for the sweet image and on going support much love hammie

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi Hamlet hi sonaaa good to see you
The last part...its always difficult to let go...i agree i was bit taken a back with final part... oyee be brave.. this story ended.. hammie has not ended abhi.. hummm?
An Awesome story with Awesome end...Dutta & Naku happily ever after humm every one loves a happy ending ,pata hai mujhe didnt want thappars from you all so ended it the way you wanted..
Me & my gang indebted to you ...enjoyed reading it
start a new story soon ...waiting eagerly 😊
gang thank you all for reading my work.. gang after i finish all my annotat.. will post info about new SS.. THEK HAI? thanks for your support and the beautiful seasonal picture.. here we had one day of light snow.. up nothing.. spring ? in the air.. much love hammie

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dilse14

hi hamlet hi dilse 😃

wonderful story & wonderful end

dutta achieved success & naku by his side

what about us hamlet..i request you to start a new story plsss

awww what a way with words.. for you my dearie.. a new SS jab i finish all my annotations.. zayeeda wait nehin karna pare ga..

its a trilogy ..plsss yep the second story will be up soon.. vada raha

thanxs for giving beautiful story

thanks for being a keen reader of my writing ..thanks for the lovely flowers. much love hammie

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mirage123

hi hamlet hi mirage good to see you
thanxsss for the lovely story ...fab story through out ...fitting epilogue ..i m little sad it was end...waiting for next story to be started by you ...pleading start a fresh story😊 so pleased you enjoyed the story start to finish ,your interest in the story kept me going.. you dont need to plead mirage, iam going to start the second SS soon, and i cannot go far from you .. so watch the space.. thanks for your comment and the image😛.. still beside you ..love hammie.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: afi7861

hello hello.. dear hammie 😊 kaka balli!😃 aaj main bhaut kush hoon..😃 baat he kushi ke hai.. haina??? kuch dino mein galli mein chand nikle ga!!😆

Awesome story with happy beautiful ending ..
thank you , you liked the ending ..
you are a great writer hammie ..we all loved your all writing thank you very much 🤗for giving beautiful stories😃
pls pls start a new story😊
bolta ja balli.. i love tareef ,pe tareef! but remember nothing without you loving reading.. next story teri aur bart pasand ke.. 😃.. sun i love the cutie ankh marte hoi mano billi.. very eye catching.. yaar ,me waiting for that lazy daisy twinky to finish her comments, phir new SS.. so thura sabar... thanks so much afzal for your continued support much appreciated.. loads of love as ever yours hammie.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: uwith

hi hamlet hi uvi good to see you
awesome end & epilogue ..dutta & naku beautiful life together..i 'm thankully you gave an opportunity to be your reader 😊...pls don't take the privilege away...start a new story again😊
hey uvi, hammie is indebted to you for being such an avid reader.. always giving me the inspiration to write more.. yes will be start new short story on this thread , after all annotations are done.. much love and many thanks for the gracious image.. hammie.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-


Hammie 😊 hi bart ,phew at last you turned up.. i was so poorly, when i saw your comment.. but it brought a smile on my face..😛
Babi n her fast paced teeny tiny brain hahahaa how it was racing away sonic speed imagining so many ifs n buts n whats just seeing seema. Strangely many of the episodes have been starting with babi n her out of the world thoughts 😆..beti ke maa hai
Now why should dutta jump in or butt in defence of naku? touche guy. You know hammie i resent obsessive overly protective men, par yeh dutta toh is obsessed beyond words, gosh. ummmh something tells me you dont mind it in him..😛
But one thing that intrigues me is why the animosity with seema? when bechari seema is no mean lady on a meaningless mission. She is here with an offer that would blow away everyone,s mind. An even bigger platform to showcase his talent which should be truly appreciated. Whatever be her ways or mannerisms Seema has always promoted dutta,s art n in turn she has only received resentment. i suspect ,she looked down on naku .. thats why.. off behave she did with naku in art school..
The best n most awaited moment was the "lau" struck couple huddled in the room😉 waise this must be the most closest the two got physically, she leaning n sobbing on his hairy chest n dutta taking advantage of her closeness rofl, hammie you are such a spoilsport...tum bahut badal gayi hammie, what happened to your sense of romance??
i think ,bart i saw my contemporary writers .. were a lot subdued in love scenes.. i guess i have matured..😛.. major dutta fauji tha.. adventurous,bold.. trigger happy.. badmaash.. ummmh.. i'll have to delve on exploring romance more ..humm?
But this guy is mighty focussed, he was hell bent on just one thing that is, to make sure she would be HIS forever. And im slightly surprised with nakusha,s reaction.. i imagined her to push him towards the italy venture, think of his art than emotionally blackmailing him to tying the knot, hmm babi ki beti jo hai 😃 hummm ini bhi seedhi nehin thi.
But dutta is dutta n he rarely fails my expectations. That was a perfect solution in the situation, shadi cum honeymoon cum passion.. umm lucky man dutta, he is gonna be on a heady cocktail trip, perfect blend of pleasure with business..
bart i too felt this dialogue /closeness between a human and a holy one that he looks up to,be it a deity or high morals was my special bit in this story.. its tricky,because where i live people have diverse faiths, or none at all. like humanists.. so it was a sensitive area.
Im thoroughly luving this one to one dialogue between dutta n krishna. Yes id like to address My God too the same way, one to one basis. No wall no fear no barrier between us. I believe in a daily banter with my God like dutta, what a quirky coincidence 😆
No wonder naku behaves the way she does as Dutta treats naku more like his child than his partner, chiding, ordering, pacifying, encouraging. But naku is right when she says its not just her who is desperate, aag toh dono taraf barabar lagi hai.
Dutta never ceases to impresses me, his words with baji on the occassion of the most imp milestone in his life has to be equally precious. He is the most grounded individual one can find, to his roots to his near ones, to his home to his work, culture n more imp to his own conscience. His meeting of damodar was one of the most poignant moments.
iam glad you took note of this.. i had to bring to forefront ,that his father did live on his own , in his own house..
Ooh God how could i not connect this, dutta like his krishna blessed with two mothers. Damodar rightly enlightened this to him..yes i chose krishna purposely.. for this reason..
Wow dutta,s portrait of naku in the haldi attire was divine n touching. i mean the way you put it hammie it just gave me some inexplicable joy. Im sure his next portrait would be an exact replica of naku in her glorious lagaan look. told you, Blessed soul jo hai dutta
The striking part of a maharashtrian bride for me is the big nose ring, hammie it reminds me of guess? who??? bata na..? LTL?
The best dialogue of this entire SS has to be this, mera kamre ka sabse UNIQUE cheez tere saamne hai" kya phadu dialogue 😆 I was thinking of you😆 when i wrote this .. hit one liner..😆
What a beautiful ending with a befitting epilogue n dutta true to his character settling in his humble abode where he grew up as a small child. But somewhere i feel for AS who couldnt hold on to him in her palatial house. Atleast he turned it to an art school, a place of learning where he nurtured his talent where his talent was recognised n promoted, it was his way of repaying i guess
Hammie i could sense you were on the verge of winding up the SS, a sense of deja vu. Been there n done that wali baat, toh im better prepared unlike previous times😛 But For me Laagi forum has come to mean your writing... and for me bart writing for loyalists like you.. how long have we known each other?? bart, you have stood the test of time.. consistent in your support for me and my writing.. year after year ,season after season, where others left you stayed for more from me.. thank you bart ,hammie is blessed indeed
Thank you from the bottom of my heart, HUGS N KISSES bhi 🤣 🤣
hugs?? hain.. ummh na bhi hugs hoon.. i know how much you care for me.. thank you.. for the lovely flowers and for your heart felt comment.. you know what i'll be doing on this thread next.. so just let me tackle with all the annotations .. wait kare ge na .. i'll be back.. much love my dearest loyal bart... bet you must be asleep.. much love hammie




This one for the eternal luv of dutta n nakusha

i love this song.. humm fit hai for dutta n nakusha.. thanks for sharing it.
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GtYDhE8JJiY&sns=em[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by Hamlet53 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: twinkle-star

Update~15
Hi hammieee lion🤗 hellooo twinks.. with your back logs 😆
aww such a heart wrenching update dear..❤️.enjoyed it sooo much..❤️.loved Baaji-Dutta-naku scene.❤️...Naku fell & caught out by Dutta..❤️.aww loved Baaji's nautanki❤️...haahooo...Dutta falls for naku and naku falls for dutta..❤️..loved baaji's words "lets doll you up for the doctors to see you".🤣..aweee sweeet cute baby Dutta❤️..enjoyed the face was session.😉..dutta desperately wanted to know the truth.🤗...baaji struggles with Dutta baby.🤣..DP is good baby for naku.😉..Dutta cured well.🤗.hain??.he refused to take halwa??😲...oh god..dutta is a sweet toothed baby na😉..Dutta announced that he won't use his hands for creative work anymore....oh god dutta decided to give a biggest punishment to naku&himself too...😲oops he twisted naku's arm.😲.Its little bit too much...naku spilled out her painful past to dutta.🤗..her husband was an evil.😡.he involved in human trafficking..😲😡..hats off to brave-heart naku👏👏...she saved many innocent children's lives from her evil husband.👏👏.he was shot dead by police..👏.her FIL Dilawar wants to take revenge.🤢..awww now dutta is here to save naku from her in laws....awww dutta consoling naku &such a heart touching part dear.❤️..his words are sooo beautiful❤️..he has appreciated naku& decided to continue his wonderful creative works....awww such a loveliest update dear.❤️...enjoyed it soo much.❤️..sooo sweet of you..🤗..take care...big teddy hugs from twinky baby🤗
thanks for a well written comment twinky.. love your commitment.. and ohhh great shots all of them.. they sure match with the story.. thanks for your hard work.




















great picture of baji 😆 nice ones of naku as well ,quite uncommon ones.. thank you ,much love hammie😃


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: twinkle-star

update-16

Hi hammiee lion🤗 helloo twinky well do two more homework pieces..
aww such a beautiful update dear.❤️..enjoyed it sooo much❤️...aww loved tasha's sweeet scene❤️...wowww what a zabardast proposal.❤️..loved his confession❤️...his words are sooo powerful.❤️.their discussion about societal issue was too good.. ❤️..aww dutta cleared naku's doubt.❤️.aww greatest emotion he feels for naku's pure eternal love.❤️...loved BaTaSha moment..❤️.awee dutta baby remembered his parents.❤️. aww dutta feeding naku.❤️..naku too feeding him with pleasure..❤️such a cute part dear.❤️..aww dutta got the whole hearted approval from his family.❤️..mainly from his father& ayesaab...❤️sweeet family.❤️..babi worried about dilawar😔..Dutta & Baaji will handle this evil dilawar issue....wowww such a wonderful update dear.❤️..enjoyed it to the core.❤️..hats off to you hammieee lion⭐️...sooo sweet of you..🤗..Thank you sooo much our sweeetest hammie lion..🤗.big teddy hugs from twinky baby 🤗
another beautifully written comment well done.. and great shots.. of dutta's arm... wowieee












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Hi Hammiee lion🤗
aww awesome update dear.❤️..enjoyed it sooo much.
❤️...dutta still has questions about naku's past.😳...dutta sharing his feelings with his best mate.❤️loved Dutta's possessiveness & fear❤️...he loves naku dearly..❤️.baaji gives full attention to his bhau..❤️..aww dutta & baaji have a good plan to catch dilawar..👍🏼.hope their plan will work out..👍🏼..loved their convo❤️...Ayesaab is a good mother.❤️...aw naku massaging dutta's hands❤️...Dutta again asked about her past& naku in tears.😭..hate to see her in tears.😭..but dutta loves her soo much..❤️.he praying before bappa & wants only to see the goodness in naku..❤️loved his prayer..❤️dutta had a dream in his sleep❤️.loved it..❤️.aww dutta started off his artistic works again....naku is his assistant.....aww lovely update dear.❤️..enjoyed it sooo much..❤️.sweeetie pie lion..🤗..thank you sooo much for the interesting update dear.🤗...Big teddy hugs from twinky baby🤗
another wonderful comment, interesting read.. and the shots of dutta are a real treat.. i hope other readers too see those pictures ,that you painstakingly have put up.. remember .. twinky to put up your final comments, as i have to post the promo of new SS Tommorrow.. thanks for your excellent work.. much love hammie
































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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi hammiee lion🤗
awesome update dear...enjoyed it sooo much...loved Dutta-ayesaab convo...Dutta in many moods...naku tied to avoid him...loved dutta- baaji- naku happy moment...err babi...hate her...aww sweet dutta he doesn't like babi's tone upon his sweeet naku... bad babi...she has taken naku to kitchen...loved tasha's glances.aww naku got blessing from bappa..aww yellow marigolds in her cheek..loved it...err dilawar got details about dutta from pandit ji...loved the sweet tasha moment...aww dutta wants naku to call him by his name...poor baby..his naku refusing to call him by his name...aww loved dutta's artistic works on krishna & pandavas...awww dutta notice naku's yellow color on her cheek...aww its like haldi...bappa's approvals...dilawar in Lion's den...enjoyed the sweet update soo much dear...sooo sweeet of you...big teddy hugs from twinky baby...🤗

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