SS~Dutta~a trilogy~ thread 1. Follow the Heart. continued on thread 2 - Page 75

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi hammie, long time no see 😆
Part 19
Arey yaar yeh aadmi dressup horaha hai aur waha naku ki jaan ki ghanti baj rahi hai. Huh! worse baji n AS blissfully staring at the piece of art ? why cant they hear naku,s struggle or screams
Atlast ! naku raises an alarm, yeh ladki chillane se pehle bhi soch rahi hai ya sharma rahi hai ?
Dutta picks up arms instead of paint or brush which actually even for me is to think wa uncomfortable, bechara hammie i doubt if he has even touched the metal for a long time. But this was no time to think of the pros n cons Dutta utho waqt agaya ladai ki, arjun ki tarah iss ka bhi haat khaap raha hai ladne se pehle, ab koi krishna bhi toh nahi hai aas paas isko himmat dene, bhaag milkha bhaag oops i mean dutta bhaag 😃
I thought dutta seeing naku in distress would take dilawar,s guts out pumping all the bullets in, dutt teri, phate muh tere! do do baar miss kiya, ab tu gaya dutta dilawar ki haaton marega.
Chalo atleast baji is here, ab toh dilawar is trapped i thought, "Baji tu andar jaa issko mein dekhlonga" ?? matlab kya hai? yeh kya dekhni ki cheez hai ya maarne ki cheez, koi exhibition lagi hai?? yaar mein toh ab sach mein kisi bhi artist se koi umeed hi nahi rakhu.
woaw sherni naku ko pistol ki zaroorat bhi nahi chahiye, nails hi kaafi hai. with her killer looks n her stance dilawar knew she meant every word.
Even though i didnt like dutta encouraging naku to commit the crime but i gues it had to be done to protect naku from the wily unrepentful old man.
In all this drama baji is the only sensible guy who first protects the household elderly n then speaks some sense. Nahi toh dutta aur naku would be behind bars for abetting n murdering.
Dutta,s divine interaction was worthwhile to note, he is surely troubled at the turn of events. but his mother,s sound moral influence helps him overcome these minor glitches. The heart to heart chat with naku was much needed n his self loathe evaporated. It was beautifully written hammie, i felt it was an ideal way to sort out misunderstanding which unattended would have festered into something big. Naku was very convincing in her argument, her words empowered him which inturn soothed his wounded ego.
Hain? whats with babi, why cant she just sleep in peace. hyper mom😛

Part 20
uff! babi baji se bhi badi nautanki hai re, deva re deva But she is a perfect saas for bhau, she proposes he disposes, he proposes she disposes 😆
Ab why is babi buzzing unnecessarily, naku bhau ke kamre mein uske bed mein ?? if thats indeed the case then babi will surely faint. Wah! baji ka timing mannna padega, has to be the one who stops her midway.
Yeh naku bhi soyi toh bhi kaha soyi hai, dat teri! kya honewala pati hai naku ki, he,s soundly sleeping on the huge bed when naku is crumpled on the floor, ediut 😡. Now babi gas even a bigger reason to cry, her daughter,s bleak future lol..
Satyan savitriji i mean nakushaji adds ghee to the fiesty babi. But its more to do with the social cultural boundaries which sends babi in a tizzy. Luckily for them there is none other to add fuel except ofcourse the sleeping sher.
Hain? naku kis bast ki day dreaming karti hai i fail to understand jab dono ke darmiyan kuch hota bhi nahi lol. Poor naku, like us readers can only imagine.
Ab ek mareez se chutkara mili toh doosra tayyar muh phulake, hammie this dutta looks more like you jab dekho sulking.
How insensitive can he get ? he wakes up in the middle of the night when naku is dozing awkwardly yet he can notice only her beautiful face aur sketching karne ka man kiya ??? WTH?
Ab yeh pukka hammie ki tarah kyu sound kar raha hai? this is what im hearing for so many years, the irresistable urge to create write or whatever. Hmm its the creative person,s itch ?
I wish to know honestly if dutta wants a nurse or a life partner, 😉 what an indecent proposal to make ? abnoxious hai yeh banda. He is such an unromantic rude irritating matlabi painter babu, i guess most creative people are in many ways the same, self obsessed. 😆
Yahi mauka hai bolde naku that you are shit scared of being his slave for the rest of your life, that is what this man is looking for... Ek kaamwali in the garb of garhwali who can carry his paint brush, who can feed him poha day in n out n then who can nurse him every time he decides to fall n damage his body n a pleasant face to stare n moan.
hmm whatever said n done dutta in a maroon kurta i guess is worth all the drama. 😳
Waise he was trying to chance pe dance maro when babi was shedding those tears, but what stops him im wondering. Now why did he stop from the maang bharo act if he was this despo, God! yeh toh sach mein yedha hai. Ab naku,s life is under grave threat, she might have as well landed in a soup.
Hmm waiting to see this krishna radha ki lagaan kab aur kaise hoga, umm yeh seema ma,m last mein kya karne ayi ? 😛


Edited by -bharti- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: afi7861

hey hammie thread reached 100 pages🥳


hi kaka balli . thank for the good wishes.. your great shayri ,and the lovely song you posted.. can I thank you for your keen interest on this thread.. much love hammie

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi hammieemein aa gai...haat mein dard hai ...dutta effect kya😆its aching.well in that case it needs a twist! shall i do the honours?😆
congrats for 100 pgs👏 thanks ,naku ,we did it together..

loved the ud...babi spying on naku ...baji tried to make some false reason ...naku's honesty won all.. well ,dutta lectured her on being truthful..
AS & babi planning lagan ..dutta litery tried to fill her maang.. he tends to go far.. to get what he wants..
naku ke reete rewaj ke wedding ...its a family event ..dutta is in hurry laagi shaadi ki lagaan😆
oh that he is , find out in the next ud..
waiting for love birds wedding ...😳
so am I naku..
seema entry ..kya kaam hai uska
seema ke entry.. you will find out tomm.. in UD.. MUBARAK dena aye hogi.
waiting for ud
tommorrow! will try my utmost.. still working on it
thanks hammiee this forum is worth a visit coz ur part of it😊
naku saach tu ye hai.. thought of leaving kyi baar.. but you all manage to hold my cloak...
hammiee u r fan loves you a lot...
thank you for your continued support and encouragement.. it is pure paisa wassul.in the form of your likes,and great comments..
as always u r amazinggg hammiee
thanks naku for celebrating 100 pgs on our thread.. much love, hammie& thanks for the lovely image.. cute teddy😃

Edited by Hamlet53 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jedy25

hi hamlet hi jedy 😊
superb ud.band ,baaja & baraat naku's demand.dutta obligied..ud sooncongratzzz for 100 unbeaten..we are garetful to you for giving us beautiful stories to relish👏
awww.. ummm, thanks so much for a lovely comment., jedy.. remember.. my readers are the inspiration of my stories, along with tasha of LTL.. Thanks for commenting, much love for your ongoing support.. love hammie..
thanks for the celebratory image..😃


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: FASSBEN


HI Hamlet hi fassben, great to see you😊

Congrats on passing 100 pages on a beautiful SS. The ud was just great love the whole part. Pls ud really soon many thanks for the congrats , can't do 100 ps ,mate. without readers valuable input..
yes aim to UD it tomm.. catch it when you can..
Thanks as always enjoy the rest of the weekend take care
thanks,for your lovely comment and the lovely old english rose image.. much love hammie



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: uwith

hi hamlet hi uvi ,good to see you
awesome ud..dutta was ready to put sindoor..it would have be great scene.😆babi is happy now dutta is irritated with babi's tantrum reete rewaj..naku wants the same follow tradition ...continue soon
thanks so much for enjoying the key points of the ud.. find out in the next ud how events pan out.
thanxs for giving awesome 100 pgs😊 thanks so much for the good wishes for 100 pages,which cannot be possible without readers input .. so i think you for your input.. thanks for the lovely image .. many thanks and much love hammie
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: twinkle-star


such an awesome update dear...enjoyed it sooo much...duttta was in hell shock....woman in white saree is his Naku...Dutta falling off...aww naku lifts his head & rests it on her lap..naku's red paint & tear fall on Dutta's forehead...Dutta whispers his favourite word "dhoka"....baaji helps dutta to get medical attention very quickly....baaji worrying about Dutta& accusing Naku for Dutta's current state...poor naku she is suffering a lot...baaji comforts Damoder...Thankfully Dutta doesn't have any fatal injuries..but his tendons have been torn..so temporary break for his artistic works...overwhelmed by Dutta-baaji's sweet convo...aww dutta didn't get angry on baaji for hiding naku's truth..he understands his friend very well....baaj asking apologies to naku for his rude behaviour.
..awww AS is the sweetest mother...she appoints naku as Dutta's nurse...What knid of punishment is waiting for naku??..but I like this Dutta soo much..he is well composed...soo sweet of him..enjoyed the update soo much dear..its awesome..thanks sooo much for the interesting update hammie lion..big teddy hugs from twinky baby... . ..🤗








helloo twinks, thanks for a mind blowing comment, fun packed and interesting have to say great shots of dutta.. your comment helps to maintain the feeling of real LTL.. thanks for your on going support twinks😃 .. much love hammie


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

nakku wants relegious wedding dutta wanted hurry wedding oops but in husband wife querelle wife wins
hi tammy,partner!😊good to see you.. listen thanks for your 100pgs, comment.. dont forget its for all of us.. well regarding the wedding find out who wins.. will ud tomm.. thanks for reading and commenting ,much love hammie.

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Originally posted by: sona89

Hi Hamlet hi sonaaa! good to see you..
Awesome UD...Dutta is sulking he is in a hurry to get married..Naku is not just his love but muse too ..PUROHITJI 😆& AS can meet to set a date ...i mean wedding date ..UD soon
glad you enjoyed the main points of the ud.. catch the rest of the story tomm.. sona thanks for the love image.. the 100 pgs wishes belong to us, much love hammie
congrats 100congratulations photo: Rose w/BF-Congrats bf-rose1.gif

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Originally posted by: mirage123

hi hamlet hi mirage, good to see you
fab ud..nice convo of dutta baji & babi ...naku & dutta cute moments ..wanting to read more ud soon😊
so pleased you enjoyed the ud , catch the next one tommorrow.. thanks ,mirage for the lovely image.. it for all of us.. much love hammie

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