SS~Dutta~a trilogy~ thread 1. Follow the Heart. continued on thread 2 - Page 32

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hiya Hammie, hope all is well on your end :)

Have finally made my way to your UD

So without delay shall we get right to it?

Out of my hands: Part 7

Wow, Dutta is so completely taken by Naku's beauty. It's like every second he is thinking about it! Meanwhile Nakusha is nervous about the looks she's getting from the folks in his home place. Of course, reasonably, she ponders what they all must be thinking. And though he tries to put her mind at ease, it's a hard feat to accomplish since no matter what you do there will always be people waiting to know...to speculate...and naturally you get awkward in that moment...

LOL DP's not sparing and moment to praise her beauty. He's obsessed. Really, shouldn't this be a scary thought? :P

Nakusha's discomfort from getting attention from men speak much about her especially her morals. But it's good that she also notes like others Dutta's taken to her beauty as well...the superficial element...

His explanation and then suggestion that beauty can go on forever through art was interesting. I tend to agree with that part, you can portray a lot in artwork. But regardless that she inspires his work, I think the man is suffering from tunnel-vision and I hope she can change that. More to her than beauty...

ROFL haha I see she's recognized his obsessed-stalkerish tendencies finally :P

"tu bolna Nakusha.. main sun raha hoon.. pata tu chale tera dahmak mein kya chal raha hai? he urges.

^ This line reminded me of that scene in LTL in his room...where he's asking her to explain as to why she rejected his proposal...and it well worked with the situation here where she questions if he only sees what catches the eye...

I think I'd find him very frustrating to work with...with the views he has...I'd probably be sitting there arguing LOL and I absolutely love that Naku is pointing out how unrealistic and superficial his thinking is...

" I choose summer than autumn.. I warm to sunny skies rather than grey ones, I like the pulsating beat of the heart , rather than the hoary breath of dying..."

^ I just recently wrote something on the view of autumn/fall I think your Dutta needs to read it...but I can't share it yet...as for Dutta he's a stubborn mule I just hope Nakusha can do something about it eventually!

So she meets his father, I found this scene very pleasant. His questioning the reason behind her name, her explaining matter-of-factly why she got it, and him dismissing such nonsense by stating what daughter's mean for them...

Damodar's concern for Naku's image is touching and rather true too. And then baam he asks if there is more to Dutta's relationship than work...gosh he works fast huh...and Dutta is pleased about the approval. Haha their union is now pre-approved??

Ohhh this is too good...already testing the possible future DIL's cooking skills! And Dutta's taking the opportunity to sketch her in the act...

There is a tiny bit of domesticity to this scene...even though it's not your typical scene...I rather enjoyed it. And their shared moment after was quite something. Almost as though a lot happened in that moment when on surface nothing at all...

So she passed the cooking test and even earned herself a nickname :P Well, now that she's welcomed into his home by both father and son...let's see how long before she's taking up residence in his heart ..

Thanks for the wonderful UD. Enjoyed it a lot. Do continue soon.

Take care, Hammie! Cheers!!!

Edited by -daya- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi hamletwonderful udenjoyed the whole atmosphere at dutta's homeloving dad, home & darwing😊ud soon
Edited by dilse14 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi hammie what a homely update ! but before that we have some clash of views between tasha. what really amazes me in this story is that dutta is so beauty conscious 😆i mean beauty lover maybe its because he is an artist and wishes everything to be eye pleasing and perfect ..he is a dreamer whereas nakku is the more practical one.
so he takes her home to meet his father. i loved the father son scene where damodar comes straight to the point and asks him if he is interested in marrying her 😳 good to see her passing both the look test and the cooking test 😉i am repeating myself but this dutta is crazy about her..sketching her even when she is cooking 😆 damodar calling her nakku was sweet ..great to see things moving in the right direction and thanks for not including seema in this update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi hamletsuperb ud...sasur is happy of dutta's choice...nothing formal from their end...liking is there...let see how it evolves...pls ud soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

awww such a mind blowing update dear...enjoyed it sooo much....awww lovely descriptions & wonderful job hammie lion......such a sweet treat to all of us...sweeetest hammie lion...thank you sooo much dear...



aww dutta pours out his heart on a sketch paper & captures naku's beauty on his artistic way.....awww he is completely fallen by naku's green doe eyes & her external beauty...aww dutta wants to feel Naku's beautiful face by his hands....hahaha as usual Baaji pulling dutta's legs....baaji is right....Dutta should try see beyond the face value...aww dutta too accepts that naku is a good girl with good personality.....haha loved baaji's nautanki soo much....naughty friend...Dutta just wants to create naku's sculpture...
.haha loved Baaji's mirror talk.....baaji's competition with naku....haha baaji is so cute...aww loved the way you put Dutta-baaji's deepness of friendship.....awee dutta loved Naku's cooking item...naku unknowingly express his affection towards him...naku's green eyes have made quite an impact on Dutta...awee naku looks Her sketches & her mouth drops...and now dutta wants to experiment her beauty with another medium ...aww they working together..loved the descriptions hammie lion..wowwieee.its soo great...errr seema ma'am agaya...ewww she hurts naku...awww loved Dutta's possessiveness over his personal creations ..naku seems hurt by Seema's rudeness..awee loved the way of dutta's consolation ...awee dutta sharing his past with naku....aww I guess their relationship become little stronger .....awww loved the jeep ride.....& your lovely update hammie lion...enjoyed it soo much....really great....hats off to you.....thank you thank you thank you my sweeetest hammie lion....sweeetie pie lion..🤗.baby will come back soo with the next comment...big teddy hugs from















































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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi hammieepls ud😊

pls ud
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-

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Hi Hammie, 😊 hi bart 😊 good to see you.
Dutta n naku getting to know each other better, these long drives giving the space n opportunity.. Dutta,s fixation with naku,s beauty is slightly unnerving naku. Me too wondering if dutta,s obsession with naku,s beauty is more to do with his passion for art sculpture than anything else, he,s very confusing well you know dutta.. he himself doesn't know poor donkey..😆
When he wants to know what naku thinks about his art n his capabilities, one feels he values her opinion which is rather unusual for a man who gives a damn to other,s opinion if himself. So naku is special to him not just as a subject to his project but much much more.
i think he values her interest in the topic he enjoys..
Beta toh beta pun baap usse bhi ek step aage nikla. 😃 direct shaadi ki baat ? ladki dekhi nahi ghanti bajgayi, but i gues most parents are this way. Aur yeh reluctant looking gadha is inwardly pleased with his dad,s approval of naku. mere samajh mein nahi aa raha ki yeh apni baap ko ladki dikhane aya hai ya ladki ko apna gali aur ghar?? 😆..well it was one thing leading to another.. but damoder too notices she's a pretty girl
Hain? naku transported straight to kitchen, khana pakaoing, atleast this is better than bheja pakaoing. Ab toh there is no room left for second thoughts, as to naku,s reason for coming here. Ab mohalle wale jo bhi soch rahe galat thodi na soch rahe hai 😉
Wah kya scene hai, dutta the earning male, naku the domesticated female n damodar the wise elderly, all seem a happy family already, bas ek pota poti ki kami hai 😆now now... hold your horses bart.. but its nice to predict.
But what follows is beyond my imagination, i mean just the simple task of cooking was given a beautiful artistic expression. Dutta,s keen eyes n deft hands working on while naku goes on about the simple chore of chopping veggies, rolling rotis cooking for two hungry men. Brilliant writing once again hammie, even thou im no connoisseur of art by any stretch of imagination, i certainly got to understand an artist,s perspective of things 👍🏼
this comment of yours bart has carried me to the heavens.. thanku..😛
But i didnt expect cooking to be part of the naku,s deal.. 😛 Naku ki beauty immortalised hoga ki nahi pata but roti banana toh defo immortalised hogayi, no doubts whatsoever hammie😃 glad you enjoyed my simplistic presentation..
Thank you for a creative update, ab fatafat annots aur update kardo 😃
listen thanks for your ongoing support for both my threads.. iam humbled.. thanks for accepting late annotations and equally updates.. but you know i dont stick to schdules.. used to .. i wonder what made me? much love ,as ever yours hammie.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mirage123

hi hamlet hi mirage😊.. yes its me found my way back
fab ud...dutta took her home...meeting dad was good...cooking & moments were cute...pls ud fast😊

thanks for reading and appreciating the update.. got your reminder messages too.. makes me feel good.. much love ,as ever yours hammie.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: uwith

hi hamlet hi uvi😊 good to see
awesome ud...was waiting for long...dutta took naku home...damodar liked her...naku thinks he is fasinated by her beauty...he is artist he is inspired by her...with time it will move beyond it...waiting to know...ud soon

hi naila
thanks for appreciating the update.. loved your comments and the lovely image, much love ,as ever yours hammie.

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