Daya!!!
Hugzzz🤗
Okay somebody told me, you left the forum or something…..is it? Here I can see a brand new SS, and still wondering about your stay on the forum….height of stupidity.😆 Anyways, lets come to the SS. Interesting, in fact intriguing is the word. I'm absolutely in love with the fact that the concept of "reviving old flames" this time has a flake of suspense. So, full marks on conceptualization👏. I don't know, how you'd planned your story and whether this whole anonymous messenger element will be a parallel plot, a sub plot, or just a cupid….whatever, it certainly garners attention for your write up, and I'm quite sure however it shapes up, it's not getting an abrupt ending (always have been more confident about the ff writers than the cvs😆). The whole naku jagtap bond is just so heart warming. As a character I've always been very fond of Jagtap. Talking about this, I would like to mention one more thing that I quite liked, that though this SS has nothing to do with the screened show, still the characters shares the bond quite similar to the show, like naku and jagtap, or dutta and baaji. I know once declared that the SS and the show holds no similarity the expectation to get the equations between characters same as show is unfair to you, and I should be prepared to witness something totally oppposite, for instance dutta may not be at loggers head with jagtap, and in fact I'm looking forward to such novel developments. And I quiet liked the fact that nakusha has got adoptive parents (I guess that's the correct term😆)…….it's easy to explain their absolutely okay approach on nakusha being an unmarried mother….and I loved the firm tone of jagtap while mentioning it to baaji…the man clearly doesn't wants any sympathy for nakusha, or ashamed of her single mother status.
Humm….. So,Mr. patil is a man of flings impressive, and a detective, which means intelligent😲 now I can say this SS has nothing to do with the show😆. Just kidding, you know I liked the concept, well daya I must compliment you for all those work moments of baaji, (the way he was observing the surroundings, for example) and dutta ,though he hasn't started working yet and whatever work he has done yet, no doubt consists brilliant calculation, but still it's more of *ahem ahem* personal☺️😆…Seriously, you have hooked me up like anything…..and what I find amazing is the pace of the story, it's gonna be short, so everything has to be point blank,😉 there's only this one chapter dedicated to the establishment of the story, charcterters and their past (I suppose)..still it never came to be as a rushed chapter…..it is so steady and has a constant flow..I loved this quality the most.
Oh! Daya do update soon, …………..I'm eagerly waiting.
P.S. I promise I won't force you to make this SS longer.😆
P.P.S ……..Is the guy sending her the letters is going have a name of Sudershan, suresh, worst deegu…more than worst any of shristi's playschool mate😆
