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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: afzal7861

Yeh jaga meri hai haha hammie nice to see on time 😊

ohhhaaa loved teri line.. balli! nice oneee.😆
hi hammie awesome update 👏 dutta and his family moved to they new home thanks you happy..
sab bahut khush tha naye ghar mein love baji and roops nok jhok nakusha in trouble par dutta ne sari pareshani dur kar di acha sabac sekaya morey ko love the part dutta was to good dutta ki kali gori ab dutta ke saath PN mein rahe gi aane jaane ka milan milane ka janjat he khatme wow maza aye ga love the last part hammie bahut se jagah par LTLki yaad taza ho ge..so pleased to read your comments.. haan mujhe bhi yaad aya LTL 1..

hammie zabardast ud amazing writing aur yeh mere badam ka kamal nahi hai yeh toh sirf aur sirf tumhara kamal hai
umeed karta hoon ke agaly week bhi tum time pay ud post karo ge
waiting for next
OHHH for sure badam ka asar hai.. iam eating loads.. my brain is getting over heated.. ohhhmera liya flowers bhi.. rosesss aur woh bhi lal!.. thanks to you aaand bhabi ko ek red rose meri tarf se.. love you both... hammie.

hammie
itni achi ud post karne ka liye😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: twinkle-star

Hi Hammiee🤗

hi twinky... and what a fantastic.. colorful feedback.. love it..

Wow👏...really awesome update dear👏👏...Liked it to the core❤️...Yeah He was the local Bhao, beta of all the local woman & very Beau too😉😉😉...Palm raising scene reminded the ltl scene..Finally naku became Liaison officer between Dutta & his old home town😆..Arey Baji😡😡!!! Please give some more time for chit chat😳😳...But you're too cute Baji❤️❤️..SEE our Dutta😡😡... He didn't say any lovely words to Naku😡😡.. But you said "I'm your brother"...Soo cute na...Oh Naku😭😭...Poor girl😭..Our Dutta is a heartless man😡😡 ( No chapels please😳😳)...Oyeee Roops😡 chup kar😡..Nooo cute😡😡...Baji dear❤️!!!! You're right👏...This "cute na" roops doesn't know the discipline😡...Please arrange ek school for this stupid girl😡... I loved dutta's relationship with Roops, being the youngest..

Hammiee🤗..Wow...What a description about Patil niwas👏👏!! Wow ...Woww...👏👏Totally awesome dear..I became speechless...You are an amazing writer Hammiee dear👏👏...Hats off to you👏👏 ...mmm...Oyee Baji😡...control your self...You & your bar talk😆😆...Oh what a description about Dutta 's den...Twinky in a dream land now the bar as a setting had some powerful scenes from LTL1.. . so pleased you liked its coverage.

...Hammie dear!! You described about Dutta's bath too😉😉

dutta had some revelations in his bath.. before JJM section.. some fab shots of Mishal have graced this forum . from time to time.. tammy andyourself, have brought them up forefront again.. aand we never tire of them..

...Your explanation Dutta Bhou's dressing was very awesome...yeah!! Don on Black...Oh poor Naku ..she was in Danger...I like Dutta's concern towards Naku❤️...Morey's entry🤢🤢...wow what a kick from Dutta..Loved it❤️..He he he...This moorey definitely deserved this🤣...I like the last part soo much..because It indicated Dutta's care & concern towards naku...Specially Conversation between Dutta &His Naku...I want to know about Naku's secret... naku is an open book twinky ,she fancies this ex-con.. now don man.. no two ways about it.. ohhh love the shots great... a treat to see them again.. my favored one hi face in the punch aimed at morey.. exclusively Mishal!

Can't wait dear😳😳...Please update soon dear😳😳... Thanks sooo much for your Awesome Update dearie😃😃...

thank you so much twinky for giving such expressive comments.. every one loves them, so keep them coming.. much love, yours hammie..


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: uwith

hi hamlet
hi uvi, great to see you mate!
it was terrific ud...everything abt LTL came back😊PN ,,,dutta in black pathani ,good thing is naku will be with dutta at PN. & she isn't maid ..thanxs for timely ud..regards uvi
iam happy that you enjoyed the UD.. it did bring back what we certainly have not forgotten.. thanks for your comment and he lovely image.. much love hammie.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi hammiee

zabardast ud😊chalo friday aaj friday jaisa lag raha hai ..each & every word was amazing..would be back with comment ..big hug
oyeee ab kal pata nehi kya hoga.. UD abi beech mein hai.. ummhh shhh only bart knows..
hi hammiee
dutta ke kya exit from his poor neighbourhood ..with bag bagage & good wishes of one & all
naku poor soul was sad but dutta made her a messanger to convey their grevience ..dutta bhi mudh mudh kar dekh raha tha..naku ke aaso melted him
well looks like the exodus of the basti walas has began to the subarbans!
entry into patil nivas was amazing u described each & every corner the way PN was in the serial .you took us back & made it photographic ..😊
well i tried.. to focus on memorable scenes, and their settings.. rather most repeated settings..
dutta in his den & his getup as bahu was described to tee ..hammiee u brought all the good memory back ..kaley bhi wapas aa gaya😆
yesss i thought why not .. Kaley ko bhi include karo..
i was just thinking wish naku was in PN too..morey ne saara kaam kar deya..yeh saman kahin nahin jaiga ..right & left morey got wht he deserve ..ganpat ,sethji ,babi shifting to PN was awesome
now i knew that many of us want D/N as pas.. tu his was a reasonable idea..sab ko move kardo!
i think u have kept some difference i liked ur idea naku isn't a maid here & this give a different perspective to the story ..i loved everything abt this chapter
thanks or your approval naku... keepsme going on and on..
as always u r amazinggg hammiee 😊
thanks for your amazing comment naku, much love, yours hammie..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: FASSBEN


HI Hamlet
hi fassben.. great to see you mate
👏 Loved the ud Dutta and his family moved to they new home and were all happy with the place Dutta get a call from naku and hears she is in some trouble loved when he beats morey and the tells her family that they will live with him at the PN. Pls ud the next past soon.

Thank as always It's a joy to read have a lovely long weekend take care
listen mate thanks for your lovely comments.. i am currently working on the next UD.. lets hope i can make it by tomm.. thanks for the image.. much love hammie.


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dilse14

hi hamlet

hi dilse.. good to see you ..

awesome ud glad you enjoyed it..

dutta shifting to PN & now naku will be with him😊

it brought LTL to mind ..thanxs
yes was an interesting one to write too ,i can tell you.. many thanks for reading and commenting.. much love hammie.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

omg hammiee ...
rosieee, iam so happy you warmed to the complete UD not just the ablution section..😆😆
this is wonderful piece of writing ...the highlight surely be the description of PN , each and every corner was covered ..the smallest of things were mentioned ..you certainly deserve an applause for this ..i am sure bharti must be on cloud nine seeing dutta in the shower ..seriously this man is so damn hot even on paper ..i was left speechless ..the whole PN came to life before my eyes

ummhhh its mishal's pics from LTL1 that inspired me a year ago when i was doing Painful Rapture
dutta moving out of his house after seeking blessings of his neighbors and leaving kali gori behind was sad ..although he will take ages to accept his feelings for her but still his looking back at her said it all ..such a kadoos and cute dutta..haan the lovable stubborn mule!

must admit that along with AS , roops is another not one of my fav characters but surprisingly in this ff i kind of like them both and wow hammie you were in full flow , morey also showed up only to be bashed by our new don ..well done ..i am so happy and that is not all , the whole nakku family transported to PN ..that was quick
me to have a soft spot for Roops.. and morey.. .. the crook who brought the two lovers together..
indeed a very dramatic action packed and fast paced update
i like action... although kabhi itna dum nehi diya maina.. must try..
you know what excites me the most about this ff ? the fact that we shall get to see how dutta transforms into dutta bhau especially when nakku is around ...this is something new in this ff ..would love to see how tasha's relationship shapes up in the scenario
kitna thought provoking remark hai tera Rose.. true.. will keep this in mind.. yehra kare ga kiya??
thanks for your great comment Rosie..
still plodding on with the next UD dunno kiya hoga kal?.. haveto relax with your FF.. AND I MEAN UNWIND... MUCH LOVE..hammie.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvMishalRaheja

Wow ! It's just the second time I'm reading your writing , it's supperrbb Miss Hamlet ! 👏
my dearest mishti...
you are so kind mate.. so glad you dipped into the chapter.. time mile tu do read.. at your leisure.


Wish I could write like you 😒..ummh writng ka tu pata nehi.. but I think Mishal/ ltl1 usually.. i find it hard to forget our beautiful serial... don't know when he will return.. I guess we watch this space..
I love your siggys..seee now I can't make them... usually I ask ,warda ,bart , or Daya to make me one..but yours are a treat..you change them after a while .. which gives us a greater variety.. thank you for them.. mate.
And thanks for all the beautiful pics
haan pictures.. tammana ka handiwork work hai.. they extend my work.. Iam so blessed to have such forum friends... woh kiya haina mishti.. I KIND OF DELEGATE.. 😆 or shall i say inspire people to deliver their talents ... 😆
thanks for commenting.. keep coming.. . much love yours, hammie

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mirage123

hi hamlet
hi mirage..great to see you mate

fabbb ud😊the new house is exactly like PN...of LTL..happy he took kali gori along ..😃..next ud soon
iam happy you enjoyed the UD yes it is PN.. dutta ka ghar.. thanks for reading and commenting, much love, yours hammie. thanks for the tulip.😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jedy25

hi hamlet
hi jedy.. great to see you mate..
superb ud! dutta is in at PN ..😊WITH FLY & baji his close friend..i was feeling naku is left behind ...good one you got naku is in PN ..she can be with dutta & dutta is now don..ud soon
so happy that you enjoyed the UD.. thanks for the cute image too.. very nice😊.. much love , your hammie..
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