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Posted: 12 years ago

HI Hamlet

👏 Loved the ud Dutta and his family moved to they new home and were all happy with the place Dutta get a call from naku and hears she is in some trouble loved when he beats morey and the tells her family that they will live with him at the PN. Pls ud the next past soon.

Thank as always It's a joy to read have a lovely long weekend take care


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Posted: 12 years ago

hi hamlet

awesome ud

dutta shifting to PN & now naku will be with him😊

it brought LTL to mind ..thanxs
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg hammiee ...this is wonderful piece of writing ...the highlight surely be the description of PN , each and every corner was covered ..the smallest of things were mentioned ..you certainly deserve an applause for this ..i am sure bharti must be on cloud nine seeing dutta in the shower ..seriously this man is so damn hot even on paper ..i was left speechless ..the whole PN came to life before my eyes

dutta moving out of his house after seeking blessings of his neighbors and leaving kali gori behind was sad ..although he will take ages to accept his feelings for her but still his looking back at her said it all ..such a kadoos and cute dutta

must admit that along with AS , roops is another not one of my fav characters but surprisingly in this ff i kind of like them both and wow hammie you were in full flow , morey also showed up only to be bashed by our new don ..well done ..i am so happy and that is not all , the whole nakku family transported to PN ..that was quick

indeed a very dramatic action packed and fast paced update

you know what excites me the most about this ff ? the fact that we shall get to see how dutta transforms into dutta bhau especially when nakku is around ...this is something new in this ff ..would love to see how tasha's relationship shapes up in the scenario
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow ! It's just the second time I'm reading your writing , it's supperrbb Miss Hamlet ! 👏
Wish I could write like you 😒
And thanks for all the beautiful pics
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hamlet
fabbb ud😊the new house is exactly like PN...of LTL..happy he took kali gori along ..😃..next ud soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hamlet superb ud! dutta is in at PN ..😊WITH FLY & baji his close friend..i was feeling naku is left behind ...good one you got naku is in PN ..she can be with dutta & dutta is now don..ud soon thank you photo: Thank You TY-NLMay2013_zps472cc2fc.png
Edited by jedy25 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi hamlet
like button isn't workingtried & didn't suceed ..i liked the UD ...it was awesome ...dutta from ex-convict ..to a don..with power ..PN ...
morey made the thing easy with his rash behaviour ...naku is on way to PN...how can naku who isn't a maid...glad you thought different will adjust to dutta changed persona...she already got adjusted 😆he trash morey coz of his cult...its awesome can't wait for next UD
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-

Res..

After a Loong time an UD on time 😛 ..
just be glad I done it! kurriye .. ummh masakali!😆..now ye thujhe bhi pata hi ke you no sonam but me kala bandar for sure! haaa hooo!
Hey hammoo
Aise kyun ghoor rahe ho, Maafi mangto rahe hai delay ki 😉, ab kya kare aajkal forum mein lazzy hammie ki nayi bemari hai, was afflicted by it 😆.. Tumko bhi pata chale hum pe kya guzarti hai jab tu nautanki karti hai UD ke liye... 😛..roarrr..me too busy watching master chef.. vikku reminds me so much of mishal its unbelievable

Dutta movin away is the talk of the town, a breakin news in his surroundings, hmm not bad for an exconvict... The crowd assemble to pay their reverence shows all signs of a bhao/don in the making albeit a young dashing one.. 😉
Yaar yeh kya maharashtra mein bhi sirf yellow marigold mala? hmm, the family is glad to leave behind the squalor, why wouldnt any.. Hain? naku is appointed the liasion officer.. Haan, ata pata kya dutta, dil bhi toh deke jaraha hai naku ko lol.., Oh dont worry, naku will take care of all your communications n beyond. Naku quietly making a mental note of all the visible changes around him, suspicious of his new found wealth not daring to question yet, hope she,s not too late. But i enjoy his crisp oneliners, no nonsense talk to her dismissing her fears n worries.. Nevertheless, the pain of moving away from each other was bearing heavy on both, naku cryin inside, "Tu bichdan bichdan kehndi hai ? bichade toh jee na payenge "... 😃..heyyy love that song... bootiful.. dutta the sauve don..difficult to get rid of image.

Huh! the all too familiar sight of PN, majestic n a forbiddable structure.. But what is even more brilliant is your description of it hammie, transported me straight into every nook n corner, a virtual tour, described with accuracy. The living, the decorations, niches n fixtures, the pooja room glowing with the aura of Bappa,s idol invoking a regal splendour... Mindblowing hammoo, you are too good ! bowdown.gif
bart it was difficult UD to do..architectural phares , I felt amiss..it was also paying homage to ummh colors in a way..waise kitchen ke screen,is the same in madhubala, errh noahh i dont watch it fa' does..
But duji enamoured with the bar area, what with the range of the display, baji cant believe his luck, a cute sight the two lol.. Gosh! It doesnt end does it? We have yet to explore dutta,s den, umm.. Now this should be an even more pleasing sight, but the one thing im sorely missing is the tortoise paced naku moving around this place lol... Hain? What does he mean, apni aukad yaad rakhni hai? But why? aukad toh badal gayi, ab toh akad hi akad dutta 😆
well you may say he is a grounded man!..
Hammie Ive no words to describe the beauty of your writing, even thou it was just another shower scene, there was something different to it, him standing under the shower, washing away the memories of a miserly, scarce, bare minimum living conditions he just left behind adding a touch of emotion... Hmm he,s never far from her memory, frequently drawn to her beauty, tu toh gaya re dutta... 😆 ..thujhe pata hai bart. the drip of water was from the first episode of LTL1.. check kerna, there's the auditory sense of a dog barking too, this stayed in my memory.. pane ke bhoond.. ahhh those were the days.. we thought never end..

WOAW! Finally our dutta bhao complete in his fiercesome facelift err makeover with the accessories accentuating his charm.. But wait, when n who had all the time to do the shopping hammoo? 😆
ummh he got a tailor made , lived in ghar.. would be nice.. apne decor requirements bata tu, and decorators do it!
Oye baji door raho, dutta is taken, remember chaiwali, kali gori bastiwali ..Lol.. Chalo bhaiyya nazar utharo koi,..

Yeh lo, think of the devil n here she is.. I mean the angel in dutta,s life 😉 Wah! Kya quick service hai ji, US ki 911 se bhi tez, aur Kya dabang entry maari hai bhao crime scene pe lol.. what ensued is even more filmy, kisne likha hai hammie dialogues apke movie ka? lol.. Pandeyji honge seeti marke 🥳
haaahooo. well you know my fav movies are, agnipati, dabaang 2, and baffi! , DABAAANGG all he way!
Morey shown his place, bechara ka chehra bigadiya dutta n naku packed off lock stock n barrel, well not actually.. She left behind everythg except bappa, to his new abode. Who cares for her opinion when she has a lot of answering to do herself, yeh mein nahi dutta bol raha hai.. LoL Gosh! this is full on don raj... Hmm yeh precap ka suspense kya hai? Either its sups enquiring or blade jeera,😕whatever im still reeling under the quick turn of events in PN n also relishing hammie version of dabang.
ab Ganu ke bagher naku can't function.. where she goes he goes..
Absolute entertaining update hammie, full paisa vasool with a bonus virtual tour of PN.. 👍🏼 Im sure it must have taken a toll on you covering the minute details.. Too good to believe, was amazzing hammie.
Thank you for the friday treat, but apologize once again for the inordinate delay in commenting. Dil pe mat le yaar.. 😳 Waiting for the annotations n the UD n your nautanki.. LoL ..waise tu bahut high maintenance hai!! .. kam kara kara ke mujhe ullu bun diya... buttt let you off for such a brillant comment..dil kush kar diya tu ne... aur haan.. woh vm? you better make one.. i dont mind if you dedicate it to me...🤣.. haaa hoo.. ..
kala bandar..


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

update dutta family leaving people wishing dutta appointed nakku as his informer







finally leaving


roops baaji nok jhok reaching patil niwas as happy with house dutta happy with bathroom getting ready dutta missing nakkunakku call and she is in danger bas... morey good dutta beat him now nakku family will live with them




my sweetttest, tammy... the joy of this thread.. wow Iam rendered speechless , the pictures and the annotations speak for themselves.. on behalf of the readers can I say a big big thank you to you for taking my UD to the next level , sooo good to have you back in full form. the pictures are so inspiring.thanks for your interest and tremendous effort.. my friend..
love you and your creations heaps and loads... hammie.


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Warda.

reserve kar loun? 😳..😡 meri tarf se.. grrr..

i will edit this time chahy jaan hi deni pary uske liye 😆
hehe teri jaan nehin chaiye mujhe its your ummh# comment that I need.
sorry for wasting spots last time you know things never go right with me
chalo me will come back soon ...daikh lena iss time paka jaldi Inshallah
ab you have taken god's name tu , cannot say unholy baat!

edited:
loved the update...it brought so many memories of patil niwas...they place we feel which actually belongs to dutta only.that's so true..
usually when people move out of a place they are sad as they are too attached with the house and surroundings but here it
was other way round not only dutta but AS too was happy that they are leaving...for this im relieved as the house actually didnt hold any happy memories for them...not only she lost her husband there but dutta too didnt hold any pleasent childhood memory ...yes , it was an easy transition.. and of course moving to a better life style did have a contributing factor

As expected dutta was given a a great farewell...and yes its surprising an ex-con treated that way...but there is one goodness in dutta which hides his crime ..his love towards his people and ready to do anything attitude defo makes him one gem of a person.yes you spotted that, hero tu tha na woh..
ohh poor naku in tears koi baat nahi naku long live moray just wait baaby😆
haaa hooo not bad warrie joke!
loved the detail of the whole patil niwas...i was so lost reading it each and every view i wanted to picture it in my mind...his red settee where he used to sit like a king ...his private den which actually gives him the privacy to stay away from the rest of the house...and i know how difficult it would have been to give such a detail...each and every description was so amazingly
pennned..so glad that they were entered there with all the good omens done...kalay hayeee aa gaya woh bhi ..nikama bg😆 haaa haa.
baat sun.. chooiya.. ummh warrie.. thanks for sending me the images.. waise meri patience ke daad dena parage thujhe i had to painstakingly explain to you.. itne dense hai tu [😆]..aache nehi ..thanks.. better not make you angry, phir mera dirty worl kaun kare ga??
OMG now i have too faint ...no not bcoz of the shower scene ...because of dutta in a pathani woh bhi in black color...naku will keep drolling now hehe ummh so will supriya 😆..humm good you like him.. woh emily ko bhi us ka don wala roop pasand hai..
now have to say yeh kali gori aik min us ko settle tu honay day ...but have to say yeh moray has taken the task to make tasha meet..yesss bright one you are right!..
ltl main bhi and here too...haha...wow what a pleasent surprise dutta is taking them home...AS will be pleased too...un ki honay wali bahu khud hi ghar aa gaye hai haha...now naku can happily take charge of the kitchen ..ummh haan kyun nehi.
precap hmm whos it jeera or sups...im sure she ll get a shock knowing naku too living at his place 😆..sups ko bhi bola loon PN mein? hummh..
pls update soon...and annots tooo ...dont skip this week plzz.oyeee chup kar.. ek tu forum se ghayab rehte hai.. pata nehi kahan? uppar se orders..get lost! i'll do it jab mera dil kare ga! bare aye meri aunty!😡
sorry for the short comment running for work now...its 7 am here ...if im back from work before you annot. or idhar power cut na hua tu i will amend it a bit ...which i so badly want to do now😔
wottt? ye kab kiya tune? liar aj tu chotti hai elections ke wajah se.. mujhe sab pata hota hai wardnini.. London mein hoon tu kya.. Lahore ke sare khabir hote hai mujhe!😛... many thanks warrie, for your time and effort, as ever yours hammie.

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