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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jedy25

hi hamlet

superb ud! dutta got a new job...guy jeera is quite bad ...shabir 😡they do have a plan to employ dutta...its upto dutta to make choices...he should meet naku ...congrats & waiting for ud 😊
heyyy jedy.. great to see you mate, hanks for congo .. not mine alone but every one on this thread.. haina? so you liked the UD.. haan dutta has plans to work with them..so read on whenever I ud... ITS VERY DELAYED but busy .. thanks for your comment, much love ,as ever yours hammie.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-

Hello KB 😊 hi bart.. great to see you mate.. yes your lala bandar says thank you for the 50 congrats.. now i need not reiterate but really its a joint effort, its he readers who add the pep and spice on this post..so well done to you too..
Atlast ! someone noticed your kali gori naku mixing work with pleasure.. Wowow her hollow defence n tirade against bob was amazing, lying through the teeth really n so convincingly that Bob ended up apologizing 😆 She,s pretty but much much more talented in ways which she's unaware of
Bob is smart too, he,s noticed how preoccupied she is with excon,s thoughts n how quickly she jumped into accepting the runner,s job for him. What more, she can bend his elbow? now what more one need.. should we say dutta would be delighted hearing this one, being a runner n serving chai n doin sundry errands n eyeing her every few seconds? bechara bade bade sapane dekhraha hai
trueee.. no not at all. makes me wonder if she knows him that well,lagta tu nehin.. aur haan you are right ,naku bhi challo hai.. but bob bhi uska baap hai ummh boss hai..eye for his employees..

lo behold ! She has more in store, narcissism bhii, cock sure dutta,s ex flame seema cant be as beautiful as her ? ok.. here the writers judgement is jaded, ab seema naku se pretty nehi ho sakte To me naku comes across as too naive akin to a hopeless teenager totally lost her senses in her crush for dutta..yes may be so, she needs to get hold of her self before he tells hr to back off.. Its not criminal to be attracted but she,s takin too far too fast.oyeee I can hear what you are saying bart,udher afzal ko jaldi pare hai ke , love karao fatafat.. Just when i thought some sense is dawning on her she,s back to denial mode. Hmm, but its also true, "Jab miya biwi razi kya karega kazi" ?oyeee dutta is as unpredictable as British weather.. damned snow flurries in april.😡 me flying over to you.. get he biggest room in the house ready for me..

Aaw, the mother son duo for once had a chat, luved AS,s words when she authoritatively makes known to him what her thoughts are with regards to his ambitions. Unlike LTL AS who believed in escapism this lady has a voice n an opinion of her own. Gosh! Dutta is tactlessly blunt albeit honest.. maa ke samne seema ki karname sunadiya aur roops ki bachi ko mazaaa araha hai... uski bhao jaise koi salman khan hai ladkiya marne ke liye ? sab yedhe.oyee bol de you don't lust for dutta.. hummh bol me waiting.. hummh baat krti hai unty je.. ja chana bhutra kha , or chicken tandoori mujhe bejha.. my mau open...dutta dewane..

It is noteworthy how Dutta is chiding baji to concentrate on the "maal" instead of bein overwhelmed by the looks of the showroom. He,s single minded in his approach. The receptionist too getting a taste of dutta,s arrogance. The lay-abouts following the sidekick to meet brudder jeera bhai, lol. Hammie this one from jeera was paisa vasool, "gadi ko kaise haat lagata hai jaise ladki ki kamar ho" hummh i do by chance come out with some good bits.. barteee.

It was pure delight comin from you, too good. You have picked their nuances beautifully, goes well with the characterisation. Jeera seems to me more like checkg dutta for his looks n attitude than his abilities. Waise banda hai aise ki ladki kya ladke log bhi phisal jate hai. Lol.. But the confusing part was who interviewed whom? as if jeera was more desperate than dutta. He's convinced that brashness of dutta was more than worth the risk of his egoistic antics ...yess dutta has a sense of aura about him.. eyes linger on him.. one wants to poke him..😆😆😆 haaahooo

But Baji not too eager, wil he be able to put some sense in his friend? Just as i was waiting for the daily bus stop ritual we have a call from chaiwali instead offering him a chaiwala job, wah! Naku too sensing trouble with his new job interview, i didnt realise that obsessive prying was part of her job But she is right, his new job interview seemed more at a barber shop than some automobile showroom lol.. Razor, jeera blade n all..nooerhhh that's wot he thinks gadhera! its her job man to keep a tab on him.

Saree clad Sups? [no impact on dutta here of a choli n sari clad sups unlike LTL 😆] this lady is instead making considerable progress on his mental reform n him finding it easier to open up... a positive sign.. But wil this translate into keeping him from slipping into undesirable ways. Anyway the biggest achievement so far has been his softening towards AS even thou im disappointed he finds these sessions useless, looks like he's doin it only to please naku, no wonder there is little impact.ummh well his behavior should show signs of settling down.. its for his own good, nehi tu phir under jaye ga if he doesn't follow rehab procedure

Thank you hammie for the lively UD, despite your preoccupations you never fail to deliver. Your efforts spread cheer n smiles n is much appreciated as ever. Waiting for the next, Take care 🤗

thank you bart for reading the UD and giving a mind blowing comment.. ummh kala bundar is lazing about these days.. plse bear with my slothfulness.. much love, as always your chooha... hammie.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi hamlet hi sonaaa so good to see you again.. thanks for the roses..
nice ud...naku is worried abt duttas employment issue...she wants him to work in his office😃...jeera is a stupid boss.he is hiring a smart guy...shabir & other jokers of LTL are like crowd ...pls hamlet show them the showroom door😆...waiting for ud congrats 👏
happy that you liked the UD, HAAN JOKERS yeah right! they are for comic relief..😛... thanks for he comment, much love ,as ever yours hammie Number of age in a colorful studio setting with pink roses against a black background Stock Photo - 18291326

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

hey hammie ..sorry for being late

hi rosie... sorry chor .. tu ah to gaye, me happy..
hello tell me one thing is this bob after nakusha just like seema is after dutta ? god can't their employers let them work peacefully ? and what did bob mean by this what? I don't believe this Nakusha! this man is demented who the hell does he think he is? some eye candy for the fair sexes! honestly...of course he is eye candy without any doubt
yes the laagi forum is evidence of that.. her angle mein he is ogled over..
so now nakku wants him to work with her in the office ..good way to keep an eye on him 😉 i wonder what will bob do then ..lol..dutta wants to make quick bucks and that is not possible by working in a garage or the show room 😔..but like the way baaji handles not only dutta but also his family ..he is a true friend
haan dutta itna bhi yehra nehi.. rokra he likes.. baji yes nice guy.
the mother - son scene was once again emotional , really like the way you have portrayed their strained relationship 👏
i too like writing about it..
so the showroom is owned by none other than jeera , he is a funny guy and our tiger is in no mood to hear nonsense , i am sure jeera must be proud of his new finding , dutta's anger and aggression are perfect for what actually jeera wants him to do
dutta kya samjhe kisi ko... ummh but what he thinks only dutta knows or his baji.. naku ko itne lift nehi de us ne.. abhi ke she can say.. i know you more than you know your self.
kadoos dutta is once again rude with kali gori but glad he realizes it soon and wow baaji even suggests that she likes him ..kya baat hai
hummh he loves her he loves her not? ye tu mujhe bhi nehi pata rosie.. ye baji ko laat parne wali hai . bhao ke.
the session between sups n dutta was so well written , really appreciate the pain u take in making a scene look authentic
thanks Rose for finding them an interesting read.. liten mate thanks for your great comment.. loved it.. much love ,as ever yours hammie.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: emilymine32

hi ham hi imli.😃good to see you shukar hai nazar aye tu..
love the ud thanksek chudail ki chutti oyee ab you were on her case tu packed her off
new entry jeera hope duji doesnot accept the job ummh we'll see wot happens.. naku offering dutta a job aur woh bhi chaiwala..well just what vacancy was available..😆
ham kick start tasha love story plzhainn? you too like afzal want a love story.. itne jaldi.. na jaan ne pheechan.. ayee! wait kar..hummh
thanks for pm n ud precap entry of dalchini tasha ki luv story mein kitne sare villian hai 🤣 haaa hooo tera khatab.. brill!😆.. haan tu dutta koi sharif admi tu nehi jo decent log uske fraands hoon ga...😛
chaal.. ok haan tu thek hai yes yes.. thanks for your lovely comment..😆.. with much peeyar.. as ever yours hammie..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dilse14

hi hamlet hi dilse..😛 great to see you mate..
awesome ud glad you found it so
dutta got a job as salesmanhummh hope he behaves
baji will be with him ohh yes where dutta is there baji has to be.

dutta is entering into crime world ummh lets hope he can use his brain.
naku should help him she wants to lets see if she makes a headway
dutta is mingling with all wrong ppl.. ummhh it appears he is..
ud soon..ummhh Iam sorry missed one this week.. iam hoping there will be one next week.. many thanks for reading and commenting.. much love,as ever yours hammie..
congrats of 50 half century👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey hammie
Atlast! You found your way back, much delighted, also feel the wait for the UD has got only longer..
But you are most welcome in my home, kamra khali hai, Lekin Sabse bada wala lanky ke pass hai.. 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Hammiee🤗

Thank you sooo much for your lovely annots Hammiee ji😊😊😊...Twinkle's Hindi knowledge is very very poor😆😆( Twinkle is a poor bachcha😭😆)...Twinkle only read the English part dear😊...But some Hindi dialogues I can little...Very little bit understand😆.. I think there was 50/50 chance for Hindi & English dialogues in your update😊...The beginning part was fully English..& then some dialogues were in Hindi...But I understood the overall update ji😊...Till now I always Enjoyed your update...Specially your descriptions about the situations & persons(Dutta,Naku,...) were really awesome👏👏...Sometimes they were reminded our old ltl(Specially Dutta-Baji Friendship)...
Thank you so much for your care Hammiee dear🤗...Hope Twinky will understand Hindi very...(not very) 😆😆 soon😆...So update will be on next week...Twinky is waiting for your Update Hamieee ji
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...Can I😃????
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Posted: 12 years ago
our ever dearest tahera,
there is a tha' size gap here.. maa ko pyar dena.. please tell her we all are thinking about her and do pray for her.. missing you badly lardki.. we all love you... from all of us..


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Posted: 12 years ago
Thankyou so much for the wonderful annots😊
Its a good day in deed and it will be the best one when we get an ud from you ...plzz post soon!!!

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