OS~A string of pearls. Wedded Bliss p. 146 ~ 16.3.14

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uwith

@uwith

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Posted: 12 years ago

#431

hi hamlet awesome ud...ganpat is hopeless guy...dutta did the right thing ...getting naku away from hell...thanxs for keeping forum place to be...like this story a lot😊.next ud soon...regards uvi

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#432

Hi hamlet

Loved the ud ,naku came to her house to be with her fly………experience was pathetic…..ganpats drinking habit & he had made life tough for babi..he stole the ring & abusing them..he doesn't contribute anything towards the fly nor financially or emotionally..why doesn't babi take a stand instead of going through domestic violence..

Dutta was right & he got naku home,like a good husband he maintained her dignity by not disclosing the facts

Naku should forget the topic & grab happiness around..hammiee I 'm loving this story it brought back the LTL days with a similar scene 😊

As always ur amazing hammiee.pls ud soon

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FASSBEN

@FASSBEN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#433

HI Hamlet

Thanks for the lovely anno and what can I say but you did It again just love the whole ud. First ganpat takes the Ring from Naku and goes out all night drinking then when he comes back home and has a go at babi and Naku he no good for nothing. Dutta comes just In time and takes her back home this scene reminds me of LTL1.

Thanks as always PLS ud next part really soon

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usha

@ushankitvc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#434

awesum updt...loved it...loved duttas protectiveness and possessiveness...continue sooon...

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sona89

@sona89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#435

Hi hamlet Nice ud...ganpat is awful ...babi is suffering ...coz of him...dutta did the right thing...naku doesn't need to protect ganpat...dutta brought her home was right...pls ud soon

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jedy25

@jedy25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#436

hi hamlet superb ud! dutta has monstter-in law...😡ganpat...good he got naku back home.ud fast

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-bharti-

@-bharti-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#437

Hammie

sorry, you have to putup with latecomers like me with comments of previous updates..

Wedded Bliss -5

Dutta badgering baji for info about naku after being dropped at her parents is super cute, he,s desperate but doesnt want to show. Wheras baji is aware whats bothering his bhao, Yet wants him to speak. Brilliant hammie. I just luv to read about this khadoos pati, but who can only be tolerated by naku lol..

Naku is the epitome of goodness, whether its her inlaws or maika she is only aware of her duties.. Always trying to contribute, to please, to help.. Now how many can we see the likes of her in our daily lives i doubt?

YESS! Ganpat is one species commonly found lol.. He lives upto his selfish, greedy, good for nothing nature. Naku has to shed tears for this leech of a father, huh? Yet its interessting to note how the daring babi too tolerates ths namesake husband for the sake of societal norms or maybe even for some false sense of security.. But some consolation naku has sethji a sweet adorable brother, mature beyond his age. The bro sis bond is cute.

Sad to see how naku quickly concludes with parting her ring as a better option than the mobile given by her husband, lol.. I wonder if women in our society ever feel a sense of belonging, they are constantly doin the balancing act on this double edged sword. According to me their situation more or less is, "na ghar ka na ghat ka " lol

Wow! Dutta atlast takes on kalatai n AS for their illtreatment of his wife, such a raresight lol.. now baji dousing the somewhat heated atmosphere in the house.

Hmm the lovey dovey chat between the two was superb, him teasing her to his heart,s fulfillment n finally admitting his desperation for her..

Goodness gracious, now his lovesick sunken face is too much for baji as well to tolerate, the two heading straight to naku... " Prem rog " should be the new title for this OS, what say hammie? Lol

Wedded Bliss -6

Ganpat,s all nite partying lands him in troubleland.. Its so typical his behaviour also babi,s protective reaction.. very well written hammie. Ganpat flinging naku ofcourse brought back ltl memories, straigtaway.. One can imagine dutta,s rage especially.. But equally stunning was naku,s defense of ganpat. Both justified in their own ways. If Ganpat is alive he has to thank naku once again.

Dutta is torn apart, he can neither see naku hurt nor can he tolerate ganpat. Baji is in a fix tryin hard to diffuse the situation between the two n also in PN. Its surprising to hear naku speak her mind, have to applaud her family values... Except that ganpat doesnt deserve it. Gosh! Dutta,s stern words in the end should send shiver down naku,s spine. But he quickly rests her fears to rest, afterall their love wins.

Thank you hammie for this light, fun reading.. Do continue

Edited by -bharti- - 12 years ago

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#438

psst...me read your latest UD...well I've read them all but this latest one reminded me so much of LTL1 *sigh* it reeled me in completely.

I wanted to slap Naku to knock some sense into her...Ganapat needed a beating...even if he's her father...he can't be abusive and get away with it...that good for nothing loser...and she was standing there as defense for him ...i get its her own misguided thoughts on respect for elders and parents...but as far as who deserves it...ganapat wasn't one of them...and he needed someone to teach him a lesson...Naku is practically spoiling him..and in that sense she can't complain if her father remains good for nothing...when she won't let him suffer the consequences of his actions...and that man himself is just a piss off period. Some father he is.

D's anger of course is justified...though Naku is right to say he doesn't think before he reacts, he doesn't always use the best approach but he always has his reason however twisted they are...and in that sense you have a match made in heaven ha..both of them with their twisted guidance but love each other too so it makes everything so complicated...

Anyway I liked how both Baaji and Dutta sort of keep what happened to themselves and brush it off with the family...those people who think they're not meddling in tasha's lives...when in fact they are...

sheesh...what a family both of them have...! I say the elope to a place far far away! They can take Baaji with them 😆 because there is no other like him...and we all no tasha can't live without him either...!

Anyway...good UD...will wait for ur next!

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mirage123

@mirage123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#439

hi hamlet thanxs for anno & ud...dutta drived to meet his wife & fly...witness ganpats antics...he is good for nothing & abuse women in fly...good lesson dutta caught him...next chapter fast pls😊

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Rose

@stranger2rose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#440

hey hammie what a beautiful update that brought back good old memories of LTL , ganpat as always sucking blood of his wife n daughter..a characterless husband and father who doesn't think twice before abusing his family but now he will ..ha ha ..he better not dare to trouble nakku otherwise dutta will surely strangle his neck without caring if his wife likes it or not ...for a change i agree with dutta , what ganpat was doing with her was unfair, how could he tolerate it as a husband and even as a man but somewhere nakku was also right ..so who should i support ..i don't know ..lol..anyway glad that at least he was sensible enough not to divulge the details to his ever so curious family ..but towards the end why do i feel he is on the verge of blurting out the truth ..oye hoye he winked at his wife ..like it

thanks hammie once again for keeping the forum alive with your superb writing