OS~A string of pearls. Wedded Bliss p. 146 ~ 16.3.14 - Page 46

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nakusha

Hi hamlet

hi naku , tu ah gaye..

Loved the ud ,naku came to her house to be with her fly'''experience was pathetic'..ganpats drinking habit & he had made life tough for babi..he stole the ring & abusing them..he doesn't contribute anything towards the fly nor financially or emotionally..why doesn't babi take a stand instead of going through domestic violence..

well, is there any support for her from some organization,like battered wives?.. for its a tricky area,might have back lash.. still worth exploring.. but I suspect, it would first begin with changing her own mindset, of how much one takes..?

Dutta was right & he got naku home,like a good husband he maintained her dignity by not disclosing the facts

loved this remark of yours.. so true

Naku should forget the topic & grab happiness around..hammiee I 'm loving this story it brought back the LTL days with a similar scene 😊

thanks Naku, pleased to learn that readers can see some affinity between my writing and the real LTL1..

As always ur amazing hammiee.pls ud soon

thanks Naku for your interesting remarks, much love, as yours hammie.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: FASSBEN


HI Hamlet
hi fassben, so good to see you here mate..
Thanks for the lovely anno and what can I say but you did It again just love the whole ud. First ganpat takes the Ring from Naku and goes out all night drinking then when he comes back home and has a go at babi and Naku he no good for nothing. Dutta comes just In time and takes her back home this scene reminds me of LTL1.
thanks,mate, yes there'e no doubt in my mind that through my writing Iam actually reliving magical, mind blowing, dramatic moments of LTL1
Thanks as always PLS ud next part really soon
Thanks mate, especially for the cute mousey image.. love it! keep lookin at it😆... loved your comments , yours hammie


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi hamlet
hi sonaaa.. great to see you .. Iam happy you enjoyed the highlight of the UD.. yes, some things don't change.. ganapat, nasty, selfish.. and babi.. kya hai me can't fathom... thanks for your lovely comment, much love yours ,hammie. love the image..😛 thanks
Nice ud...ganpat is awful ...babi is suffering ...coz of him...dutta did the right thing...naku doesn't need to protect ganpat...dutta brought her home was right...pls ud soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jedy25

hi hamlet
hi jedy, great to see you mate... haaa loved your phrase monster in law.. 😆 thanks for reading and commenting.. much love, yours, hammie. liked the image 😊..
superb ud! dutta has monstter-in law...😡ganpat...good he got naku back home.ud fast

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-

Hammie...helloo bart, great to see you..
sorry, you have to putup with latecomers like me with comments of previous updates.. no the pleasure is entirely mine bart.. in fact let me thank you for being such a committed reader.
Wedded Bliss -5
Dutta badgering baji for info about naku after being dropped at her parents is super cute, he,s desperate but doesnt want to show. Wheras baji is aware whats bothering his bhao, Yet wants him to speak. Brilliant hammie. I just luv to read about this khadoos pati, but who can only be tolerated by naku lol..well the likes of him are around, i have seen plenty, of the sort,where I live.
Naku is the epitome of goodness, whether its her inlaws or maika she is only aware of her duties.. Always trying to contribute, to please, to help.. Now how many can we see the likes of her in our daily lives i doubt? to me she seemed quite incredible , in her somewhat daftness there is great wisdom..
YESS! Ganpat is one species commonly found lol.. He lives upto his selfish, greedy, good for nothing nature. Naku has to shed tears for this leech of a father, huh? Yet its interessting to note how the daring babi too tolerates ths namesake husband for the sake of societal norms or maybe even for some false sense of security.. true , nakusha too mentioned something on the same lines But some consolation naku has sethji a sweet adorable brother, mature beyond his age. The bro sis bond is cute.
Sad to see how naku quickly concludes with parting her ring as a better option than the mobile given by her husband, lol.. I wonder if women in our society ever feel a sense of belonging, they are constantly doin the balancing act on this double edged sword. According to me their situation more or less is, "na ghar ka na ghat ka " lol..for me the basic one is do they belong to themselves.. first.. ownership..
Wow! Dutta atlast takes on kalatai n AS for their illtreatment of his wife, such a raresight lol.. now baji dousing the somewhat heated atmosphere in the house.
Hmm the lovey dovey chat between the two was superb, him teasing her to his heart,s fulfillment n finally admitting his desperation for her..all formula bart.. a bit of his a bit of that..😛
Goodness gracious, now his lovesick sunken face is too much for baji as well to tolerate, the two heading straight to naku... " Prem rog " should be the new title for this OS, what say hammie? Lol
haaahaa, humm.. LOVE SICK.. ? Prem rog.. title kuch bhi ho.. bas dutta or naku hoon aur woh bhi saath saath.. readers demand.. thanks for a great comment bart.. much love, yours hammie..
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Ganpat,s all nite partying lands him in troubleland.. Its so typical his behaviour also babi,s protective reaction.. very well written hammie. Ganpat flinging naku ofcourse brought back ltl memories, straigtaway.. One can imagine dutta,s rage especially.. But equally stunning was naku,s defense of ganpat. Both justified in their own ways. If Ganpat is alive he has to thank naku once again.
Dutta is torn apart, he can neither see naku hurt nor can he tolerate ganpat. Baji is in a fix tryin hard to diffuse the situation between the two n also in PN. Its surprising to hear naku speak her mind, have to applaud her family values... Except that ganpat doesnt deserve it. Gosh! Dutta,s stern words in the end should send shiver down naku,s spine. But he quickly rests her fears to rest, afterall their love wins. another, great critical appreciation, bart, loved it..
Thank you hammie for this light, fun reading.. Do continue listen thanks for your comments.. humm light reading its is , I agree.. makes me wonder.. when I will get over LTL1..?.. much love, yours hammie..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -daya-


hello daya.. good to see you mate
psst...me read your latest UD...well I've read them all but this latest one reminded me so much of LTL1 *sigh* it reeled me in completely.

sigh.. so I take it you miss LTL1..? well me too in the same boat..
I wanted to slap Naku to knock some sense into her...Ganapat needed a beating...even if he's her father...he can't be abusive and get away with it...that good for nothing loser...and she was standing there as defense for him ...i get its her own misguided thoughts on respect for elders and parents...but as far as who deserves it...ganapat wasn't one of them...and he needed someone to teach him a lesson...Naku is practically spoiling him..and in that sense she can't complain if her father remains good for nothing...when she won't let him suffer the consequences of his actions...and that man himself is just a piss off period. Some father he is.
gosh you do sound angered daya.. humm, naku. has this habit of mothering.. little mamma she is.. especially the men folk , baap, bhai, pati..
D's anger of course is justified...though Naku is right to say he doesn't think before he reacts, he doesn't always use the best approach but he always has his reason however twisted they are...and in that sense you have a match made in heaven ha..both of them with their twisted guidance but love each other too so it makes everything so complicated...
well no debate about their compatability, eternal lovers of eternal love story.
Anyway I liked how both Baaji and Dutta sort of keep what happened to themselves and brush it off with the family...those people who think they're not meddling in tasha's lives...when in fact they are...

sheesh...what a family both of them have...! I say the elope to a place far far away! They can take Baaji with them 😆 because there is no other like him...and we all no tasha can't live without him either...! haaa haa , not a bad idea, i shall keep that in mind..

Anyway...good UD...will wait for ur next! thanks for stopping by and giving a great comment daya, thanks, much love, yours hammie.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mirage123

hi hamlet
hi mirage, great to see you mate
thanxs for anno & ud...dutta drived to meet his wife & fly...witness ganpats antics...he is good for nothing & abuse women in fly...good lesson dutta caught him...next chapter fast pls😊
thanks for reading and commenting, yes it seems, ganpat is the dad from hell!.. thanks for the comment and the image.. much love, yours hammie

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dilse14

hi hamlet
hi dilse, great to see you..
awesome ud was waiting for it😊 iam glad you liked it. ganpat is cruel & babi should kick him out dutta did good by bringing naku home pls ud soon ...thanks for reading and giving a lovely comment, love the image as well.. much love, yours hammie.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Warda.

hi hammie 🤗
ah gaye tu neend khul gaye teri late woman!

very beautifully penned part ...brought back ltl memories that too of one of the bestest phase of the show..haan it was a good phase.. waise for me the best phase was when dutta has face off with his dad..bumper! it was music, photography, content sab memorable..ek se bare ke ek scenes..
Ganpat as always showing his nature... if he understands what respect should be given to ghar ki lakshmi as he calls...as a father and husband he is always the most useless person...but still he is blessed to have a daughter like naku who gives him the regard he deserves[acccording to naku]
hain? baroon ko espect dete hain warda.. attitude nehi..
baabi as usual chik chik queen...too loud she is😆...but for her daughter she is always there to stand ...bold and confident i wish every woman has the same courage.i agree chik chik queen.. is sherni.. yaad hai baji calls both mother and daughter shernis.. in an earlier episode of LTL1.. jab suddy ko kitchen mein phante parte hai naku aur babi se...😆

dutta lol kis time par entry mari...poor ganpat could have fainted 😆
i wish ganpat ko aik gumma kar zaroor daita but naku the good daughter has to save him ...good part was she holds respect for his father and want to maintain in front of her husband too...interesting comparison for dutta he did the same with naku without hearing a second word against his mum and sister ;sinister actually😆
hummm yehe tu,.. blood ties thats the issue..no one tolerates parental insults.
the best part was he didnt let anyone in his home make stories about naku's unexpected return... he has integrity .. biwi ke izzat ka masla
waiting to see how the next part turns put...i hope dutta naku leave everythin behind and for some time concentrate on each other they sure deserve quality time together...ummm yes I was wondering when you would come to that.. quality time my foot!
thank you hammie for this wonderful part...waiting eagerly for the next part😊
thanks warrie , for reading and giving a lovely comment , better late then never.. hummh?.. much love, yours hammie..

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Hammie🤗
thank you sooo much for your lovely annotations dear🤗...Liked it a lot...Goldie Twinkie😲!!!!.Awe.🤗..Sooo sweet of you🤗...Thanks a lot😃..Waiting for the update😳😳 ...Please update soon dear😳😳

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