FF: Ishq Wala Love(LAST PART) 10.10.13 pg-136 - Page 93

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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW!! amazing update...I just loved it...I am happy that finally nakusha confessed dutta ...eagerly waiting for ur next update...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi roseawesome ud...naku kidnap...confession...is it heading towards JMM...continue soon.regards uvi😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Kafha na hoona, der se aayi😛😛 But look what have I got for you, my undivided attention😉😛

This update holds a very important place in this ff .It marks the end of the development of the characters, especially the leads. From the very after the establishment of the story, which took the longest time than any of your other works, with each passing installment of the story, dutta and nakusha, grew a bit, changed a bit. Every update familiarized them with a newer side of themselves, and each other, which even they were oblivious about, they experienced a new emotion, which even they didn't new existed within them. They doubted themselves, but at last accepted the changes occurred to them. From, the very beginning, it has been emphasized that dutta and nakusha both wear a rough exterior in order to safeguard their vulnerable side, their true side. To me this story was not only about love, but it was also about that love reviving the lost self of dutta and nakusha , and I feel this update accomplished it. And what is very interesting is that to the whole world they are still the same, but the sense of being in love and accepting it, is a very big achievement for these characters. Of course dilli abhi door hai, they are yet to confess their feelings to each other.Meanwhile supriya, is still the same, too overconfident smell the coffee.

In between, awww...so so so cute. The little girl took my heart away. Very heart warming, how she was playing and her father was keeping an eye on her. Even the previous appearance of this cute little girl was very very special.

Okay I really liked the way this whole nakusha's love hate relationship with God shaped up. This was the very first though reluctantly,was about to enter a temple, and she was kidnapped but isn't the mishap is a blessing in disguise. Great that you made her kidnapped from the footsteps, of temple, I always wanted her to enter a temple,on her own consent.

Oh! Subbu I'm I lub with you officially.😆 No, seriously, she impressed me like anything, she seems to have a very prudent ability to analyze things, people and what not!!! Characters like subbu though don't exactly do something substantial but contribute a lot through their thought process. But tell me when sups notices dutta's concern for nakusha, does she realize that it has something to with love? Or her so called "business sense" has blocked all her senses. And ghanta business sense, she thinks that she can manage a clean transaction with anna? Seriously, even a three year old will guess that paying money is not enough for anna.🤪 Okay now enough wastage of words on worthless people.🥱

Now let me come to my praannath.❤️ The dialogue where he says, that he doesn't have enough time to wait for guards and nakusha needs him, it's been worded brilliantly, it's exactly the way dutta would say it, and it was just the beginning. The brilliance followed. The whole anna v/s dutta sequence was perfect, it reminded me of the show. I really loved how nakusha took an active part and did everything to support dutta, that's what her character is, when it's about her saab, she'll do everything thing possible even taxing her limits. But LOLzzz, anna s men are equally useless as dutta's😆 . Now I feel dutta won because he was without his men.😆

And yippee...party time,🥳 they lost their way. Ab kya hoga...jungle hai, aadhi raat hai😉 *innocent muh*. But once a gadha always a gadha, aise time pe he's thinking to connect to sups. And the end note, lo jee she confessed, lagta hai ab dilli door nahin😉 But awww...her confession was so pure so innocent.,,,,took my heart away.😳

A brilliant short rose, it's a six and ball seedha stadium ke paar. With every line I felt like quoting it in my comment and mentioning brilliant Only complaint, I feel, there's something more that could be done to anna's dialogues. Certainly great, but I believe you can do more, the best is yet to come.

Now, I'm eagerly looking forward to the next installment. But let me warn you, no KMH at least for a little while or else sweetu ke gun mein ek goli abhi baaki hai.😡 Gooli se yaad aaya...I hope he has not forgot his gun at anna's place. Anna's still not dead. Bhagwaan mere suhaag ki raksha karna.😳

Update soon.❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi rose,
What a brilliant update.Actions,emotions and confession.
At start i was waiting for some eye conversation BUT anna spoiled that opportunity.I enjoyed supriya's reaction.She always try to show her authority and strength but at the time of need she was just nervous .And for dutta she is always" madam mashwara muft".
Dutta emotions marvelous.He had the courage to show his concern about naku.Confrontation of anna and dutta was well written.Naku did a good job ,she practically helped dutta .If there would be supriya ,she would do only one thing ,dutta g this dutta g that ,only useless proposals and suggestions .
Anna alive and knew the truth so red light is still on.
And now comes caring dutta .He wanted to spend time with naku but for her sake he wanted to send her ASAP.
TERI NAZAR HAI MERA DIL HAI, KYA KIYA JAYE.
So naku confessed her love 👏
MAIN TUJHE KAL BHI PYAR KRTI THI,MAIN TUJHE AB BHI PYAR KARTI HUN.
Eagerly waiting for next UD.
Big applause for your writing dear.👏



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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Rose🤗
Wow...Awesome update dear...Loved it sooo much...Lots of turning points & twists are in your update dear...Enjoyed reading a lot...Its like watching LTL's Dutta save Naku from Anna's part...Superb writing dear...Both Dutta & Naku were still just a same for out world but within their heart both missed each other badly...Naku missed Duttta soo badly...Errr...As always I hate this Supriya & her selfishness. She was in her own dreamland...Poor Dutta...He worked hard to forget Naku...But didn't forget Naku...I loved his care & concern towards Naku...He didn't want to disturb Naku by his presence...Anyhow he did accept Supriya's request..I loved that cute girl ...Naku couldn't able to forget Dutta...Loved the way you shape up every characters dear...OMG!!!...Anna's men kidnapped Naku...But I love this...Bcos Of your last lines JMM1😉😉...Loved Dutta's frustrations when he heard about the kidnap...He got desperate to save Naku...He even didn't care about his unarmed situation...Its our very own Dutta bhau..Subhu understood Tasha's deep Love...I love this lady now..Awe...Loved whole Anna & Dutta part dear...Its totally superb...Naku brilliantly gave support to Dutta..She'll do anything for him...Awe...Final part was mind blowing dear...Naku confessed her love to Dutta...I can't believe this...Hope It's not Dutta or Naku's dream part...If you spoil our dreams then Aish will give severe punishment to you...Our sweet rose na...Eagerly waiting for JMM1...Please don't spoil our dreams dear..Sooo sweet of you..Thanks sooo much for your fabulous update dear...🤗...





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Posted: 12 years ago
hi roseawesome udaction & confession😊anna got wht he deservehe isn't deadnaku confessed abt her luvwill they come in open & express their luvwaiting UD soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
HI ROSE
Awesome UD naku getting kidnapped by anna dutta goes and save naku
wow yahan toh paa he palat gay naku ne dutta ke samne izhare ishq kar diya 😛 brilliant ud enjoy every bit of it
thank you so much for the ud
waiting for next ud soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hello rosie.. finally made it, would you believe it I am rushed off my feet! preoccupied with the original show now..for sure had something in it for many of us to be still moved by it..
IWL ~ Chapter 31..
Well for starters, I for one have always been interested in action oriented stories. this UD certainly had a good helping of it.
Interestingly enough ,it starts with a lulled resignation from both, whereby they feel their undefined bond,best stay as it is, silent and concealed in the inner recesses of their hearts.
But some stirring to meet each other comes about. Traditional, religious rites always have the might to pull people together, even those that one avoid's meeting.Hence all is set that the two would meet as the occasion required it..
The temple visit was a treat to read. Yet out of the peace and calm, of the ceremony, comes forth the improbable and impossible! a kidnapping occurs.
I would say an opportunity afforded, to Dutta and Naku to reach and realize the extent of their love for each other.
Dutta ,for sure, rises to the occasion and embarks on an intrepid journey to rescue his true love.
Rose, the complete section where , Dutta retrieves , Naku from the clutches of anna is treat to read, brings back memories of LTL1, jungle expeditions! You have captured well the thrill, suspense and danger element.
Enjoyed anna's inclusion, his talk , and most of all his queries aout the relationship of these two..
The action just flowed effortlessly, and kept me totally engaged.
but what an end to the UD.. lost in the jungle.. lost but found each other.. well Naku certainly found some answers, and Dutta too gets a better perspective.Perhaps he will now come clean with her about how he feels.. now what ?
thanks rose for this action packed update.. wonderfully penned.. thanks ,much love hammie.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi rosefab ud...twist in the tale...anna dangerous guy made things easier for dutta & naku...naku admitted she luvs dutta...ud soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Rose.
Awesome update. 👏

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