FF: Ishq Wala Love(LAST PART) 10.10.13 pg-136 - Page 91

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi rose
thanks for anno...liking the rose...😊waiting for ud
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi rosewaiting for next part...thanxs for ANNO😊
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PROMO

Supriya was taken aback slightly by his refusal, in the past he never thought twice before agreeing to come down to Mahabaleshwar, as far as she could make out he always liked to be around the unborn child, now how could his work be more important?

" dutta ji , apka zyada waqt nahin lagega ..bus aadha ghanta." He thought for a while, the puja would get over in half an hour...after attending it he would return to PV and not stay there. He hoped things hadn't worsen between them to such an extent that Nakusha wouldn't tolerate his presence even for thirty minutes!

" puja , shiv mandir mein hai?" shiv mandir was the temple that was nearest to their home and for a moment a thought crossed his mind, would she agree to visit a temple? He rolled his eyes, whatever she would decide.

" ji wahin hai..shaam ko." Supriya was glad that he had agreed upon. He nodded his head and replied," theekh hai main kal paanch (5'o clock) baje seedha mandir pahunch jaunga." With that he disconnected the call. He tilted his head slightly and looked over his shoulder suspiciously, why did he feel that someone was overhearing his conversation. He turned and looked around, there was nobody but still he had this nagging feeling that there was definitely somebody.

Edited by stranger2rose - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Rose🤗
Awesome Promo dear...Loved it...Poor Dutta...Finally accept to come temple.😳😳..Who is overhearing Dutta's convo??..😕😕...I can't wait now Rose dear😳😳...Please update sooon😳😳



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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Rose,

Hmm interesting promo, cant wait to catch up with the update.. But Who,s stalking our stunner, rosie ki gang toh nahi 😆
Im sure you will not update before tuesday, Monday toh Bappa festival hai.. 😉


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Edited by -bharti- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi ,
Thanks for promo ,catchy one .Hoping a good turn.😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi rosenice promo...ud soon😊...thanxs for anno
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi oxy rose
is someone after dutta's life...waiting ud soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
rosie thanks for the promo.. who would dare to eavesdrop around the mighty Dutta? oyee Kaley do your damned duty! .. security breach
Bajiii!
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Nakusha😡...thappar khayegi yeh!!!😡Seriously she is really getting onto my nerves. Girls die to get just a gaze of this man...and she is IGNORING him.😲 Agree that she has got the biggest Prasad from the devta (Imyheart pains like anything while writing this) but then this doesn't mean she has got the right to ignore devta...what the crap...oh! It pains her to hurt him. Rotlu kahin ki!!!🤬 This girl has lost all my sympathies. I gave her the golden opportunity to carry my sweetu's child😔, she dared to hurt him😒, audacious is the word...no maafi for this sin.

Hello rosie dear🤗...how are you.

I just loved this update...it's not like that you haven't written better than this one, you certainly have. Still I found this amazing, most importantly because the tragic element was in right proportion, it wasn't overdone a bit, and by the time I finished reading it, it left with a very content feeling...may be coz dutta took a bath after so many days.😛😆

Okay I was quite impressed with the way you have worded the gloominess that has struck nakusha and the house after dutta left. You know I'm very very very glad that it was nakusha who realized that there's no future of their relationship, but pain and decided to isolate, had it been dutta realizing it and taking measure for aloofness, I would have felt an extreme unease. You know when he called her for the first time, and it has been mentioned that name sahaab flashed on the screen...it reminded me of the scene where she goes upstairs and asks him to edit "dutta" to "sahaab" that was a very cute scene. coming back, So, he yet again brought mangoes for her...excuse me but who is he...aam wala??😆

I'm impressed, you kept your words, subbu not at all annoyed me...if fact this time I felt her presence very soothing and was glad that she came back, and there's someone for nakusha. I loved the sequence where she asks naku to pick up the call as it's from her sahaab, it was just like how mothers stop their children to be mischievous, and when they are all quite, they want them to be naughty, ready to bend their rules for the child's happiness. The sequence where naku broke down was heart touching, and I loved how subbu not once pointed out that she was right, it was nakusha who pointed it out, and that makes subbu sad and not happy, oh! Subbu, I'm falling in love with you.😛😛

Meanwhile, our sups madam seems quite blissful, I don't know why but when she was happy with the tension between naku and dutta, I found her cute.😆

Remember I told you that, I want to tell you, something which I would tell you in this comment...but I'll not tell you now.😈😛 Actually the latest promo gives me feeling that story is reaching climax...so I'll tell that (don't worry it's the praises)to you in my comments for the last chapter.

Now here comes my phavorite sequence, dutta and his sexy body☺️. Thankyou for these small mercies, or else by this time I would have dead with all sups naku subbu drama🥱. Aah! It's dutta who breathes life into me, through CPR. ☺️Okay, now I'll be all serious.I swear 😛 So, I really liked how dutta was not only harassing his body but also his tiny winy brain by trying to analyze what went wrong between him and nakusha...and failed miserably😆. Dutta, when it comes to investing in relationship has always been exemplary but when it comes the handling part, he fumbles. With supriya it was still easy, all he had todo was to get into a cold shell...but with nakusha, it's burning desires, so I quite liked the way you have showed it. With supriya all he had to do was save himself from hurting, he tried doing so by wearing a rough exterior but this time he has to save nakusha as well from getting hurt...oh! Rosie sometimes you just take my heart away with your scribbling!⭐️⭐️! I'm very much impressed, with the development of dutta's character 👏 And omg what do I read, he accepted that after so many years he had found love..wow!!

Bang on rosie,⭐️ you have kept the difference of perspective men and women have on the same issue intact. While dutta is thinking about the present, nakusha being the far sighted one, or say woman, realizes the impact in the long run

Wow...it's raining songs, not that I complain, once again an apt choice, especially the lines " Dono ne kabhi zindagi ke ek mod pet hi paayi, kaisi hai who tanhayi"

he stripped himself off his kurta and threw it on the couch then began punching the sand bagas hard as he could...as far as I know, people take off, or "strip" as you prefer to say their clothes AFTER working out and not before🤣, height desperation rosie, atleast you could have waited till he finishes his punching to make him strip...so besharam. 😛

waiting for the next❤️

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