FF: Ishq Wala Love(LAST PART) 10.10.13 pg-136 - Page 94

Originally posted by: aishwish

Nakusha😡...thappar khayegi yeh!!!😡..thapad se darr nahin lagta aish madam , pyar se lagta hai..Seriously she is really getting onto my nerves. Girls die to get just a gaze of this man...and she is IGNORING him.😲 Agree that she has got the biggest Prasad from the devta (Imyheart pains like anything while writing this..i can understand your plight..seriously not joking ) but then this doesn't mean she has got the right to ignore devta...what the crap.we are selfish girls , got the prasad now devta will follow automatically 😉..oh! It pains her to hurt him. Rotlu kahin ki!..what is rotlu!!🤬 This girl has lost all my sympathies. I gave her the golden opportunity to carry my sweetu's child😔,..its all your fault , why did u give someone else this golden opportunity she dared to hurt him😒, audacious is the word...no maafi for this sin.

Hello rosie dear🤗.hello ji , must say you change colors quicker than kala..how are you. ..wonderful , after going through your blabbering

I just loved this update...it's not like that you haven't written better than this one, you certainly have. Still I found this amazing, most importantly because the tragic element was in right proportion,..thanks i am relieved to know that it wasn't overdone a bit, and by the time I finished reading it, it left with a very content feeling...may be coz dutta took a bath after so many days..in the end at least this much i could do for you , see i am so good .😛😆

Okay I was quite impressed with the way you have worded the gloominess that has struck nakusha and the house after dutta left. You know I'm very very very glad that it was nakusha who realized that there's no future of their relationship, but pain and decided to isolate, had it been dutta realizing it and taking measure for aloofness, I would have felt an extreme unease..agree with u completely . You know when he called her for the first time, and it has been mentioned that name sahaab flashed on the screen...it reminded me of the scene where she goes upstairs and asks him to edit "dutta" to "sahaab" that was a very cute scene...yeah it was coming back, So, he yet again brought mangoes for her...excuse me but who is he...aam wala?..no dil wala?😆

I'm impressed, you kept your words, subbu not at all annoyed me.i told u ..if fact this time I felt her presence very soothing..thanks , subbu will be more than happy to know this and was glad that she came back, and there's someone for nakusha. I loved the sequence where she asks naku to pick up the call as it's from her sahaab, it was just like how mothers stop their children to be mischievous, and when they are all quite, they want them to be naughty, ready to bend their rules for the child's happiness..well said 👏. The sequence where naku broke down was heart touching, and I loved how subbu not once pointed out that she was right,..she is not a mean woman it was nakusha who pointed it out, and that makes subbu sad and not happy, oh! Subbu, I'm falling in love with you.😛😛

Meanwhile, our sups madam seems quite blissful, I don't know why but when she was happy with the tension between naku and dutta, I found her cute...lol.😆

Remember I told you that, I want to tell you, something which I would tell you in this comment...but I'll not tell you now.😈😛 Actually the latest promo gives me feeling that story is reaching climax.yes yes yes..so I'll tell that (don't worry it's the praises)to you in my comments for the last chapterhmm i shall wait , i have no other option.

Now here comes my phavorite sequence, dutta and his sexy body☺️. Thankyou for these small mercies, or else by this time I would have dead with all sups naku subbu drama..i wish i had not included this sexy body part 😡🥱. Aah! It's dutta who breathes life into me, through CPR..keep quiet 🤢. ☺️Okay, now I'll be all serious.I swear 😛 So, I really liked how dutta was not only harassing his body but also his tiny winy brain by trying to analyze what went wrong between him and nakusha...and failed miserably😆. Dutta, when it comes to investing in relationship has always been exemplary but when it comes the handling part, he fumbles. With supriya it was still easy, all he had todo was to get into a cold shell.right , he didn't care much..but with nakusha, it's burning desires, so I quite liked the way you have showed it. With supriya all he had to do was save himself from hurting, he tried doing so by wearing a rough exterior but this time he has to save nakusha as well from getting hurt...oh! Rosie sometimes you just take my heart away with your scribbling!⭐️⭐️!..REALLY 😲..THANKS SO MUCH 🤗 I'm very much impressed, with the development of dutta's character 👏 And omg what do I read, he accepted that after so many years he had found love..wow!!

Bang on rosie,⭐️ you have kept the difference of perspective men and women have on the same issue intact...yes dutta n nakku have gone through a tough time still they think differently , we should understand that While dutta is thinking about the present..he has never been far sighted, nakusha being the far sighted one,..she is a dreamer but still doesn't turn a blind eye to the future...she is quite balanced while dutta is an extremist or say woman, realizes the impact in the long run

Wow...it's raining songs, not that I complain..yup some more to go before this ff comes to an end, once again an apt choice,..thanks u especially the lines " Dono ne kabhi zindagi ke ek mod pet hi paayi, kaisi hai who tanhayi"

he stripped himself off his kurta and threw it on the couch then began punching the sand bagas hard as he could.hello madam , control your wild running mind ..by stripping off his kurta i meant he still had his vest on ...he wasn't topless as you were imagining ..i prefer my man to be decently clothed ..as far as I know, people take off, or "strip" as you prefer to say their clothes AFTER working out and not before..if they have a beautiful body to flaunt then they strip before workout 🤣, height desperation rosie, atleast you could have waited till he finishes his punching to make him strip...so besharam..huh😡. 😛

waiting for the next..thanks as always for your feedback❤️

Originally posted by: aishwish

Kafha na hoona, der se aayi😛😛..this song reminds me of sonee, she also used to sing this one to please me😊 but that doesn't mean i am not khaffa But look what have I got for you, my undivided attention..i want this all the time😉😛

This update holds a very important place in this ff .It marks the end of the development of the characters, especially the leads...right, the story is coming to an end for how long will the characters continue to develop ..by now the characters should be clear in the minds of all , if still there is confusion then I'm sorry i can not help further.From the very after the establishment of the story, which took the longest time than any of your other works..i have handled this plot in depth , covering as many aspects as possible , thanks for noticing , with each passing installment of the story, dutta and nakusha, grew a bit, changed a bit. Every update familiarized them with a newer side of themselves, and each other, which even they were oblivious about, they experienced a new emotion, which even they didn't new existed within them. They doubted themselves, but at last accepted the changes occurred to them. From, the very beginning, it has been emphasized that dutta and nakusha both wear a rough exterior in order to safeguard their vulnerable side, their true side. To me this story was not only about love, but it was also about that love reviving the lost self of dutta and nakusha , and I feel this update accomplished it...yeah tasha rediscovered each other or should i say found each other.And what is very interesting is that to the whole world they are still the same..forget the world, it is full of idiots 😆, but the sense of being in love and accepting it, is a very big achievement for these characters. Of course dilli abhi door hai, they are yet to confess their feelings to each other.Meanwhile supriya, is still the same, too overconfident smell the coffee.

In between, awww...so so so cute. The little girl took my heart away..aw she made a brief appearance still u liked her , thanks . Very heart warming, how she was playing and her father was keeping an eye on her. Even the previous appearance of this cute little girl was very very special...personally i liked that chapter a lot.

Okay I really liked the way this whole nakusha's love hate relationship with God shaped up. This was the very first though reluctantly,was about to enter a temple, and she was kidnapped but isn't the mishap is a blessing in disguise. Great that you made her kidnapped from the footsteps, of temple, I always wanted her to enter a temple,on her own consent..me too.

Oh! Subbu I'm I lub with you officially.😆..thank goodness😳 No, seriously, she impressed me like anything, she seems to have a very prudent ability to analyze things..yup wise woman with sharp eyes, people and what not!!! Characters like subbu though don't exactly do something substantial but contribute a lot through their thought process..no aish, she did contribute to the story quite substantially ..it is an imp cameo. But tell me when sups notices dutta's concern for nakusha, does she realize that it has something to with love?..love ? what is that ? Or her so called "business sense" has blocked all her senses. And ghanta business sense..lol., she thinks that she can manage a clean transaction with anna? Seriously, even a three year old will guess that paying money is not enough for anna..you are so intelligent.🤪 Okay now enough wastage of words on worthless people.🥱

Now let me come to my praannath..uff.❤️ The dialogue where he says, that he doesn't have enough time to wait for guards and nakusha needs him, it's been worded brilliantly,..thank u ji it's exactly the way dutta would say it, and it was just the beginning. The brilliance followed. The whole anna v/s dutta sequence was perfect, it reminded me of the show..you know for me scribbling action scenes is extremely difficult ..i don't know how it turned up but i am glad its over for the time being. I really loved how nakusha took an active part and did everything to support dutta..good for a change you are not cursing this cry baby, that's what her character is, when it's about her saab,..yes , her sahab and your sweetu now praannath she'll do everything thing possible even taxing her limits. But LOLzzz, anna s men are equally useless as dutta's😆 . Now I feel dutta won because he was without his men.😆

And yippee...party time,🥳 they lost their way. Ab kya hoga...jungle hai, aadhi raat hai😉 *innocent muh*..darro mat ..nothing will happen that is not innocent. But once a gadha always a gadha, aise time pe he's thinking to connect to sups...what if he is blamed of forgetting his wife altogether ? dutta and me like to play safe😉 And the end note, lo jee she confessed, lagta hai ab dilli door nahin😉 But awww...her confession was so pure so innocent.,..yup i liked scribbling this part , it was emotional n heart warming,,,took my heart away.😳

A brilliant short rose, it's a six and ball seedha stadium ke paar...lol..thank u so very much , hit a six after a long time and it feels nice.With every line I felt like quoting it in my comment and mentioning brilliant..well you should have Only complaint, I feel, there's something more that could be done to anna's dialogues...maybe you right , but i tried really hard Certainly great, but I believe you can do more, the best is yet to come..no dear, if you don't like this one then be prepared that the up coming one shall not be better than this..in fact it might be a let down , nowadays i am slightly uncomfortable writing dialogues .

Now, I'm eagerly looking forward to the next installment. But let me warn you, no KMH at least for a little while...madam, how long is your little while ?? or else sweetu ke gun mein ek goli abhi baaki hai..oh i am scared 🤣.😡 Gooli se yaad aaya...I hope he has not forgot his gun at anna's place. Anna's still not dead. Bhagwaan mere suhaag ki raksha karna...don't worry your suhaag is in safe hands 😳

Update soon..lets see😉.❤️..thanks so much for sharing your views