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Originally posted by: uwith

hi daya thanxs 😊loved the theme ..pls UD soon with awesome story difficult to wait regards uvi😊

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi daya

thanksss😊loved the new ss yaddon ki baraat ...the story is superb & dutta lost his memory & naku have to not only gain his acceptance but win his luv too ..i feel its a blessing in disguise😆dutta with no memory & she can restart the life on a new note
you are right it is almost a blessing in disguise but can go the dhoka direction too 😉glad you liked the twist...it will be interesting to play this one out...esp since i have no sense of direction on it yet...but i suspect once i get into it will flow some how...

ab toh kuch hindi mein

jaiyeh aap kaha jaienge .yeh forum aap ko dhond he laeege😆
no kidding...😆 I don't doubt this one bit...
i will defo be right back here some way or another

daya missed u so much it did hurt .😊its good to have u & 😊rose back
aww yeah even i missed writing clearly 😆

hamlet thanks for persauding baji 😊

plzzz ud soon
thank you Nakusha..for the continuous support, love, encouragement...and thank you for reading...commenting...much appreciated...will UD as soon as I can ...anyway take care friend...phir milenge chalte chalte

Originally posted by: meriyaar

RES: glad to see you back again
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Edited:
okay so i finally got round to reading it. It is AAMAZINGG!!
although the story is based on what happened in the show your twist has made it reaallyyy interesting. This time you've written in 1st person.. And you've done it soo damn well!! 😊
Can't wait to read the rest of it, but we're gonna have to wait till october for that. . Right?
Take care xoxo

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

glad to see u back

beautiful start

loved it

Originally posted by: FASSBEN

HI Daya

I am glad your back with a new SS the prologue was a beautiful start the story sound like one long road for Nakku and dutta as the story goes on. Can't wait for the next UD.

Originally posted by: tahera57

daya thank u for coming back with another beautiful ss . it's something i always pondered upon what would have happend if he had lost his memory how quickly would he have realised his love for her, and now u have written an ss on it. lovely start.looking forward to the rest.

Originally posted by: -bharti-

Hi daya

Yaadon ki baraat nikali hai aaj dil ki dware, dil ki dware,

sapnon ki shahnai, beete dino ko pukare, dil ki dware...😃 hmm suits ur SS daya.

It was a pleasant surprise to say d least comg from you who had to wind up ur previous ff hurriedly.. Didnt expect u to be back soon, it goes without saying what writer,s itch is really.. 😉

Reading initially it was like, what the ... n wondering where it is all leading to? But the twist in the story after he loses his memory albeit partially is an interesting change from LTL . The prologue is indeed promising n waiting to see how naku/dutta overcome their individual challenges.

Waiting for the next eagerly daya, do continue as soon as u can 😊

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

start and concept memory loss

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

wow daya ..this is amazing ..the way you wrote nakku's feelings was awesome and the twist you gave to the story made it more interesting ..glad this time AS told him the truth that he was married to nakku ..brilliant start 👏

Originally posted by: emilymine32

hi daya

thanks for the ss n missed u

nakus feeling beautifully written

love the twist duttas memory loss

it will be worth waiting to read how dutta will handle the situation

n this time dutta will fall in love wid gori naku