MR AT # 6 | The Adda(Mishal Crazies Reside Here) - Page 82

Originally posted by: aishwish

okay, we were not allowed to post more than one comment in a day and here I posted my comment 5hrs later than my first one and it got accepted how😕

and Subii, good to see you here buddy🤗

****Edit add

Yipee his rank went up🥳and that too with a huge difference🥳🥳

Originally posted by: lovelyme12

aish yaar actually they accept the comments on the basis of a day...iif the day end on for example..3:00 pm ..if we comment at 2:00 pm than it accepts and if we comment at 4pm then it also accept it bcoz the next day start after 3:00pm...thats why your comment is got accepted...ok

Originally posted by: aishwish

Oh! so it works that's way, hmm. Thanks sneha and you and shy😲 hehehe joke accha tha😆

Originally posted by: anirka

Okkk...
so now comes for what I m here... I have spent pretty much time... 😆 ... on this... do try to read this avoiding sleep... however I have got positive reviews from initial reader and reviewer 😉 😆... so pls bear with me... or else (i think i am oldest of u all 😆) keeping atleast difference in our ages... do respect my views... 🤣 ...

So here comes the part...

It was night... but sky was bright...
the stars shining...as heavens divining...

A little girl peeped out of window
only to see ... a young crescent moon...
she was drawn in to its shine...
and its radiance worth swoon...

oh mom... i want to hold this...
to which her mother told this...
my baby... you can't ... its too far...
There is no azar...

after few nights... it grew to gibbous from crescent...
she was smitten... as it was more luminescent...
oh mom... I want to just touch this...
her mom's same reply didn't earn her a bliss...

then it grew to full moon...
but there was a fact she got attuned
How much charming is it... how much she wanted to have it...
the fact... she can't have it... the fact ... she can't touch it

her mother saw her dull face...
due to the fact her daughter had to brace...
O my little darling... that moon is far away...
u can only talk to it... that's only the way...
she gave her a cue...
although it won't reply... but atleast listen to you...

The girl was satisfied... to what her mother replied...

whenever this story recalls... a smile plays on my lips...
I compare you to the moon... my imagination outstrips...
See the similarity... I can't hold you ... I can't touch you...

But I am content to see you... achieving success...
and pray to God... May you always be blessed...

I hope u ppl might not have slept while reading n reached the end... 😆
Thanks for bearing with me...

Me totally tomato red ... Mish Ishhh ... ☺️ **blushing profusely** 😆

Originally posted by: aishwish

okay, we were not allowed to post more than one comment in a day and here I posted my comment 5hrs later than my first one and it got accepted how😕

and Subii, good to see you here buddy🤗

****Edit add

Yipee his rank went up🥳and that too with a huge difference🥳🥳

Originally posted by: anirka

Okkk...
so now comes for what I m here... I have spent pretty much time... 😆 ... on this... do try to read this avoiding sleep... however I have got positive reviews from initial reader and reviewer 😉 😆... so pls bear with me... or else (i think i am oldest of u all 😆) keeping atleast difference in our ages... do respect my views... 🤣 ...

So here comes the part...

It was night... but sky was bright...
the stars shining...as heavens divining...

A little girl peeped out of window
only to see ... a young crescent moon...
she was drawn in to its shine...
and its radiance worth swoon...

oh mom... i want to hold this...
to which her mother told this...
my baby... you can't ... its too far...
There is no azar...

after few nights... it grew to gibbous from crescent...
she was smitten... as it was more luminescent...
oh mom... I want to just touch this...
her mom's same reply didn't earn her a bliss...

then it grew to full moon...
but there was a fact she got attuned
How much charming is it... how much she wanted to have it...
the fact... she can't have it... the fact ... she can't touch it

her mother saw her dull face...
due to the fact her daughter had to brace...
O my little darling... that moon is far away...
u can only talk to it... that's only the way...
she gave her a cue...
although it won't reply... but atleast listen to you...

The girl was satisfied... to what her mother replied...

whenever this story recalls... a smile plays on my lips...
I compare you to the moon... my imagination outstrips...
See the similarity... I can't hold you ... I can't touch you...

But I am content to see you... achieving success...
and pray to God... May you always be blessed...

I hope u ppl might not have slept while reading n reached the end... 😆
Thanks for bearing with me...

Me totally tomato red ... Mish Ishhh ... ☺️ **blushing profusely** 😆

Originally posted by: aishwish

Yipee his rank went up🥳and that too with a huge difference🥳🥳