MR AT # 6 | The Adda(Mishal Crazies Reside Here) - Page 83

Originally posted by: lovelyme12

sacchi me main bahut sharmili hoon thats why ye sab mera mazak udate hain...😊

Originally posted by: Subii

oye madhubala... kaisi hai tu?🤗

i am on and off on this thread.. time nhai milta yaar... 😕

Originally posted by: aishwish

okay, we were not allowed to post more than one comment in a day and here I posted my comment 5hrs later than my first one and it got accepted how😕

and Subii, good to see you here buddy🤗

****Edit add

Yipee his rank went up🥳and that too with a huge difference🥳🥳

Originally posted by: daya0628

i know 51 to 39 ...big jump...now lets get him in top 10 😳

btw hello dear muffins...have not dropped by in a while...exam going on...
i finish tmmrw 😃 and then am all free ...hope you all are well
will be back around laters...take care ...see ya

Originally posted by: Subii

wow! Brillant! Fantastic!

this doesnt seem to be ur first attempt baljit.. u are too good yaar..

mish ke liye poem likhi to achi hi hogi...☺️😍

Originally posted by: sana141994

hey ballit thanks pm pm
love each n every word of poem re
sorry i dont have much time to read other posts
see ya all😳

Originally posted by: ivy_11

What a beautiful poem, Baljit👏
It is so appropriate for us MUFFINS and our daag-less, perfect Chaand, Mishal😍

Edit:Thanks for the pm

balle balle MR's rank gne up... been ages since we've seen a green arrow near his name! hpe it goes mre up next week! bt we need 2 keep commenting in the profile n galleries!

Originally posted by: anirka

Okkk...
so now comes for what I m here... I have spent pretty much time... 😆 ... on this... do try to read this avoiding sleep... however I have got positive reviews from initial reader and reviewer 😉 😆... so pls bear with me... or else (i think i am oldest of u all 😆) keeping atleast difference in our ages... do respect my views... 🤣 ...

So here comes the part...

It was night... but sky was bright...
the stars shining...as heavens divining...

A little girl peeped out of window
only to see ... a young crescent moon...
she was drawn in to its shine...
and its radiance worth swoon...

oh mom... i want to hold this...
to which her mother told this...
my baby... you can't ... its too far...
There is no azar...

after few nights... it grew to gibbous from crescent...
she was smitten... as it was more luminescent...
oh mom... I want to just touch this...
her mom's same reply didn't earn her a bliss...

then it grew to full moon...
but there was a fact she got attuned
How much charming is it... how much she wanted to have it...
the fact... she can't have it... the fact ... she can't touch it

her mother saw her dull face...
due to the fact her daughter had to brace...
O my little darling... that moon is far away...
u can only talk to it... that's only the way...
she gave her a cue...
although it won't reply... but atleast listen to you...

The girl was satisfied... to what her mother replied...

whenever this story recalls... a smile plays on my lips...
I compare you to the moon... my imagination outstrips...
See the similarity... I can't hold you ... I can't touch you...

But I am content to see you... achieving success...
and pray to God... May you always be blessed...

I hope u ppl might not have slept while reading n reached the end... 😆
Thanks for bearing with me...

Me totally tomato red ... Mish Ishhh ... ☺️ **blushing profusely** 😆