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Originally posted by: Suvi7884

Aw he offered to help with the newspapers..imagine baji coming to ur house every morning on a bicycle going trin tring in a red and white hat LMAO
LMAO where did the red and white hat come from?
if it was baaji i know you would wake up early and wait for him to come and go tring tring 😆

She told him her life story =/
kind of ...not all of it...it will be revealed slowly slowly in my style with lots of secrets 😉

LOL Baji found out Naku broke Arohi's BB...ooh meanie he didn't tell her and he's laughing...I would too ROFL
hello baaji hai na ...he cant always be entertainment he needs some too LOL

Aw they took her chain how evil...but chain kisne dii oooh O.o
lol the million dollar question heehee ...u will soon know...

And the guy doesn;t have a girl☺️
u mean baaji ...lol yeah not yet 😛

Baji with his parents are so cute...
yeah they have a good bond...

and he's going to wake up the bimbos with a trumpet ROFL...gooo BAAJI!!
LMAO u noe i honestly thought u wud enjoy this part ROFL...u would probably go help him

but gadha dutta beech mein agaya! He's so eviiil!!! *glares at Dutta*
lol i know u would push Dutta down and tell Baaji lets go wake up the bimbos hai na 😆😛

And ab Naku came...ayye hayyyeee!!!

and lost in her world gadhi comes with the bottle and...TA-DA!!! Dutta sees her!!! Oooh!!

hayyo rabba dutta is so gusse wala...
yup

Arohi's such a snob!
and yup

and now Naku's punishment...becoming Arohi's personal slave...poor girl..but painting rooms is fun..wooo wooo woooshhh!! *splashes paint everywhere* example de rahi thi na :D
lol i like the example LOL u noe why exactly is there wooshing sounds 😆?

and now Dutta's being interested in her...bada aaya! hmph!
she is different...but u will see na where it continues too :P

oh oh oh cliffhanger he might talk to her!! hayye hayye hurry up and update na :) <3
hehe yes maam will update asap...

love you
love you lots 🤗 and thanks for lovely comments 😃

Originally posted by: preety_219

Daya🤗

pooja 🤗

I know i know i am super late naa,am real busy these days,but don't want to stay far behind with the story.So,here i am😃

aww its fine...i am super late to reply 😆

Wow,this looks like mega characters's story ,i am sure its going to take me few chapters to remember every character's name😆,but i guess with the flow of the story i will be definitely able to connect with all of them. LOL yeah even i was like maybe i will chug out a few of them later...but lets see...i kind feel i can use some of them later 😛

So ,Dutta has 3 sis & one bro-Baaji,seems like AS didn't quite believe in family planning😆 lmao so correct...😆Nakku has one bro & one sis,sweet small family ,& since no mother,i guess Nakku is almost like mom for her younger siblings. again so correct 😉

Prolouge seems like Nakku is having strong opinions about the entire PN clan even without meeting them,she is fine about AS & Shriramji,but according to her all their kids are brats ,but Baaji is exception😉 yup, but she will give them a chance too prove her wrong 😛

Ganpat seems like worldly wise person,he loves Nakku & cares a lot about her,that's a welcome change from what we saw in the show.Still here also Nakku is major bread earner,support system for her siblings. yup see i have a good relationship with my dad...even in my other FF naku is besties with her dad 😆 so kind of kept it the same :P

Now,let's see what happens when Nakku meets Patil kids.I am curious to see whether Dutta is serious type personality or happy go lucky.😉

seeing that u have already commented on the others u must've got the answer to ur question ...now i'm heading to next one to reply 😃

Originally posted by: daya0628

Originally posted by: preety_219

Chapter 1 :

The convo. between Ganpat & Nakku was so heart warming,Ganpat caring for his daughter & worried at her doing too many jobs.Nakku seems like aperson who is otherwise very tidy ,but at times little clumsy too.Even this happens with me too sometimes,when in hurry,i always drop things or should i say things don't want to stay in my hands😆
me to ...when i am in a rush i feel i keep doing things wrong 😆 Yup ganapat is a caring loving father in this

But,amidst all their talks ,i think they unknowingly ended up remembering some bad past,& how it changed Nakku as a person,her applying soot also has connection with this past naa. her past i would say is kind of split in two ...lol ...i guess that will be clearer later 😉 I can never imagine Nakku who lived for herself,but looks like past Nakku was carefree person,yet that same past was something which she doesn't want to recollect. Hmm again wen the past is our these will be more clear...I would say she was carefree but she had a reason and again that will be more apparent as her past is revealed ...Was she into some profession where her face was her identity & then later on that same face gave her pain?only u can tell & that too at the right time😉 umm like u said i will reveal at right time 😉😛

Nakku & Baaji ka 1st takkar😆,somehow i was expecting that of all the patils ,Nakku will 1st meet Baaji & they will be friends really soon.Loved the way u potrayed Baaji's character.He is happy,full of life person,he knows how to mould himself as per the surroundings,best is despite being from high class,he has no issues like ego,style,status.I am quite impressed by this Baaji
Yup i have made Baaji a very imp character in this FF ...as i felt in LTL he needed more scope :) and more of a story for him ...him and his own ways

Loved the way baaji made Nakku at ease ,& also became her friend instantly.

Nakku ,on the other hand was quite pleasantly surprised by this Patil,her knew him as good person,but still his warmth made her comfortable.yup he has that magic in him to lighten the mood...LOL at Baaji asking for junk food,seems like my kind of person,i also do the same thing,india jaate hi sabse pehle kuch chatpata khana prefer karti hoon.😆
lol junk food is good 😆

I liked AS & Shriramji,both are nice people,the way they gave respect to Ganpat,introduced their daughters to him says a lot about them.They value india,the culture,the customs,but same cann't be said about Roops & their younger daughter(what's her name😕) Arohi ...but you got that now 😆.These 2 girls are going to be headache for Nakku,i think. kind of yes and no...they wont be too bad...because what i'm going to do next...but certain aspects of character/personality will remain

I also liked how thru thoughts of Shriramji,u gave clear picture of all Patil kids,their likes,dislikes,nature.So Dutta is serious person(expected😆)hehee yup that is wat we like hai na ,hurt in love,but loves his family & has temper😆now this Dutta we love isn't it?😉 yup 😳

I liked the proud Ganpat felt for his daughter ,definitely made patils think of Nakku as some real nice & caring girl.Baaki ka kaam Baaji kar dega naa,apni friend ki taarif toh karega hi naa😆chalo Patils ko apni hone wali ke gun toh pata chal gaye,ab intro hona baaki hai😉

Ganpat knows cooking😲,hayla,this is definitely new😆but,his reason for learning cooking was so damn cute,shart haar gaya tha.It also said how much he missed his wife. lol haha i know i thought this would be a nicce touch as its not something he does but he knows how to ..

Finally the spoit kiddo arrived & that too angry,why do i feel this has some connection with Nakku😕& here comes our hero Dutta😎Looks like both bro-sis definitely harrassed the person who broke her BB,& i am thinking that person is our Nakku😆 yup and now u noe its nakku too and now the spoiled kiddo is here so the game starts soon 😛😉

Ganpat is worried for Nakku,& Baaji picked up on that & like a good friend,he too felt concerned for Nakku.Baaji got to know that nakku has 2 siblings.Finally Nakku is home,but her face said it all,she is real upset.

What must have gone wrong with her? & now when will she meet Dutta😉

thank you pooja for wonderful comments...as always lovve readin them ...always have a smile reading comments...sometimes my parents think what is wrong with me ...lol esp wen am out and in the car and i have my phone on me and read from that ..😆 anyway now am heading to reply to the next one 😃

Originally posted by: preety_219

Daya🤗
Pooja 🤗 hello hello again 😆

I am back again😆,ur story telling really made me so curious that i had to come back today itself for chapter 2,just to see whether my guess about Nakku's hurt is right ,is Dutta the reason for her crying? lol aww i am glad to hear that...lol i am always pulling u in with something it seems last time VM this time story tellingg 😆😆

& i am happy that my guess is right,but felt really terrible for Nakku.Everytime Dutta manages to hurt her purposely or unknwingly,u take any FF,lekin pyaar bhi bahut karega naa😳so i can pardon him temporarily.😉

But,loved the father-daughter bond ,where Nakku shares everything with Ganpat,usually its mother who knows everything about her child,but in here Ganpat is her mom-dad combined.Would love to see how in future this bond remains strong,becaz in later stages when Nakku's truth will be out,she will need her father the most yup i will make sure that i include their relationship every step of the way :) .Btw this brings one more question in my mind -does her siblings know about her soot?or they are also unaware?The thing is so far Arjun & Deeps are not yet brought into pic,so really don't know what sort of personalities are these 2? lol yeah i will bring them in soon ... still trying to decide how and wen ...

Again Baaji & Nakku meeting,if i didn't know that TASHA are made for each other,the story at this moment seems like these 2 have real good chemistry😆.LOL i know right...i thought that too ..but i also cleared that later 😉 But,i know opposites attract,so Baaji will fall for someone who is extremely wild or may be advanturous.😉 exactly 😃 But,still the friendship between Nakku & Baaji is so heart warming,he already can read her face,he cares for her,wishes her well & seeing Nakku work so hard & being independent,he respect her too.

I loved this Nakku who likes to take everyday as it comes,she is not someone who likes to cry for her loss,but rather she prefers to gather herself & again get back to her life.Best is she doesn't feel that by working so hard & getting her bro-sis good education,she is doing some favour to them ,rather she wants them to have the life which she couldn't have,but she doesn't have regrets & neither she wants anything in return,total selfless. yup very self-less which is what makes her character...its only about who is with her...she wants them to bbe good even if it means to sacrifice her ambitions she will do it...

Liked the fact that Baaji is above all this class & status things.No wonder Nakku is still surprised at his over all outlook towards life.

Baaji got to know that Nakku is the reason for Arohi's BB breaking,wait till Nakku finds that her new bosses are cause of her last night's pain.Btw Dutta's way of making her pay for that BB was absolutely wrong,i totally diapprove👎🏼,how can he take her chain,hope he returns her back.

Seems like Nakku shares some emotional bond with that chain,may be its from her mother😕
yup very special chain for her...u will soon know who gave it to her..

Baaji & his dad share almost similar relation to Nakku & Ganpat.So Baaji told him about Nakku & he already liked her without meeting😆little he knows,that very soon ,Nakku will become everyone's favourite including Mr.serious😉

Nakku's entry & everyone's reaction😆but best has to be Nakku's ,slapping her own forehead😛 lol haha i added that bit as i felt her character needed some moments like that slapping own head 😆,hmm...Dutta got surprised & infact started thinking about her😳the entire family sensed something between him & Nakku.Looks like Baaji's mission accomplished😆But,what i liked here is how well Dutta knows Baaji,despite he is sort of loner,but he knew exactly that his brother wants to draw everyone's attention,that means he has some reason.This does say that he loves & cares about all his siblings,only he is little biased for Arohi(finally got her name correct😆)

Why Nakku went defensive,we all know right😉may be she to felt some undefined unexplained pull towards Dutta which made her call him -Saab😳.This word -Saab is so close to our hearts naa,just like Tasha.😍 yup i felt it was perfect place to have her start calling him that...it worked well i think 😳

Very rude of Arohi to behave so badly with Nakku & its so humilating for Nakku to be pointed about her face.Her hurt was natural,but what surprised me was Dutta,how accurately he sensed that apart from hurt there is something else about her face becaz of which Arohi's words pinched her.Abhi se he started noticing her face 😳.Nakku also felt some strong vibes about him,but she heart skipping a beat is not due to fear,but ye toh kuch kuch hota hai😳

So Dutta punished her for her own good,he wanted to avoid more friction between his sis & nakku & that way wanted to spare her from further insult about her face.Waise Dutta dear,kya dhyan se aap nakku ka face dekh rahe the,her eyes & her innocence are what making him think about her.

Interesting without his realisation,he slightly shifted his focus from Arohi to Nakku.He was more concerned about her hurt rather than his sis ka BB😆,ab toh Nakku ko chain jaldi wapas milegi
haha u caught that his focus shifted quick ...i think only u caught that lol...but good going..😉

oh no,u left it at cliffhanger😕 hello it is me...i love to leave at cliff hangers 😆will have to wait to see why Dutta went towards Nakku & what they talk😉 yes i am writing it at the moment or should i say was and kinda stoppedd...start uni tmmrw...so updates will be slower so trying to do this one by tonight will see

thanks for lovely feedback ...loved it...will cya around...take care ..love you lots 🤗

Lots of love🤗🤗🤗

Pooja😊

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