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Originally posted by: sona89

great😊update soon

Originally posted by: prncz

REs😃 Edited:-
LMAO I almost forgot about chking urs and suhanas spots for de-res 😛 😆

thnks for the update n dedication to me ☺️
koi baat nahi lol ..it was done only cuz u begged 😛

i see a lot of daya in nkku sme hw hard wrking n active n a wonderfu; person
yeah u told me that before too..lol i am not trying to make her like me..and i dont really see it ...maybe little bits like me.. but overall am trying to make her fit the story really 😳

hmmm layers of dutta r cmng open slowly so far he is ladofies arohi .hmm gna be fun himm wanting to say yes to arohi n no to nakku ,,,bechara is gnna be trapped😆😆😆
omg i know the day wen he will be caught btwn these two ROFL ..i will make sure it is one interesting scene 😆😆

loved bajji n nakku ice breaker n like the way their freindship is bldg 👍🏼
yay lol i spent sometime on that one...because i wanted certain aspects clear about their friendship ...and yes slowly slowly buildin on it...

intersting time ahead i can see
hmmm for u to read will be fun...me have to write it na 😆😛

nkku full time helping arohi ,,is gnna be painful but she is nt going to complain
mhmm...and i have some plans already for N's relationship with all 😉

i am loving this ff daya thnx n luv ya
i know u are lol that is why u begged for update...and being the devil u noe me as...i stopped exactly where I know u wouldve wanted me to continue 😆😛

love you lots...and thanks for lovely comments...take care.. chal i have suhana's to comment and me getting back to work ...btw i finished the scrpbk...waise i only was able to do 7pgs as i did not have enough pictures to complete all 10 pgs :( ab i still need to do some little little things ...

Originally posted by: suhana19

Reserved ..Will be back later🤗

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Hey Dear Daya🤗
Suhana 🤗 I hope all is well on your side ...

Thanx alot for the wonderful update and PM🤗Awww thnax to Raj for Bugging u for update 🤗Loved the update as always❤️Great yaar ...thank you for reading and commentin...always a good motivator and encourager...Baaji is a sweetheart 😉 So they both are friends ...awesome ...Baaji is always a sweetheart...lol i have only tarnished up his profile in this FF (those were hammies words😆) Haila Naku called Dutta and Arohi ...Riched spolied Brats😆...LOL i know right...i was laughing writing that...wait till they find that out 😆Awww they took her chain awayPooor NAKU ...yup ...i have certain plans with this chain of hers 😛😉

Waise The Introduction meeting of naku to the family was good ...Naku is all in shock ...Awww she still respected Dutta ,,,😳of course ...she knows her place...and she also knows the importance of the job for her... hope he knows that what a gem of person she is 😳...hmm we will see

Argggh arohi and roops are going make her do all the work 😭...
lol i have done a good job with these too ...everyone not liking them...heehee mission accomplished 😛

Can"t wait for the nxt part ,,,u pls take care and update when u can ...
yup can't say when that will be 😆

Phir milenge chalte chalte 😉😆
heehee yup ...phir milenge chalte chalte
take care...love you lots...bye 🤗

Lots of love and hugs

suhana🤗

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

oh meri sharmilee...Hammieee 🤗listen Dayaaa.seems to me I am developing a pathetic habit of being the last dweeb to comment on your FF omg you know it been ages since i've heard anyone use the term dweeb 😆 and you are NOT a dweeb😛..do you think I am attention seeking? either first from the top or first from the bottom ..well so far.. ok chapter 2 eyes that dupe! lol well said ...exactly hammie either way...whenever you come u are first somehow 😆😛 haha ...ab mein bhi aagai to reply to these wonderful comments that had me smiling sach mein 😳

~ jeepers,beepers! Naku biking it"her😃 size"yeah u noe i love biking and i figured why not make her a biker 😆 and yeah needed to clarify that size heehee...,me in a light mood already! wicker basket! I find such style cycles to be so old style yet adorable...i am so the type to be seen on such a bike but no I need to actually buy one as i have grown out of the old ones and i have not gone biking in years 😕 I say ole girl very colonial! deear Baji must be used to the sights of paper boys /girls,but here doing the paper rounds as usa,canda uk thing .. sparked an interest in him..but some thing tells me ,knowing as much as does ,he has a rough idea she is exceptional! loved their complete conversation,lots of good sense .👏 and worth while exchange of ideas; her looking out for her younger siblings her comments about her life's direction changed ,and then mention of tears in her eyes~so despite her high resolution there is some sadness within in her for hersel falmost a sigh! yes to baaji he was not shocked..as he does seem to have this idea she is exceptional...and am glad u liked this convo here...i needed to say her past without saying 😆😆 i will continue to do that often with her past 😛

~my word so she had a fracas with Dutta and his sister Arohi,over the BB,taking her chain awy ?lmao yup..what a way to meet eh...just to spice things up a bit :P now what could be he reason ?is that a penalty for what she did?you got it & i will state it clearly too in next update :P ...but interesting quips follow between Baji and Naku,his probe if she had a BF and her resoding gy negative and asking if he had a GF...very interesting getting chummy moments ;Baji's interesting take on his future girl"some thing different..a relationship that has an air of mystrey very intersting and well put Daya👏 you know when i wrote this part...i remembered your comments from previous chp ...I had already had this convo in mind but i guess ur comments had inspired the outcome to be better and helped to prompt the thinking process for Baaji's bit about his girl 😃 so thnk u

~ loved Dutta's dress sense ,his carriage of himself and his language Mishaaalll!
omg i was so imagining him such clothes and style while writing it...had some fun :P

loved her entry ,her meeting the family and who should she have an eye lock with first ..why Dutta! of course! loved their meeting⭐️ ~~ Ganapat is sure tht his daughter can handle this pair of toffs ,Dutta and his sister Arohi...yup of course they have to meet eye to eye..as the eyes are highlights of tasha 😛 as for handling them ...lets wait and see what i do ...

~the whole BB example is so true people do put thier life's conneting dots on their BB's and when that gets nicked or lost there follows a domino effect chaos,it's as if people have to walk life on a crutch!..so good one Daya!👏
oh i know...i have seen it myself with so many friends lol...so i have used that aspect to kind of tackle how dependent people are on their technological devices 😆

~awww passing his breakfast to his sister how he mummies and daddies her this Gadha!

~the scene of ARohi bullying Nakku was well described ,although she behaved in a manner expected!
yes yes and i have just got a good idea for the next update hehe...
and changing the flavor of scenes a bit now 😛

~ the last section has to be the hight light of the chapter Daya 👏⭐️...Dutta's penalty meted out to Naku;our knowledge of Naku through his perception was superbly described every adjective nd phrase ,for surely she was the Naku we knew and loved from LTL1 days ;and his sotening towards her ...ssooo soo LTL1..thankyou for this beautiful last bit..👏
thank you ...i am glad i am trying to keep the aspects of ltl-1 in some sense ...

~ so will he help her in the moving and decorating
the bit that will continue now will go slightly in diff direction :P
i am planning to post a promo ..as i wont update for a while :P

thanks sharmilee... loved it ..please carry on... xxxhammie thanks for pm...
Thank you for commenting and reading...love reading it...take care ,,love u lots...

phir milenge chalte chalte 😳

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

awesome update dear

poor naku they take her chain

bajji love him so cute

arohi arrogant and so roops

so nakku is ready to do her duty without any question and angry

dutta already thinking about her .

thanks for pm dear
love it
update soon

Originally posted by: daya0628

Daya🤗

I know i know i am super late naa,am real busy these days,but don't want to stay far behind with the story.So,here i am😃

Wow,this looks like mega characters's story ,i am sure its going to take me few chapters to remember every character's name😆,but i guess with the flow of the story i will be definitely able to connect with all of them.

So ,Dutta has 3 sis & one bro-Baaji,seems like AS didn't quite believe in family planning😆Nakku has one bro & one sis,sweet small family ,& since no mother,i guess Nakku is almost like mom for her younger siblings.

Prolouge seems like Nakku is having strong opinions about the entire PN clan even without meeting them,she is fine about AS & Shriramji,but according to her all their kids are brats ,but Baaji is exception😉

Ganpat seems like worldly wise person,he loves Nakku & cares a lot about her,that's a welcome change from what we saw in the show.Still here also Nakku is major bread earner,support system for her siblings.

Now,let's see what happens when Nakku meets Patil kids.I am curious to see whether Dutta is serious type personality or happy go lucky.😉