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Posted: 14 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: mnx12

Nice update,👏Two marriages in a day, surprising, but good. Waiting for the next part😊

dii,It wasn't possible agar aap meri horoscope mein help na karti ,thanks for your comment ,i hope you also like my next update

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Posted: 14 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Subii

superb update chutki! wow they already married.. 😊

I know shaadi kuch jaldi ho gayi but i want to end this FF as soon as possible
dutta as usual khadoos..heheh bechari nakku didnt have a say.. everyone decided for her and she had to accept it..poor her!😕= yeah but now dutta is here na for taking her sides
but i am sure she wud be the happiest wife in the near future..me jealous of nakku
hmmm abut sonali i think she herself planned her elopement with suds and then came back when the wedding was done.. she always wanted to marry suds.. didnt she? kya plan banaya dono ne.. heheh kisi ko shak bhi nai hua.. and they got married tooo..
gud going till now sweetz..
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thanks dii for reading it and your comment🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Ashima_Mishal

Finally...Got time to read the whole thing...One word.AWSOME!😊...U did a beautiful job rubal...choti rocks...👏Do pm me,,,,,,,,,,,,,,...🤗 thanks for reading it and commenting ,mujhe laga tumhe mera FF jhelna padega

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey rubal congratz 4 d ff gurl!!
plsss add me 2 ur pm list :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75

chapter6

During nakku and dutta going to Rajgarh

Dutta's mood was off,he was sitting in the front seat.Nakku was crying in the back seat,whiile Baaji was driving.Dutta saw nakku crying ,through the car mirror.Why the hell she is like a school girl,thought dutta.

Dutta:(looked at nakku)Baaji ,Gaddi rok

Baaji: Par kyun bhau?

Dutta: Ek baar kahi baat samajh nahi aati tujhe,maine kahan Gaddi rok iska matlab tu abhi gaddi rokega

Baaji stooped the car.

Baaji : Haan bhau bata ,kyun rukvayi tune Gaddi?

Dutta:tu bahar nikal ,mujhe nakku se kuch baat karni hai

Baaji: Bhau ,par jo baat karni hai ,wo ghar chal ke kar lena

Dutta: nahi baaji,tu bahar nikal mujhe abhi baat karni hai

Baaji knew dutta was in bad mood so he stepped out of the car.

Dutta:nakku...pause... main jaanta hoon ,jo hua wo accha nahi tha.Par ab yehi sach hai ke tu meri patni hai,aur ab rone se koi fayyada nahi hai.chup ho ja

Nakku didn't replied and tears were falling from her eyes.

Dutta :Nakku main tujhse baat kar raha hoon,ab is sab mein meri kya galti hai

Nakku:Aphi ki toh galti hai, aap hi ne mujhe shaadi ki baat ki,agar hum thoda intezaar kar lete toh sab kich theek hota

Dutta: (in an angry voice)Kya theek hota,tujhe court ne notice bheja tha ,ke teri behen pehle kidnap ho jayi gi aur 2 ghante baad wapas aayegi.Zindagi mein sab kuch hamare hisaab se nahi ho sakta.Aur tu Ro kyun rahi hai ,ab to teri behen bhi wapas aa gayi hai

Nakku: Aap mujhse puch rahe hai main kyu Ro rahi hoon,aapne mujhko meri behen se milne nahi diya.Pata nahi wahan kya ho raha hoga

Dutta :tu andhi hai,dekha nahi wo aadmi usse shaadi ke liye pooch raha tha

Nakku: (on shouts back)Wohi to main bol rahi hoon,wo pooch raha tha aur Rani maa nahi mani hogi,aap mere ghar walon ko nahi jaante

Dutta: o hello,main tere ghar walon ko tujhse zyaada acchi tarah se jaanta hoon,isiliye to tu yahan par hai

Nakku:(confused)Matlab?

Dutta:Matlab yeh ki tera sadhu baap ne...

Nakku:( again angry) Mere pita ji

Dutta:Haan ,tere Pita samajhdaar insaan hai,wo teri behen ki shaadi zaroor kara denge... us bhale insaan se

Nakku:Par mujhe yakeen hai dii nahi manegi,wo aise kisi sadharan se insaan ke saath shaadi ke lliye kabhi nahi manegi

Dutta:teri behen pakka maan jaye gi

Nakku:Aap itne yakeen ke saath kaise bol sakte hai?

Dutta:(smiled little)Kyun ke wo teri tarah yedi nahi hai

Nakku:(confused,she never had heard this word before)Kya nahi hai

Dutta:kuch nahi,apne aanso ponch aur chehre pe hansi laa ,Daayi maa tujhe dekh kar khush hongi

Nakku:Ab daayi maa mujhe dekh kar khush kyun hogi ,wo to gusssa hogi

Dutta:Tu apna Dimaag itna mat chalaya kar

Nakku :Aap ye kya bol rahe hai,mujhe ghar ki yaad aa rahi hai

Dutta:to chal rahe hain na apne ghar

Nakku:Mujhe mere ghar ki yaad aa rahi hai

Suddenly Baaji knoced on the window and said he is coming.

Baaji took his driver's seat ,Nakku was not crying anymore ,dutta also seemed calmed.

Baaji: Main radio on karta hoon,ab apni vahini ka mood bhi theek lag raha hai

Baaji swithched on the radio and this song was plyaing.

Saraswati ye tera ghar hai mera ghar,

nahi nahi ye tera ghar hai mera ghar,

kis ne ghar yeh diya diya hai,

kis ne pakka kiya kiya..(dutta was smilimg)

(Nakku was looking outside the window,trying hard not to look at dutta)

aisa kaise huya huya hai

sab kuch tujhko pata pata

main bhi jaanu tu bhi jaane jaane jaana

Baaji was first enjoying but then felt embarassed because her newly married vahini was also in the car and he thought after that fiasco happened he shouldn't have put the radio on ,So he swithched off the radio.

Dutta glared at Baaji for swithiching off the radio as he was enjoying the song because it fits the situation as a little while nakku was talking about ghar, but baaji didnt noticed.

Dutta: Tune Daayi maa ko bata diya ,meri aur Nakku ki shaadi ke baare mein

Baaji:Haan bhau ,jab aap vahini pe apna gusa nikal rahe the tab bataya maine

Dutta:tujhe kisne kaha ,main ispe chila raha tha

Nakku was listening to conversation carefully.

Baaji:kya bhau main tujhe bachpan se jaanta hoon,choti choti baat par to tu gussa karta hai,aur aaj itna bada ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,chalo chodo,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Nakku:Rajgarh kitni door hai

Baaji: Areh ,vahini ,aap bolti bhi hai ,aacha hai maine aapko kam bolte huye dekha hai.Aap kya pooch rahi thi,wo kya hai aapki volume kuch zayaada hi kam hai

Dutta: (murmmured to himself)Baap pe jayega to kacha hi chaba jayegi,pata nahi main kaise bacha

Baaji: Bhau tune kuch kaha kya?

Dutta: woh bolti hai, tujhe sunayi nahi deta.Main bola hi nahi to tujhe kya sunai de raha hai

Nakku:(a little bit louder) maine poocha Rajgarh kitni door hai?

Baaji: are Rajgarh,bas hum 15 minute mein ghar pahunchne hi waale hai

Nakku was getting nervous,because dutta's daayi maa seemed to be very nice lady but again she was expecting sonali dii as her Daughter in law,Hey bhagwaan ab kya hoga nakku said in her heart.They reached The patil Niwaas ,it was huge ,more bigger than Raj Mahal .Raj Mahal was alike a old Mahal's but this Mansion was looking new like not so old ,There were so many cars ,the garden was so beatifull.Nakusha was feeling good entring the Patil niwas.

They stepped out from the car.Daayi maa was standing at the door with pooja thaal.She did aarti and asked the couple to enter .They both take blessings from Daayi maa

Daayi maa:Dutta aaj tune mere sapna poora diya,kitni sundar bahu laya hai is ghar mein,hum bohut khush hai.

Dutta:Aap khush hai to main khush hoon ,Daayi maa main abhi thodi der mein mumbai jaa raha hoon ,madhu ko recieve karne ,kal uske saath aa jaon ga.

Daayi maa: yeh kya bol raha dutta ,abhi bahu ghar aayi hai aur tu jaane ki baat kar raha hai

Baaji: haan bhau madhu bacchi nahi hai ,wahan akeli rehti hai aur agar aapko itni hi chinta hai to main chala jaata hoon,vahini aap kuch bolo na bhau ko

Nakusha was looking at dutta.

Dutta: Aap sab ,sab kuch theek hone ka natak band kijiye,aap jante hai yeh shaadi kaise huyi hai.Kal ek important meeting hai ,uski tayyari karni hai ,main kal madhu ke saath hi aaon ga.

Dutta left the Patil Niwas.

Baaji:(to make nakku feel comfortable)vahini chodiye bhau ki to aaddat aise hi sadda hua mooh lekar rehne ki,aaye main aapko poora ghar dikhata hoon

Daayi maa:Baaji ,kitni baar bola hai aise shabd mat nikala kar.Aur nakku thaki hogi pehle mujhe uska kamra dikhane de,thoda araam kar legi uske baaad ghar dikhana.Aayo nakku

Daayi took nakku with her in a big room that was devided into two parts.In first part there was sofa and near it a big balcony.In the 2 part ,there was a bed and a door to bathroom.

Daayi maa:Nakush ia almaarih mein hamne hamari hone waali bahu ke liye jewellry aur kuch kapde rakh hai ,tumhe jo pasand hai wo fresh hokar pehenlo ,main tab tak tumhara khana lagati hoon.Daayi maa left the room ,nakku was surprised thats whats haapening with her.

In Raj Mahal

Raja sahib:toh sudarshan ji ,kya karobaar hai aapka

Sudarshan:ji ,meri apni powder ki factory hai,usi maamle mein yahan aaya tha

Rani maa: sach agar aaaj aap nahi hote to pata nahi kya hota meri beti ka

Dadi maa:Areh tum log use arram karne doge ya nahi

Raja Sahib: are haan damaad ji cahliye main aapko aapka kamra dikhata hoon.

Now sonali and sudarshan were alone in their room.

Sonali:Have to say it,tum boore actor nahi ho

Suds:main thodi der ke liye dar gaya tha

Sonali: Main to nahi,mujhe to yakeen tha ,aisa hi hoga but yeh nahi pata tha ke nakku ki shaadi us dutta se hogi

Suds:tumhara plan accha tha

Sonali:accha to tha lekin what to do ,i m feeling bad for nakku,wo to kabhi kuch bolti hi nahi hai

Suds:tumne khhud hi to bola tum nakku ko pasand nahi karti

Sonali: Haan main use pasand nahi karti par pata nahi woh kaisi hogi mujhe darr lag raha hai,maine suna hai,dutta bada gusse wala insaan hai

Suds:chodo in sab ko baaton ko aur yeh batao,mumbai wapas kab chalna hai

Sonali:kuch din ruk kar chalte hai

Suds:exactly kitne din?

Sonali:dont know,2 ,3 din ke baad

Raja Sahib's room

Raja Sahib: kya hua, kya soch rahi ho?

Rani maa:nakku ke baare mein,uski shaadi jis tara se huyi...

Raji Sahib:chinta mat karo,Dutta accha insaaan hai,wo nakku ka khyaal rakhega

Rani maa:Accha insaan hai,dekha nahi aapne kaise baat kar raha tha

Raja Sahib:dekha tha maine,par uska gussa jayaz hai.Pehle to sonali thi aur wo nakku se shaadi karna chahte tha lekin bina duniya ko bataye,badnaami ki wajah se.Aur maine aisa nahi hone diya.

Rani maa: maine nakku ko bola pahunch kar call karne ke liye

Raja Sahib:kyun ,shaadi ke baad bhi apna hukum uspe chalao gi

Rani maa:nahi ,bas yeh jaan ne ke liye wo wohan theek ho.pata nahi kaisa ghar hoga dutta ka,kaise log honge...

Raja Sahib: Tumhe kya lagta dutta nakku ko pad phere ki rasam ke liye yahan aane dega

Rani maa:uske savbhaav se toh nahi lagta

Raja Sahib:agar kal nahi aayde toh main khud dutta se baat karunga

Rani maa:ji ,sudarshan bhi accha lagta hai

Raja sahib:accha hai ,isiliye toh sonali ke saath shaadi ki usne

hmmm.

soory guys iise zyaada naho likha,didnt got time

hope you guys enjoy it

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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
Reserved😉will be back later
Edited😃
Thanx alot for the wonderful update and PM🤗loved the update ...😉
Wow so dutta trying to pacify naku😆,,,,,that was really sweet ...But when started talking about naku"s dad ...naku went into sherni mood and dutta went quite😆 awesome ...
Baaji is so sweet and cute 😉...love him...
Waise iam lil confuse here😆 was Dutta in sonali and suds plan kya ?...did he help them?...
or it was just suds and sonali"s plan all along😉...sorry for my crazy????😆...
Dayi maa was happy to see naku...and poor naku confused soul😆...
what 😲gadha left his new bride home ...i hope naku and madhu gets along😉
can"t wait for there romance to begin ..waitin for the nxt part🤗pls long one if u can😳
Love and hugs
suhana🤗
Edited by suhana19 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
thanx for update carry on thanx again lovely update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
singing monster..you are going way to fast😆
me need to catch up so many
REs😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
Rubal..a really nice ff
Oh poor Naku her mother dislikes her...and just because of a dosh in a kundli?
Ooh Sonali kidnapped but it was all a natak! And TaSha married!!
Daayi maa liked Naku na...ooh thats good
Im glad Dutta wasnt angry at her that much and tried to samjhao Naku properly
And Baji with his nautanki hayyye
Dutta just left? :O haww ganda
But Madhu's coming..I hope she'll be like a friend to Naku :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
Nice, interesting :)
So as predicted it was sonali n sudu plan n My Dutta tho clean !!! hehehehe
Wooha he left her n went to pick madhu!!! yahan be gadha!!!
Thanks for the update, will wait for sunday special with a long update :p

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