FF:Mehrbaan saayein(chapter15,,the end,,,page37)

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mnx12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Very nice update👏👏, thanks, waiting for next part.😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

thanks for PM please start tasha romance soon can't wait to see them romancing with eachother and their SR.your daily updates r wonderful please make them more longer.keeep up wlth the good work.update soon.👍🏼

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aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

great part...sonali n suds made the drama of kidnapping...their intension is successful too

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

great update rubal
like it
so dutta is good with naku in car but leaves her alone after coming home...sadhu kahi ka
naku is violent great love that
baaji like always cutie pie

thanks for pm

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Posted: 14 years ago

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chapter7

After the day nakku had her dinner with daayi maa,actually she was surprised that in this house everything was normal ,daayi maa didn't reacht badly.Dutta had left for Mumbai.In Raj Mahal nakku's parents were worried for her because nakku hadn't called till yet.Sonali and Sudarshan were planing now how to break this marriage news to Sudarshan's Parents.

Patil Niwaas

Nakku was alone in that night.She was thinking about the first meeting she had with dutta.She is thinking that duta was going to be hi jeeju and now she is married to him,but its so akward.Next day early in the morining ,Daayi maa showed nakku the patil niwas.Nakku told in details how they got married.Baaji was also in home but Dutta's studyroom.

At Mumbai airport

Madhu had just arrived with a 5 years old boy Sahil.Dutta huuged madhu and madhu was caarying a sahil ,because he was sleeping.They sat in the car for going to the private jet.

Dutta: toh madhu bata,kaisa chal raha tera kaam

Madhu:aachha hai

Dutta:tu bore nahi hoti ,sara dinn bhoodho ki dekh bhaal karna

Madhu:Nahi,kya karoo meri maa bhi to wahi hai

Dutta:Doctors ne kya kaha,kya sarita aunty kabhi theek nahi hogi

Madhu:shayad nahi bhaiya,maine to ab umeed hi chod di hai

Dutta:tu hamare saath yahan aakar kyun nahi rehti

Madhu:Aapki maa ko dukh hoga,agar main aapke saath rahoon gi

Dutta:6 saal ho gaye ,meri maa ne mujhse baat nahi ki ,ab unhe kya dukh hoga

Sahil:aap dono kya baatein kar rahe ho

Dutta:tu jaag gaya

Sahil:(excited)Papa

Dutta:hey my champion,tere school kaisa chal raha hai

Sahil:super

Dutta:tune mujhe miss kiya ya nahi

Sahil:yep,papa.i missed you alot

Dutta:And when are you going to talk with me in hindi?

Sahil:whenever you want papa.

Dutta:now

Sahil:ok

Madhu:bhaiya , dont worry ise hindi jaldi hi aa jaye gi

Dutta:main aasha karta hoon ise hindi jaldi aa jaye,kyun ke ab se yeh yahan hi rahega ,india mein

Madhu:par kyun bhaiya

Dutta:iske principal ne bataya tha SRP milne aaye the isse

Madhu:aap nahi chahte papa sahil se mile

Dutta:Tum bhool rahi ho ,unhone ,,,,,,,,,,chal chod (seeing sahil)kisi aur din baat karen ge

Madhu: haan yeh bhi hai,accha yeh batayi bhabhi kaisi hai,sundar hai

Dutta:khud hi dekh lena

Madhu:acchi hongi ,isiliye to aap shaadi ke liye maane,warna maine to yehhi socha tha ke aap zindagi bhar kuwaare ban kar rahen ge

Dutta:tujhme bada confidence aa gaya hai,yaad hai jab pehli baar ham mile the tu to mujhe dekh kar chup rahi thi

Madhu:halat ke saath ,sab kuch badal jaata hai

Dutta:aisa nahi hai,sab kuch nahi badalta ,pyaar nahi badalta,logon ki soch nahi badalti ,kabhi kisi ki takleef nahi kam hoti aur kabhi kabhi log nahi badalte

Madhu: jaise ke kaun

Dutta:like Baaji aur daayi maa

Madhu:(smiled)haan Baaji,Bhaiya ,daayi maa aapke saath bachpan se hai na

Dutta: haan bachpan se hai mere saath,jab ghar choda tha tab meri apni maa ne mera saath nahi diya tha,par daayi maa ,,,,,,,,,,,,hamesha mera saath deti hai,,,aajkal unki tabiyat theek nahi rehti hai

Madhu:bhaiya ,Baaji hamesha itna khush kaise reh sakta hai,i mean ,use dard nahi hota

Dutta:Madhu ,use bhi dard hota hai par wo apni zindagi ke baare mein sochta hi nahi hai,use bas koi na koi chahiye jo uske saath ghanto baith baat karta rahe.Mujhe aaj bhi wo din yaad hai,Baaji ro raha tha ,main bhi ro raha tha par mere paas daayi maa thi ,par wo akela tha .Jab maine use mere saath ghar aane ka offer diya usne mana kar diya tha par jab sahil ki kasam di thi to use aanna hi pada.Kaafi naraaz tha mujhse jab maine sahil ko sarita aunty aur tere paas bheja tha,par main kya karta us same mere paas kaam nahi tha,par dekh aaj main kahan hoon.Ab main Sahil ko yahan hi rakhna chahta hoon,baaji kush hoga

Madhu:Aap baaji ke baare mein bahot sochte hai

Dutta:Sochta to main tere baare mein bhi hoon

Madhu:bhaiya, aapko guusaa nahi aaya tha jab mere baare mein pata chala tha

Dutta:Usme teri kya galti thi.Jhela to hum sab ne hai wo bhi ek hi insaan ki wajah se

Maddhu:aap ab bhi unse bahut nafrat karte hai

Sahil : ham ghar kab pahunche ge,look papa i m talking in english papa.

Dutta:i m haapy champ.

They reached to the private jet.

Raj MaHal

Suds:Dutta,kaafi arrogant lagta hai

Sona:kyun,tum to use jaante bhi nahi ho

Suds:mera kehne ka matlab shaadi mein uski taraf koi bhi nahi tha,aur waise itna paisewala hokar,matlab usne kisi ko invite hi nahi kiya

Sona:haan,yeh to hai.Par hume kya.Hamari shaadi to ho gayi.Bas kal ham mumbai chale jayen ge

Suds:Suna hai dutta ke paas apna private jet hai...problems abhi khatam nahi huyi.Mere parents ko kaise bataye ge ,yeh to abhi socha hi nahi hamne,unka reaction kaisa hoga.Kyun na thode din aur yahan ruk jaaye.

Sona:ttheek hai ,par jaldi batao apne parents ko

Patil Niwas

In the Kitchen

Nakku:daayi maa main kuch madad karu aapki

Daayi maa: nahi bahu ,abhi kal hi teri shaadi huyi,thode din ruk jaa phir kar lena tujhe jo karan hai.Aaj dutta yahan nahi main to isliye ,soch kuch bana loon,warna wo mujhe koi kaam kahan karne deta hai.

Nakku:daayi maa ,Madhu kaun hai

Daayi maa:teri nanand,dutta ki behen,London me hi rehti hai.Par dutta soch raha is baar use wapas jaane nahi dega

Nakku:Wo wahan par padhti hai

Daayi maa:Nahi ,kaam karti hai,Old orphanage mein

Nakku:wo kitni badi hai,matlab inse choti hai ya badi

Daayi maa:choti hai dutta se,19 saal ki

Nakku:kya ,19 saal ki aur kaam karti hai ,phir to uski padhai bhi poori nahi huyi hogi

Daayi maa:padhai beech mein hi chod di thi ,kai baar kismat se majboor aise faislen lene hi padte hai...tum batao ghar ki yaad a rahi hai

Nakku:haan,main ghar apne parents se milne kab jaa sakti hoon

Dutta:yeh to dutta hi batae ga,tum chinta mat karo main baat karoon gi,wo mujhe kabhi na nahi bolta

Dutta arrived with them at patil niwaas

Dutta:daayi maa ,,,,,,,,,,,,daayi maa...madhu aur sahil aa gaye hai

Dayi maa :andar mat aane dena .main aarti ki thaal lekar aati hoon

Daayi went to pooja ghar,took the pooja thaal and now goes to the door.Madhu and sahil are standingg at the door.Nakku followed daayi maa.Nakku stood behind daayi maa and watched madhu and sahil.Nakku again on her thinking spree,this girl is dutta's little sis but who's the kid,not madhu's child,for sure.Dutta saw nakku playing with pallu and signaled her not to do that.Daayi maa did aarti of madhu and sahil ,welcomed them with hugs.

Daayi maa:dekh madhu yeh hai teri vahini

Madhu:hi bhabhi,aap bohut khubsoorat hai

Nakku (just smiled)

Madhu:kya bhaiya ,bhabhi to kuch bolti hi nahi

Dutta:teri jaisi hai na isliye,tu pehle kahan kuch bolti thi ,baaji ki sangat ne tujhe badal diya hai ,ise bhi badal dega

Madhu:haan ,Baaji kahan hai

Dutta:yehi kahin hoga.bajji...bajjji...madhu aur sahil pahunch gaye ...kahan hai tu

Baaji:(runing,coming from the stairs)aaya bhau

Baaji came downstairs.He hugged sahil.

Baaji :kaisa hai tu mere shaitaan

Sahil:theek hoon,bhook lagi hai

Dutta:daayi maa,khaane main kya hai.Sahil ki fav cheeze hai na

Daayi :haan beta ,madhu aur sahil ki pasand ka khana hi bana hai

Madhu:baaji ,mujhse nahi milo ge

Baaji:are nahi re,tujhse bhi mil raha hoo na ,bas sahil ko dekh kar meri khushi ka theekana hi nahi raha

Dutta:pehle tum dono fresh ho jaayo ,baad mein saath mein dinner karte haii

Madhu :ji bhaiya

Everyone left the hall,Nakku followed dutta.

Dutta:tumhe kuch chahiye

Nakku:nahi,wo mujhe poochna tha ,main ghar kab jaa sakti hoon

Dutta:tumhe bolo tha tum yahan hi rahogi

Nakku:mujhe pata hai ,par ye ek rasam hoti hai

Dutta:kaisi rasam

They both reached in their bedroom.Dutta was searcing some file.

Nakku:aapko ye bhi nahi pata

Dutta:main koi teacher nahi hoon ,jo mujhe sab kuch patta ho

Nakku:to daayii maa aapko bataye gi

Dutta:daayo maa kyun,tum kyun nahi bata sakti

Nakku:mujhe dooron ko samjhana nahi aata

Dutta:mein tumhara pati hoon

Nakku:mujhe pata hai,par yeh shaadi sirf...

Dutta:kya

Nakku:mujhe nahi pata

Dutta:kal main zameen ke kaam se udaypur jaa raha hoon,tu bhi saath chalna,madhu ko bhi le jayeen ge

Nakku:kya main apne ghar jaa sakti hoon

dutta:haan

Nakku(smiled)thank you

Dutta:For what?

Nakku:meri iccha poori karne ke liye

Dutta:maine kaun si iccha poori ki,tum hi to bol rahi thi rasam hai

Nakku:aap kuch dhoond rahe hai

Dutta:haan,ek file hai

Nakku:main aapki kuch madad karoon

Dutta:nahi rehne do,daaayi maa ki madod karlo

Nakku:daayi maa mujhe unki help karne nahi de rahi

Dutta:tum yahan bore ho rahi ho

Nakku:ji

Dutta:apne ghar pe phone karlo

Nakku:kahan se karoon

Dutta:itne phone hai yahan ,kahin se bhi kar lo,aur uske baad neeche dinner mein aa jana

Nakku :ji

Dutta left the room .Nakku called Raj Mahal.One servant picked the phone .

Nakku:kaka,ghar main sab kahan hai

Kaka:beti ,wo mandir gaye hai

Nakku:theek hai kaka,kya didi ki shaadi ho gayi

Kaka:haan beti ho gayi,sab kuuch theekn hi huya hai

Nakku:kaka main kal ghar aa rahi hoon,aap pitaji ko bata dena

Kaka:haan beti bata doon ga

Nakku:ab main rakhti hoon

Nakku disconnected the call.She was happy that her sis got married but again sad that she hadn't talked to her parents.She went downstairs to the dining table.Everyone were there except dutta

Madhu:are bhabhi bhaiya kahan hai

Nakku:mujhe nahi pata ,wo koi file dhood rahe the

Madhu:kya ,shaadi ke ek din baad bhi files

Baaji:(laughed)tu yahan nahi rehti isliye hairaan hai

Sahil:mujhe papa ke saath khana hai

Baaji:abhi aa jayen ge tere papa

Nakku(shell shocked)thinks to herself,papa???????????????????????????????kya yeh mere pati ko papa bol raha hai,nahi ,aage kya kam problems thi aur ab yeh ek aur...Am i his second wife???????????

Dutta came to the dinig table ad sat on the" head of table chair".

Madhu:bhabhi aap bhi baithiye

Nakku tooks the place near madhu.

Madhu:daayi maa,aaj khane mein kya hai

Sahil:sara mera favourite

Dutta:don't worry champ,tera hi favourite hoga

Daayi maa served them.Nakku wasn't interested in eating because her mood was really off.

Madhu:bhabhi aap kuuch kha kyun nahi rahi

Nakku:nahi ,wo mujhe bhook nahi nahi.Mera kahan bas ho gaya

dutta obsereved her.After the dinner everyone left from there.Dutta and nakku went to there room.

Dutta:dont worry ,main yahan so jata hoon

Nakku:nahi its okay

Dutta:nakku,mujhe pata hai ,dont worry main yahan sofa pe theek hoon

Nakku:nahi its not good,aur waise bhi yahan subah aapke naukar chai rakh kar jjate hai.Wo aapko subah yahan dekh kar kya soochen ge

Dutta and nakku went to the second room(bedroom).The bed was big.Nakku and Dutta were on same bed but there was distance between them and they both had their faces on opposite sides.Nakku couldn't sleep ,she was feeling so restless.

Nakku:suniye

Dutta:haan

Nakku:aapko neend aa rahi hai

Dutta:agar tum nahi bolo gi to zaroor aa gaye

Nakku:mujhe aapse kuch poochna tha

Dutta:poocho

Nakku:sahil aappka beta hai

Dutta:haan

Nakku:kya main aapki doosri biwi hoon

Dutta:nahi

Nakku:par yeh sab kya hai.aap bol rahe hai sahil aapka beta par aapki shaadi bhi nahi huyi thi

Dutta:wo meri behen ka beta hai

Nakku:madhu ka to nahi ho sakta

Dutta:nahi meri badi behen ka

Nakku :kahan hai wo

Dutta didnt answer and left the room,mujhe neend nahi aa rahi ,tum so jayo aur subah jaldi uth jana

nakku:par mera jawab to dete jayiye

Dutta went to thr bar and started drinkung Alcohol.After sometime nakku came dounstairs and looked at dutta.

Madhu:bhabhi,aap yahan kya kar rahi hai

Madhu came from behind

Nakku:wo yeh...

Madhu:bhaiya sharaab pee rahe hai

Nakku:haan,meri galti thi

Madhu:kya hua?

Nakku:maine inko sahil ke baare mein pooch rahi thi,tabhi inki behen ka zikar huya aur ye yahan a gaye

Madhu:aap kalatdidi ko jaanti thi

Nakku:nahi ,mujhe to abhi unke baare mein pata chala,bal ki naam bhi pehli baar sun rahi hoon

Madhu:oh...accha hai beete huye kal ko jaan kar kya faida

Nakku:tum batao na,yeh aise kyun hai.Kabhi aachi tarah se baat karte hai aur kab inko gussa aata hai mujhe pata hi nahi chalta

Madhu:bhabhi chaliye na us jhule pe chalte hai

Madhu takes nakku to the swing.

Madhu :yahan bathiya ,aap batao aapki bhaiya ke saath arrange marrieage huyi ya love marriage

Nakku:dono hi nahi

Madhu:matlab?

Nakku:inki shaadi meri behen se hone waali thi ,par nahi ho payi ,,,,,,,,,,,,,mujhe is baare mein koi baat nahi karni

Madhu:theek hai ,mat kijiye.Aapko pata hai bhabhi ,bhaiya pehle aise nahi thi,wo alag the,khush the ,ab to bhaiya ko haste huye bhi bahot kam dekha hai...

Nakku:mujhe sahil ke baare mein jaan na hai

Madhu:bhaiya ne bataya to hai ke sahil kala didi ka beta hai.

Nakku:nahi ,tum batao

Madhu:aap bhaiya par vishwass nahi karti

Nakku:jis tarah se behave karte hai,pata nahi,,,sab kuch alag hai.Yahan pe kab koi khush hota hai aur kab koi dukhi samajh hi nahi aata...

to be continued...

Edited by rubal223 - 14 years ago

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naina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

awesome part hope nakku and dutta love story will start soon.good work and update soon.let nakku understand dutta pain and try to heal it with her love and affection,and both miss eachother when not close.please start LS soon😊