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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rubal223

because next month oin holidays for 1 month and i wouldnt be available for update

or8 wer u goin??
yeh so u can update afta u cum bak..we can wait😃 ... anythng 4 tasha😉😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
am waiting for you next month am also busy because of my exam so you enjoy your holiday and i am giving my exam so we just free at same time and i'll wait for you update
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Me updated my comments for part 7 ! *wink* hehehe
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Me updated my comments for Part 8 , hehehe
BTW, noticed u have changed ur DP :)
He looks so heavenly *Azy day dreaming* hehehehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
RESERVED...me will be back soon :)


Edited:

Great part choti

i was thinking who is this sahil

so kala's kid and was with madhu

seems like all like this kid a lot

aww start tasha LS soon ...i am only waiting for that to kick start :P

eek i am not liking this sonali ...she seems so selfish!!

great work ...keep up with the fast updating ...lol i will always catch up :P
Edited by dg0628 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
me waiting for update
not fair
am not waiting for one month
😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

amazing ff rubal

thanks
u rely r an amazing writer!!
again thanks😊
loved every bit of it
poor kala..feel sory 4 her...its soo sad
what to do serial mein uska charater villain ka tha to isliye socha yahan kuch aur likh doo
aww dutta yahan bhi kitnaa cute hai...takin care of every1 ... der dad is a ryt knob!!
yep,papaji is very bad person
hmm i bet sonali wil say somethng lyk dos goons tuk some of her jewlery inih
shes such a greddy pig!!
thnx 4 pm
your welcome
plss continue soon.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

me waiting for update
not fair
am not waiting for one month
😭

i m not going now ,i m stll trying to convice my mom because of that evil aunt
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Posted: 14 years ago

chapter9

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Raj mahal
suds:kya hua ,itna moo phula kar kyun baithi ho?
sona:maa chahti hai main apne gehne unko de doon,unka kehna hai yeh gehne dutta ki patni ke liye aye
the aur ab in gehno par nakkusha ka haq hai

suds:yeh kya bol rahi ho,gehne de denge toh jiyen ge kaise,tum janti ho aaj hi maine papa se baat ki thi aur woh is shaadi se bohut naraaz hai,maine socha tha yeh gehne hamare kaam aaye ge

sona:mujhe khud nahi samajh aa raha yeh nakku ke liye achanak itna pyaar kyun

suds:pyaar toh aaye ga wo dutta shriram patil itne amiir joon thehre

sona:tum kaise bol sakte ho wo bohut zyaada amiir hai,dekha nahi tha shaadi pe kitne log aaye the ,aur kapde bhi toh itne sadharan pehne the

suds:wo dutta shriram patil hai,apni shaadi pe business suit nahi pehne ga,aur mumbai pe toh sab jante hai unko

sona:haan haan sab jante hai,main to unka naam bhi nahi suna tha

suds:wo apni koi khabar aane hi nahi dete to naam kaise sunogi

Sona:chalo hamare paas do crore to hai ,itne paise hamara kuch to ho hi jayega

suds:mujhe pehla apna business kholna hai

sona:tum jaante ho main filmo mein try karna chati hoon

suds:pata nahi tumhare maa baap kitne din hame yaha rehne denge

sona:uski chinta tum mat karo,wo khud mujhe kuch dino ke liye yahan rakhna chahte hai,aur kuch na huya to hum kuch soch hi lenge

suds:maine toh plan bhi bana liya hai

sona:kya plan hai tuumhara

suds:tum dekhti jayo,samay aane par tumhe hi bataun ga

Patil Niwas

madhu:bhaiya hum sab bhabhi ke ghar jaa rahe hai

Dutta:haan ,pata nahi koi rasam hai

madhu:bhabhi aap mahal mein rehti thi

nakku:haan ,mahal hai par yahan se bada nahi

Baaji:bhau main nahi jaa raha,mujhe sahil ke saath yahan rehna hai

dutta:par kyun tum hamare saath kyun nahi chalte

Baaji:bhau woh kahin bhi rone lagta hai,apni izzat ka sawal ha

dutta:(smiled)seedha bol tu jaana nahi chahta ,ise izzat ka kahan se sawaal utha hai

Baaji:kya bhau...

daayima:tum log yahan hi baatein karte raho ge ,der ho rahi rahi jaldi chalo, gaddi mein baitho

They drive to udaypur

Raj Mahal

Raja Sahib greeted everyone ,so does other family members.

Rani maa:(hugged nakku)kaisi ho nakku

nakku:main theek hoon rani maa,wo dii khush hai na

Rani maa:Haan haan wo khush hai ,sudarshan accha insaan hai

Sona(coming towards nakku and rani maa)kya baatein ho rahi hai

Rani maa:wo teri haal chal pooch rahi thi

sona:haan nakku meri chinta mat karo ,main khush hoon.Tum kaisi ho sudsarshan bataa rahe the dutta bohut aamir hai aur guuse wala bhi

nakku:haan yeh bohut ammiir hai

Rani maa:yeh kaisa sawal pooch rahi ho sonali,wo acche khaandaan se hai isiliye tumhari shaadi unse pakki huyi thi

sona:maa aap toh aise bol rahe ho jaise maine koi galat baat kar di ho.sach to yehi hai ke rishta mere liye aaya tha

Nakku is feeling bad.Rani maa noticed this,but didn't said anything because they were in hall and many people were present there.

sona:nakku teri saree bahut khubsoorat hai,kahan si li toone

nakku :dii aap kaisa sawal pooch rahi hai ,aaj shaadi ka teesra din ho aur mujhse yeh umeed karti hai ke main shopping karne gayi thi.Yeh jewelry aur mere saare kapde daayi maa ne shaadi se pehle kharedi the

sona:oh...tabhi main socho tu itni bhaari saree kaise pehen sakti hai,tujhe itni chamkti cheeze pasand nahi hai na

nakku :Dii ham wahan chale yahan sab baithe hai akele baat karte rahen ge to sab kya sonche ge

sona:nakku tune mujhse mere pati ke baare mein kuch nahi poocha

Nakku:aapne bataya to tha ,aap khush hai.Aur jiju us din kaafi acche insaan lag rahe the.dii jiju ke parivaar mein kaun kaun hai?

sona:o ho ...tu kya boring baatein lekar baith gayi"parivaar mein kaun hai",parents hai aur kaun. Tere pati ka chela kahan hai aur yeh teri nanad hai na,itni chup chap kyun hai

Nakku:baaji bhaiya ghar par hai,unki tabiyat theek nahi thi aur yeh , madhu,agar aap kahin pehli baar jaati hai to sidha apona FM radio toh on nahi karti use toh pata bhi nahi hai yaha kaun kaun hai

Dutta:nakku ,idhar aana

Nakku:ji

Dutta:madhu ko apne saath rakho ,wo kitni uljhi hui lag rahi hai

Nakku:ji

Nakku went to madhu and started chatting with her.

seth ji:nakku,kaisi ho

Nakku:main theek hoon sethji tum batao,college kaisa chal raha hai

Sethji:college bhi theek hai pata nahi is saal paas honga ya fail

Nakku:maa se bahut daant padegi,agar fail ho gaye

Madhu:yeh aapke bhai hai bhabhi?

Nakku:haan madhu yeh mera chota bhai hai , seth ji.Aur sethji yeh meri nanad hai madhu ,kal hi london se wapas lauti hai

Sethji:haan,isiliye main socho aapko shaadi mein nahi dekha tha.

Rani maa:ab sabko khana kha lena chahiya

Raja sahib:haan haan bhuke thodi na marna hai

Dutta: mujhe abhi jana hoga ,ek zammen ke kaam se jaana hai

Raja Sahib:damad ji aise kaise chale jayenga thodi der aur ruk jayeeye,khana kha kar chaliye ga.Aur madhu bhi to pehli baaar yahan aayi hai bina kuch khaye peeye kaise jaane denge

Dutta:mera jaan bohut zaroori hai,kaam beech mein nahi chod sakta ,aur jab kal nakku ko lene aaunga tab madhu ki jitni khatirdaari karni hai kar lijiye

Rani Maa: Aap madhu ko yahan hi hamare paas kyun nahi rehne dete,ek hi din ki toh baat hai,kyun madhu tum rehna chahogi apni bhabhi ke parivaar ke saath

Madhu:main...

Nakku:haan madhu yahan ruko,main tumhe apni seheli ke saath bhi milaun gi,kal saath mein ghar chalen ge

Dutta:madhu ,tum rukna chahti ho yahan nakku ke saath

Madhu:ji,par bhaiya kal aap pakka lene aayenga na

Dutta:haan aaunga,theek hai ab main chalta hoon

Rani maa:damadji rukiye aapko kuch dena tha

Dutta:ji

Rani maa gave a file to dutta

Rani maa:yeh nakku ki hisse ki property hai ,woh nakku ke dadaji ne nakku ke pati ke liye chodi thi

Dutta:par main ye kaise le sakta hoon

Rani maa:nakku ke dada ji ke iccha ke mutabik yeh aaphi ka hai,aapko lena hi hoga

Raja Sahib:waise bhi hamne aapko aur nakku ko koi tohfa nahi diya abhi tak,isi hamari aur se gift samajh kar hi rakh lijiye

Dutta:jii,thekk hai.Agar aap sab aisa hi chahte hai to theek hai
Dutta went out of raj mahal.

Raj Mahal

nakku:madhu tum yahan so jayo main apni dadi se milkar aati hoon

Madhu:bhabhi aapka kamra bohut sundar hai

nakku:thank you,par sab maa ki pasand hai

Madhu:toh kya hua kamra to aaphi ka sundar hai

nakku:main thodi der main aati hoon

madhu:good night bhabhi

Nakku:good night

Nakku went to rani maa's room.Rani maa opened the door and make nakku to sit on the sofa.

Nakku:kya baat thi rani maa ,aapne mujhe yahan kyun bulaya

Rani maa:mujhe tujhse kuch poochna tha

Nakku:ji

Rani maa:dutta accha insaan hai na,tujhpe chila to nahi hai na

Nakku:rani maa aap bekaar mein hi chinta kar rahe ho ,main theek hoon wahan aur sach baat yeh ke inse accha insaan mujhe kabhi mil hi nahi sakta

Rani maa:tere ghar pe sab theek hai na Daayi maa aur madhu tujhse acche se pesh aate hai na

Nakku:daayi maa mujhe bahut pyaar karti hai ,madhu to bahut acchi hai aur baaji sara din mazaak karta rehta hai.Main wahan kush hoon shayad yahan se bhi zyaada

Rani maa:matlab?

Nakku:wahan kisi ki daant nahi sunni padti

Rani maa:haan haan hum to jaise hamesha hi tere piche pade rehte the

Sonali came in Rani maa's room.

sona:maa aap kya baattein kar rahi ho nakku se

Rani maa:kuch nahi,bas yun hi

Sona:accha hai nakku tu bhi yahan hai mujhe hum dono se relatedkuch baat karni thi

Rani maa:kya baat hai sonali,bolo

Sona:Rani maa,aapne jo zameen ke kagaz dutta ko diye wo zameen kiski thi

Rani maa:tumhare dadaji ki

Sona:haan dadaji ki aur aapko nahi lagta us zameen par ham dono behno ka haq hai aur aapne wo zameen sidha dutta ko de di

Rani maa:us zameen par sirf nakku ka haq hai ,yeh tumhare dadji ki Will par likha tha,aur Will ke mutrabik wo zameen ab dutta ki hai

Sona:oh to dadaji ne woh zameen makku ke future ke liye rakhi thi.Phir maa mere liye kya rakha tha dadji ne?

Rani maa:Tumhaare liye.Sonali tumhaare liye kuch bhi nahi hai aur na hi sethji ke liye

Sonali:wah maa ye kya baat huyi mujhe to aap alag kar rahi hai.Nakku ko zameen mil gayi ,sabhi gehne nakku ko mil gaye,Sethji ghar ka beta hai kal ko Raj mahal uska hi hoga,mujhe kya milega?

Rani maa:sonali betiya paraya dhan hoti hai unhe wohi milta hai jo unke pati ka hota hai

sona:wohi toh main pooch rahi hoon mere pati ka kya hai,aapne dutta ko zameen di aur mere pati ko kkuch bhi nahi,mujhe jawab chahiye rani maa

Rani maa:woh zameen tumhare dadaji ne di hai maine nahi ,agar jawab chahiye to dadaji se poocho mujhe nahi

sona:kya baat hai maa ,dadaji to rahe nahi acchi tarika hia baat ko khatam karne ka ,mujhe nahi lagta main yahan aur rook payun gii aur ye llijiye apni nakisha ke gehne

Rani maa:toh tum gehne le aayi(Rani maa took the jewelry from sonali and gave iit nakku)nakku yeh gehne tumhare hai ,shaadi se pehle daayi maa ne apni bahu ke liye bheej waaye the,in pe tumhara haq hai

Sonali went out of the room.

Nakku:par maa dii bahot naraaz hai

Rani maa:tum uski chinta mat karo ,woh gusse mein hai.Use sahi galat ki samajh nahi hai

Nakku:Par maa dii sahi hai

Rani maa:nahi ,woh galat hai hum isme kuch nahi kar sakte ,yeh fainsla tumhaaree dadji ka tha,hum ise nahi badal sakte.Ye sab chod tu bata madhu kaisi ladki hai

Nakku:Madhu bahut acchi hai ,inki hi tarah hai zyaada bolti nahi hai.Par aap yeh kyun pooch rahi hai

Rani maa:mujhe wo pasand hai seth ji ke liye

Nakku(smiled)bhool jaaye maa woh sethji se badi hai ek saal

Rani maa:ohhh mere saare plan paani mein mil gaye ,par jo bhi ho ladki to acchi hai ,kisi acche ghar mein jayye gi

Nakku:so toh hai ye koi kasar nahi chodenge madhu ki shaadi par aur jo bhi kaladidi ke saath uske baad to wo madhuu ko lekar bahot possesive honge

Rani maa:kala??????????yeh kaun hai

Nakku:chodiye na maa ,is baat se koi farak nahi padta.Aapko pata hai yahan aane ke bad main bohut khush hoon

Rani maa:haan,lag raha hai ,tumhe wahan koi takleef toh nahi hai na

Nakku:reason yeh hai maine aaj aapko kitni baar maa pookara aur aapne mujhe kuch nahi bola

Rani maa:tumhe neend nahi aa rahi,jaa kar so jayo

Nakku:ji main chalti hoon

Sonali's room

suds:kya huya ,kahan se aa rahi ho aur itne gusse mein kyun kag rahi ho

sona:maa ne woh gehne nakku ko dilwa diye ,zammen nakku ko mil gayi .hamaree paas to kuch bhi nahi hai

suds:chinta mat karo ,do crore hai na

sona: haan do crore hai par tumne ab tak nahi bataya tumhe wo paise mile kahan se

suds:tum jaan kar kya karogi

sona:batao tumhe itne saare paise kahan se mile

suds:theek hai suno...

to be continued

sorry guys for late update but i was really busy.Aur ranju dii rona mat and yeah next update saturday ko mile gi,jitne gaaliyaan ya chappals marni hai mujhpe maar do,me happy always 😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mine :)
Guess me the 1st res n last to update I think :(

Nice part again, hmmm now Rani maa seems to be v concern n sides to Nakku! is she doing it genuinely r not well v have to wait na :D
Can't seems to trust with choti's Mind :p

Ohhh SudSon is sooo dead mean n J!!

This land issue will be a huge issue na :p

Still NO Tasha Romance!!!
Soon update the next part :p
Ruby awesome dear, love how the story going :)
Edited by AzMishy - 14 years ago

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