FF:Mehrbaan saayein(chapter15,,the end,,,page37)

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prncz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

nice update ruby , Srush ki singin monster 😆 i like taht name ,,mein bhi yehi bolungi aaj se 😆

kya ranju thik keh rahi hai ,,dutta gave the money to marry naku ? ..waiting for ur update ,chotti ,,

(aur kya ,, u r tryign not to go to mamaji's and mum maan nahin rahi ? ..bro is not cmng ? try n convince ur bro to be there if mum is not manoing )

Raj

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Iridescence

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

omg Reserved again LOL ...i am going to dereserve both spots by tonight :)

Edited: (also on pg 19) 😃

lol i am sooo late ...but here it is

great part again...hmmm i really dont like sona/suds ...🤢

and omg that property thing is going to be a big issue isnt it

and loved the madhu - naku bonding lol

and PLEASE choti ...start tasha LS ...please please...do it soon

now update next part asap 😳

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aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#143

great part...sona's true colours r coming out...how did suds get the 2 crore rupees?...is the land given to dutta the same one that dutta was trying to get in the earlier part?

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tamannA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#144

today is saturday tumne update karne ke liye kaha tha pleaseee update

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rubal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: rrs1391
today is saturday tumne update karne ke liye kaha tha pleaseee update

dont worry ,i will update tonight😊

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kiran255

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Posted: 14 years ago

#146

Hey Ruballl !

Finally my exams over and im here to see

what ur mind is creating and believe me i love it :D

Sonali is such a __ __ ?_-

but im sooo loving the story

but mera dil main ek shak hai

have d knwon abt N property

may thats why e married N :P

just think9ing

loving ur FF !

add me to ur pm list :D

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Nakusha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#147

liked it alot ,plz update soon

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suhana19

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Posted: 14 years ago

#148

Hey Dear Rubal🤗

Sorry iam late 😳...

Thanx alot for the wonderful update and Pm ...Loved the update as always ...But no tasha romance yet ...me waiting eagerly 😆...

Omg that property thing will be an very big issue ...did dutta planed this whole thing ...can"t wait for the nxt part ,,,pls jaldi update karo ...u take care,,,

Love and hugs

suhana🤗

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rubal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#149

chapter10

Raj mahal

Dadi maa:bahu sab tohfe tyyar hai na ,damad ji kabhi bhi ate honge

Rani maa:ji maa sab kuch tayyar hai ,madhu ke liye bhi ek set rakha hai,shaadi ke same use kuch nahi diya tha isliye

Dadi maa:accha kiya,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Aur sonali ke baare mein kya socha hai.Uske pati aur wo dono ghumne phirne main lage hai ,Sudarshan ko wapas ghar jana hai ya nahi

Rani maa:Pata nahi ,sudarshan ne apne mata pita ke baare ,mein bhi kuch nahi bataya.Thode din ruk jaate hain phir baat karenge,abhi char din hi to huye hai

Dadi maa:haan theek hai ,par ajeeb lag raha hai,usne apne mata pita ke baare mein kuch nahi bataya kam se kam phone pe hi baat karwa deta to accha hota.

Rani maa:theek hai main sonali ko bolungo ki sudarshan se baat kare.Main nakku aur madhu ko lekar niche aati hoon.

Nakku's room

Madhu:bhabhi kal raat ko mausam kitna accha tha na

Nakku:hmmm

Madhu:aapke room ki balcony bahut acchi hai

Nakku:haan,par Patil niwas se zyaada nahin

Rani maa enters in the room.

Rani maa:are kya baatein ho rahi hai

Nakku:kuch nahi maa ,madhu ko ye kamra bohut accha laga aur isike ke baare mein baat kar rahe hai.

Madhu:ji aubty .yahan mein sab bohut khoobsurat hai.

Rani maa:hame khushi hai ke aapko yahan pe accha laga

nakku,rani maa,,nakku ,,,,,,,,,,,,nakku(someone shouting)

Nakku:chachi kya hua ,aap mujhe aise kyun pukaar rahi hai

Chachi:beta ,wo baaji aaya hai ,wo dutta ji ka accident ho gaya hai.

Madhu:Kya,accident?

Rani maa:par kaise?

Nakku:wo ab kahan hai?

Madhu:baaji neche hi hai

Chachi:haan,wo tum logon ka intezaar kar raha hai

Madhu:bhabhi chaliye niche

Nakku:haan chalo

They went downstairs in the hall.

Madhu:baaji ,bhaiya kahan hai

Baaji:wo hospital mein,chalo main tumko aur bhabhi ko lene aaya hoon,daayi maa bhi sahil ko sambhaal nahi paa rahi ,aur bhau hospital mein hai,,,,,,,,,vahini chalo.

Rani maa:ham bhi saath chalenge

Baaji:wahan chal kar kuch nahi ho saqkta ,wo doctor log waise bhi kisiko bhau se milne nahi de rahe.

Nakku:maa ,baali theek bol raha hai.Aap chinta mat kijiye main aapko phone karoongi

Raja Sahib:haan ,saraswati baaji aur naaku sahi bol rahe ,ham yahi rukte hai.Aap abhi jayie aur nakku call kar dena,aur haan baaji agar kisi madad ki zaroorat ho to bata dena

Baaji:ji ji

Nakku:theek hai pitaji ham chalte hai

Baaji,madhu and nakku in the car.

Madhu:baaji,bhaiya ka accident kaise hua.

Baaji:wo samne se truck waale ki galti thi,police use dhoond rahi hai

Nakku:Hospital kitni door hai

Baaji:vahini thodi hi der mein ham hospital mein honge

Madhu:daayi maa,theek toh hongi na

Baaji:pata nahi ro rahi thi upar se sahil ko sambhalna

Madhu:yeh sab kya ho gaya.abhi khushiyon ko der hi kitni huyi thi aaye hue aur bhaiya ka accident.

nakku:madhu tum chinta mat karo ,sab pehle jaisa ho jaaye gaya

They reached the hospital.

Madhu:(hugs daayi maa)daayi maa ,aap chinta mat kijiye ,bhaiya jaldi hi theek ho jayen ge

Daayi maa:haan doctor ne abhi bola ki dutta jaldi theek ho jaaye ga

Nakku:Sahil kahan hai?

Daayi maa:beta wo to abhi yahan hai,pata nahin kaha chala gaya?

Baaji coming with Sahil.

Baaji:e,madhu ,,,,,,,,,,,sahil ko sambhal .kahin bhi chala jaata hai.Aur vahini aap chinta mat karo abhi doctor se baat kar ke aaya hoon ,wo bol raha tha bhau ko jaldi hi hosh aa jaye ga.Unhe zyaada chot nahi lagi sirf sar mein bajne ke karan wo behosh ho gaye hai ,do teen dino mein mera bhau fit fat ho jaye ga.

Nakku:baaji hame lagta tumko daayi maa ko lekar ghar jana chahiye unki tabiyat bhi to theek nahi rehti

Madhu:haan daayi maa,aap ab ghar chaliye

Daayii maa:nahi beta wo dutta...

Nakku:yeh theek hai ,baaji ne abhi bola na ,aur main aur madhu abhi yahan hi hai.Aur aap thoda araam kar ke phir yahan aa jaana.

Daayi maa :theek hai,main ghar chalti hoon par mujhe phone kar ke dutta ke baare mein batti rehna

Baaji:sahil,tu bhi chal

Sahil:par mujhe papa se milna

Nakku:sahil...aap acche bache ho na,aur acche bacche zid nahi karte,,,,,,,,,aap abhi daayi maa ke saath jayo aur phir thodi der mein aa jana

Sahil:aap promise kar rahe ho

Nakku:haan ,ye mera promise hai

They went back to the Patil niwas.Nakku and Madhu sitting on the bench.

Nakku:madhu tum theek ho na.

Madhu:haan ,bhabhi main theek hoon soch rahi thi papa ko abhi tak pata chal gaya hoga aur yeh bhi ke main sahil ko lekar yahan par hoon.Wo bahut gussa honge

Nakku:unhe kaise pata chala hoga

Madhu:bhabhi ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,apne dekha to tha ,bahar kitni saari media thi

Nakku:haan par,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,tum sahi bol rahi,ab tak to unhe pata chal gaya hoga

Madhu:bhabhi,,,,,,agar papa yahan aa gaye toh

Nakku:tumne khud hi bola tha ab tum sab ka unse koi rishta nahi hai

Madhu:haan bhabhi par fir bhi...

Doctor:suniye ,dutta sri ram patil ji ko hosh aa gaya hai,ab aap unse mil sakte hai

Madhu:bhabhi chaliye

Nakku goes behund madhu.

Madhu:bhaiya ap theek ho na

Dutta:haan theek hoon thodi hi der mein dodne bhi lagu ga

Madhu:main to dar hi gayi thi

Dutta:kyun,chota sa accident tha ,isme darne ki kya baat hai?Daayi maa kahan hai aur sahil?

Madhu:wo ghar pe hai,bhabhi ne kahan ki daayi maa ko araam ki zaroorat hai,isiliye unhone ne hi daayi maa aur sahil ko baaji ke saath bheja hai,,,ghar.Bhaiya main doctor se pooch ke aati hoon,ke aapko discharge kab karen ge.

Madhu went outside the room.Nakku was just going to get out of the room.

Dutta:nakku,,,,,,,,,,,,ruko.Mujhe tumse baat karni hai

Nakku:ji ,boliye

Dutta:thank you,tumne daayi maa ke baare mein socha

Nakku:isme thank you bolne ki kya baat hai

Duttta:tumhare ghar mein sab kaise hai

Nakku:theek hai wo aana chahte the par maine hi mana kar diya.Mujhe unhe call karni hai,main jaun?

Dutta:haan,,,,,,,,,wo madhu ne tumhe mere baare main sab bataya

Nakku:haan,wo uski galti nahhi thi ,maine zid ki thi janne ki

Dutta:par kyun?

Nakku:muujhe sahil ke baare mein jaan na tha?

Dutta:wo toh main bhi jaanta hoon lekin,,tumhe sahil ke baare mein kyun jaan na tha?

Nakku:pata nahi

Dutta:wow...tumhe pata nahi,,,,,,,,,,par mujhe pata hai

Nakku:kya

Dutta:yehi ki tumne socha ,maine tumhe dhoka diya aur sahil aur mera beta hai

Nakku:haan ,,,,,,,,,,wo mere dimaag mein,,,aise hi ulti sidhi baatein aatti rehti hai

Dutta:tum sahi thi ,koi bhi tumhare jagah hota to usse yehi lagta

Nakku:aapko araam karna chahiye,main jaun?

Dutta:tumhe nahi lagta tumhe yahan rukna chahiye ,waise bhi mere paas itna time toh hota nahi ke main tumse baatein kar sakoon,,,aaj accident ki wajah mere paas itna time hai aur main ise utilize karna chahta hoon,ta ki tum kal aa kar ek typical biwi ki tarha naa bolo maine tumhe kabhi waqt nahi diya

Nakku:main aisa kyun bolun gi

Dutta:yahan aao,,,,,,,baitho(nakku takes the seat)nakku,,,,,,,,,tum ,,,,,,,,,,,,tumhe apni padhai nahi poori karni

Nakku:karni thi par ab aapke saath shaadi ho gayi

Dutta:tum chaho to ab bhi apni graduation poori kar sakti ho,mujhe koi aitraaz nahi hai

Nakku:aap sach bol rahe hai

Dutta:haan ,sach bol raha hoon

Nakku:par daayi maa nahi mane gi

Dutta:Daayi maa maan gayi hai ,kal maine unse is baare mein baat ki thi

Nakku:par agar maa ko pata chala wo bahot gussa hongi

Dutta:kyun,,,tu meri patni hai ,mujhe koi aitraaz nahi hai tere aage padhne mein toh unhe kyun hoga.

Nakku:main ,,,,,,,,Rani maa se ek baar poonch loon.

Dutta:tumhari marzi par agar unhone mana kar diya to kya tum apni graduation poori nahi karogi

Nakku:pata nahi

Dutta:nakku waise bhi ghar par baith kar kya karo gi

Nakku:madhu ke saath rahoon gi ,sahil kya khyaal rakhoon gi

Dutta:par sahil konsa yahan hamesha ke liye hai

Nakku:madhu ne bataye tha aap chahte hai sahil ab yahan hi rahen

Dutta:chahne se kya hota hai,,,,,,,,yahan par uska dhyaan kaun rakhe ga

Nakku:main rakhoo gi na

Dutta:tum ,,,,,,,,,,,par wo tumhe itni acchi tarah se jaante bhi nahi hai.Pehle pehle sab kehte hai ,,,dheere dheere sab badal jaate hai

Nakku:aap aisa mat sochiye,,,main sahil ka khyaal rakhoon gi ,hamesha,har pal

Dutta:tumhari graduation

Nakku:ab graduated ho kar bhi kya karna hai,,,,,,,,mujhe kaun sa kisi ki naukari karni hai

Dutta:oh...tumhara irada mujhe kangaal karne ka hai

Nakku:nahi mera matlab wo nahi tha

Dutta:main jaanta hoon ,tum aisi nahi ho

Nakku:kaisi nahi ho

Dutta:doosro jaisi ,,,,,,,tum acchi ho

Nakku:aap bhi itne boore nahi hai jitna suna tha

Dutta:kya soon tha mere baare mein

Nakku:yehi ki aap sadiyal hai

Dutta:mere saamne mujhe sadiyal bol rahi ho,Dar nahi lagta tujhe mujhse

Nakku:pehle lagta tha ab nahi lagta

Dutta:kyun

Nakku:yun hi,,,,,,,,,,,,aap acche insaan hai.Aap kabhi isiko dard nahi de sakte

Dutta:par,,,,,,,,,,,,tum jao

Madhu comes in the room.

Madhu:bhaiya doctors aapko kal discharge kar rahe hai

to be continue...

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rubal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
nice part...

thanks ,it wasnt interesting but what to do ,i m having exams na

thanks for reading😊

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