FF:Mehrbaan saayein(chapter15,,the end,,,page37)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Azy

@-Azy-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#101

me have to catch up 2 parts😒

RESERVED!!😳

Edited-

Part 7!!!

Ohhh now madhu with a kid and that kid is kala's!!!

Dutta drinking!!!

Both sleep in same bed but with a distance, hehehehe

Good n quite long update :)

Thanks dear n good going :p

Edited by AzMishy - 14 years ago

Quote

rubal

@rainurubal

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: Ashima_Mishal
Nice part rubal i hope im not last to comment lol wow dutta is soo adorable :D

dont worry my mishthi you are not last look at shrushi dii she keeps reserving and reserving but never got time to read

and Azy dii is not here ,she will be here in anytime

thanks for reading and yeah dutta is adorable

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Azy

@-Azy-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#103

RESERVED!!!

[this is for the monday update😛]

Part 8

Dutta's father is a real criminal, no wonder he hate him so much, poor kala :(

At leasts she got married to the one whome she loved, madhu's mother is a v cearing person, poor he to dieing, n dutta still grateful to her :)

I am seening the jwellary all missing :p

Sud must have stolen them! hehehe

We want some tasha intractions,

Good devoloping the story, thanks choti :)

Me done with updating my comments so update the next part soon :p hahaha

V intresting n loved it :D

Edited by AzMishy - 14 years ago

Quote

rubal

@rainurubal

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Ashima_Mishal
Ok one thing more i love the title of ur ff! Its soo beautiful :)

first i thought that i should change the title but then my friend told me to leave it

Quote

Azy

@-Azy-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: rubal223
dont worry my mishthi you are not last look at shrushi dii she keeps reserving and reserving but never got time to read
and Azy dii is not here ,she will be here in anytime

thanks for reading and yeah dutta is adorable

ha ha ha

c what a timeing na😛😆😆

Quote

rubal

@rainurubal

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: AzMishy
ha ha ha
c what a timeing na😛😆😆

love you

me going to school

bye😛😛😛😛

Quote

Azy

@-Azy-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: rubal223
love you
me going to school

bye😛😛😛😛

c u soon😛😛

Quote

suhana19

@suhana19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#108

Hey Dear Rubal🤗

sorry iam late 😳Just caught with last 2 updates😉...

Thanx alot for the wonderful updates and Pm ...Loved it 👍🏼👏

Awww naku is feeling awkard😳dnt u worry Dutta hai na😆...

so finally madhu arrives that to with 5 year sahil caaling Dutta papa😲...i was shocked at first😆Just like naku 😆...she couldn"t beleive poor her thinking she is his second wife ..couldn"t sleep until she found out who sahil is?...

Omg Dutta sad and drinking...dnt like him seeing sad...

Omg kala"s story was really heartwrenching💔Poor Dutta did so much for hhis family and went through alot of pain ...I was crying reading this part😭nobody should ever go through this pain ...

I hope naku fill dutta live with love ...Pls bring back some romance and happiness...let the new day begin ...

Omg sonali is so selfishshe wants to keep the jewellery...

anways it was an emtional update ..but awesome yaar ...will wait for the nxt part ...u take care dear and have a wonderful day at school...

love and hugs

suhana🤗