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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderfully written once again😊 and this part made up for the previous one which I felt was a little too short than you usually write. Everytime I read your SS I feel why this didn't Happen in the show and if they had to continue with the Real LTL then they should have done in exactly the same manner as your SS. You are such an awesome writer not just because your way of expression is beautiful but also you understand the characters deeply and keep them true to their nature. We always knew Tasha share an exceptional bond and according to me bringing out the magic of Tasha yet at the same time maintaining the purity of love is a difficult task for a writer but your SS completely reflected it and infact extended it. It was a Treat reading it.👏Thank you so much for writing this SS.😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

Beautiful...👏

but me was shocked to see its end from here
wow Tasha having a baby girl n the baby too holding on to his kurtha like the mother😍
such a sweet moment na😳
loved u sooo much n thank u dear for the lovely FF🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update...its the last..bt pls make mre such stories...aww tasha had baby girl...so sweet...loved the ending...
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Posted: 14 years ago
fantastic rose loved this part a lot but a bit sad that u ended it ,no problem please start a new one soon will be waiting eagerly,thanks for a wonderful update.waiting for more to come.
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Posted: 14 years ago
great job ,loved it & u comleted the ff ,waiting for the new ff ,plz do start one soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

A superb updt with a superb ending...

Rose, luved ur this FF very much... it had evrything which we wanted to happen in LTL-1 with MR and MV... thanx fr this FF... we atleast could read and imagine the happenings... with our dear MR and MV... Thanx once again, Rose... looking frwrd fr ur nxt new venture... All the best...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ok rosy
its gonna be one day one comment :D

Seventh step

im loving this the way u called every update a step towrds getting tasha together ,its just feels so nice :D


Hmm Dutta going ahead with the plan , he now wants to get his Naku back and finally its time for action ,

he asks her to go to mandir and i love her innocnt reply <3

she indeed know his saab very well :D

aww i also wish that N regains her memorynow ,

though i must confess the way u atke the whole pagal track is worth

Hatts of f

great Rose ,

it was simply superbbb:)

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omg the whole Mandir scene is so emotional,

its the same place they lost each other and never really got Naku

and wht if he loses her competely now ,

but Dutta has to give himself a chance , Naku a chance ,

give chance to Naku belive

amazing scene

the turmoil Dutta in and how even N is so not feeling good abt this place :(

amazing scene ,

if u just understand the feeling of the lovers who meet after years and are aksed to prove their love yet again


Omg Rose , even i know its just a plan
Naku condition makes me cry

why it had to be like that ,

why they got seperated and why she gone mad ,

so many why and no answer :(

feeling so sad for N and the scene u describe when her voice didnt coem out :(

its so sad :(

and wooo thank god Baaji was dere to save her

and again D is cursing himslef for Naku bleeding !
its all so sad


Her head was bandaged and doctors waited for her to regain her conscious before they could say anything about her state. She laid on the bed with closed eyes while dutta sat close to her on the stool holding her hand waiting for her to open her eyes. He looked at her carefully and spoke softly " main janta hoon tu mujhe sun sakti hai bus mujhe tang karne ke liye aankhein bandh kare hue hai. Maine bhi toh tujhe bahut dard diya hai kabhi jaan bhujhkar aur kabhi anjaane mein..lekin ab jab mein tere bina adhura hoon tu mujhse ruthi hui hai..jab bhi chaha tujhe duniya ki har khushi doon anjane mein tujhe aur takleef de baithta hoon." Tears welled up in his eyes on seeing her like this, if today anything wrong happened to her he would never ever be able to forgive himself. He kissed the hand he was holding and continued " tere aane se mujhe sacha pyar mila , sacha jeevan sathi mila , jism main hoon meri jaan hai tu , bin tere main kuch nahin." He sat next to her on the bed and moved the hair falling on her forehead, he smiled through his tears and said " soch rahi hogi ki jab hosh mein hoti hai tab toh main kuch nahin kehta aur aaj chup hi nahin ho raha..apni aankhein khol nah nakku..tujhse apne dil ki har baat kehna chahta hoon..mere pyar ka aur imtihan na le." A tear rolled down his eye and fell on her cheek, he felt somebody pressing his shoulder, he turned around and saw AS standing, he felt emotionally weak so couldn't stop himself from hugging her.

@red he is talking like a kid

he is saying what is in heart forever !


@green he knows , knows that N is the right person , the one for whom he can wait for 7 janams :D


@pink oh love this kiddish side of D :D

he indeed never say anything :D

OMg Rose


u are my Anil deshmukh


dutta dialogues are to die for :(

he is just venting his heart out to the women he love , the women he has once cursed , punished but she is the women who is all to him ,

she is his everything ,


oMG rose u just bring all th faded cruel memories back !
Duta feels so guilty and ashamed !
and here this women is only thinkg abt u even in her dizziness !
he is indeed the luckiest guy of teh world

to have her :)

loved what he said that he iis not gonna leave her everrr !

Oh god i was so missing that naku

she talked to vibranntly again ,

the way she looked at D

and the way she keeps on holding his hands :D

amazing and

wooo what is coming up


excited to read and a lil scared too


LOve it Roseee !
amazing , amazing twist she is just not all fine in an instant but will take time !

OH Rose beautifull story beautifully written

understand this some stories are amazing but if write badly is utter failure

but u wtrite beautifully


i love reading what ever u write

its a pleasure and honour to call you " FANTASTIC ROSE "


Lots of love
Lots of apologies



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Posted: 14 years ago


this was the last update😲...rula diya bachchhi ko...😭...now how i give my that sher and shayari wala comment... u wanted the breathtaking comment naa...now what will i do...tell me dude


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: priya6gang



this was the last update😲...rula diya bachchhi ko...😭...now how i give my that sher and shayari wala comment... u wanted the breathtaking comment naa...now what will i do...tell me dude



awww baby dont cry

mere evi mind main ek evil plan a raha hai :P

lets not update comment on last update
unless she start a new one :P

just give it a thought

Rose hate when we dont comment :D

then she had to start a new FF

vv
hahahahhah
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran255



awww baby dont cry

mere evi mind main ek evil plan a raha hai :P

lets not update comment on last update
unless she start a new one :P

just give it a thought

Rose hate when we dont comment :D

then she had to start a new FF

<img src="https://serve.mysmiley.net/evilgrin/evilgrin0010.gif" alt="" />vv
hahahahhah


wow kiki what a gr8 idea...ok v both will not do comment on last update...until she doesn't start the new one or promises for it.
Lets see what will b her reply.
Waise manna padega kiki k evil mind ka evil plan bahot dangerous h rose k liye...hehehe

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