SS - Teri Baahon Mein..COMPLETE all parts pg-1 - Page 26

Originally posted by: --SONEE--

Hello dear

here im again😆 only i know from where i m gathering ur precious comments ..phew ..

Fifth

OMG what a horrible scene Nakku wit gun...n anay...man DSP is so dead.no no nakku is dead ..ahen ahen...god he scold her to much... here is baaji.." woh kya abhi bhi ro rahi hai?" ..awww so sweet of him😳..khud chillata hai khud puchta hai.isnt he is so adorable ..wanna pull his cheeks ..lol...lolz man... halwa scene..how sweet😳.aww glad u liked it .thank u .n really cute pal rosie..well done👏..again dis is too much fire scene..crap...again aag ke saath DSP bhi bhadak gaya.sorry dear but it was necessary to give these 2 shocks to dutta ..kaha se aaya itna danger idea..." MAIN GHAR CHOD KAR JAA RAHI HOON"...ohh noo...

Sixth

Chalo in search of nakku😛.. If his heart was guiding him right then she should be there. amazing👏...uff itna ghussa.afterall she is mrs. dsp.lolz i lik it😉... nice dialogues again.thanks so much ..special d DSP's line "jis tarah phool ko khushboo se dil ko dhadkan se juda karne par woh bejaan ho jaate hain usi tarah agar dutta ko nakku se alag kar diya toh yeh dutta toh.." sounds filmy.ha ha i know it was too filmy ..but nice one..hum bhi kam filmy thodi na hai😉😳 .yup ..

OMG D is ready to reapeat d incidence😲..god dis last para n D's words it took my heart away... really dieng to know what; s the next??? Awesome storyline rosie.feels grt to know u have liked it so far ..really u managed very well wit innocent nakku & caring Dutta.well it wasnt easy but thanks for appreciating it..n for dem Baaji is always der... loved it all ...superb dear...👏

chalo im done wit it...so hope ur ready wit ur next part😳😆

Originally posted by: --SONEE--

👏Edited😳

Hi Rosie? hello sonee

Oops too late ?.*mundi niche*without my bakbak let me start my comment yup u better ..its high time now ..lol

Seventh step:

Omg he sed dey wil visit to temple?ohh she is so excited ?n he correct her not bappa's but devi maa's temple? ohh ?how D's mind running L ?. im really nervous now :/ ???

Dey reach in temple n place looked familier to her? WHAT? all incidence shook his faith in god once again. ?? ohh nooo?fir naastik ho gaya?.ab cvs kaam he aise karte hain ..what can the poor guy do ??..

Today he was here not for his sake but for her, she believed in god and he believed her, she was his god. If today anything went wrong before devi maas eyes he didn't know himself what he would end up doing.

What shud I say about dis?im too nurvous n here she was feeling uneasy?:(

she was taking as if something terribly wrong had happened here before?

humse pucho?What had happened?..yup from here on ltl went down the drain ..satyanash ho gaya show ka .. Arrhhh? n from dis scene?till here? Their eyes met, exchanging what their hearts wanted to convey to each other. He embraced her face lovingly before leaving and both felt as if they were losing something precious.

What a lines ?amazing..thank u so much.each n every word ?every thought ?der feeling u put it so well?Kya kahu yaar?here my heartbeats r uncreased?very well written rosie?control ur heart beat i dont want u to suffer from heart attack ..lol..

Ohh noo same incidence ??? GOSH she lost balance? bleeding?.n here he start to cursing himself?for her condition?again ?

Awww D ki baatein make me all go teary?..ohh dont cry ..i cant see u in tearsnice dialogue Rosie ?..thank a lot ..ohhh he felt emotionally weak mummy oops aai?..finally AS acts like a mother and doesnt faint .. ohh she is remembering everything dats gyd?wow u write each n every important scene?superb Rosie? ..i tried to include as many as possible ..

Yeee finally he cudn't stop smiled?n me too ?.again doctor ?? GOD ?means memory is back not mental balance?hun? don't worry tu aur D hai naa?if everything will be back to normal wont the SS come to an end ???? lol

Awesome part Rosie?amazing?I'm so happy to read dis?chalo I want to read next part now?

Eighth Step:

Doctor giving his gyan? God help D?plz ?What? i knew ur eyes would pop out ..ha ha ..ahen?dutta was shocked?obviously me too?what D thought , he was right?..obvisiously 2 innocent sould would think alike .. u really saw dis kind of suggestion in movie or in serial?? ..of course and that too twice ..once in a show and once in a movie .. Really?? GOD ? horrible?..hain what is so horrible arent they husband n wife ..lol..Gud D?ohh noo AS heard entire convo? crap?now don't know what she wil do?...arrhh?bad manners ;)

Chalo Nakku wit baaji n poor D wit AS? ohh man ?he is so perfect? n der convo? ahen now I'm uncomfortable while reading it? he was right? being women she have to understand? lekin iska dimag toh kahin aur hi daud raha he?thank god he left?...u know what so many readers told me that both dutta and AS are rt in their place but u seedhi saadhi ladki will go all shy n support only dutta

OMG ? room was decorated?? ? ye AS bhi naa?haila D in such a bad state? again he went out?aww he sleeped ?so gaya?hmmm

Wow she cum der? how cute? godhi loh naa?ohh baby?...finally u liked something ..thank god .. Lolz? arhhh dis AS? anyway ?concentrate on tasha?aww MS scene...old memories .sigh sigh..golden days brought smile on face?*sigh*

Again D & AS scene?hun?I don't lyk it Rosie ye kuch jyadahi footage kha rahi hai??..lol..what footage kha rahi hai ???? maa hai uski ??omg chat pe patang..fir dhamal machayegi ye? see der she is ..for a kite???ohh she lost her balance ?hanging a wall?ohh D? ye ladki isse heart attack dilwayegi lolz?...ha ha ha .. Thank god this time he controlled his anger? lolz

OMG ?AS kya dialogue maar ke gayi?mauke pe chauka maarna koi isse sikhe..oh god after ages she is using her mind in the rt direction but u wont let it happen huh ?? not fist D?now banged ur head on wall?arrhh

Awesome updates Rosie👏?finally itne dinon baad kuch Dil se padha?.sachi ????really im feeling so good? all d scene's ?dialogue?u write ut so perfect?superb?..mee too feeling grt after reading ur dilwale comments ..thanks so much yaar tune story kaafi interestingly aage badhai hai?great? im really very sorry for late?..its ok ..i know i m very patient ..lol..lyk ur previous SS in this also u wait so much for my comments?n me useless fellow?..arey rukh yun gaye aur tareef karo apni ..main toh kar nahin sakti ..lol..wil read next part soon.how sooonnn???????..Thanks for d wonderful updates sweety?😳