Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37 - Page 73

Originally posted by: brvr

Hammie, aapko jagane ke liye, Arz kiya hai

Mohabbat karo, ibadat ke saat

pyar karo nazakat ke saat

dosti karo insaniyat ke saat

ab comments padliya na? toh reply karo sharafat ke saat😆

[hosake UD bhi]😉

Originally posted by: suhana19

Reserved
Edited 😉
Hey dear hamiee 🤗 hi,suhana
Iam really Sowiee once again Iam late latiff ... 😳
Thanx a million for the wonderful update and pm ...loved it as always brillant ⭐️ Ab mein kya bolegi ..bole toh ek dum jhakaas 😉 oye tum naku ho ya baji?..bol?
Hai major again with chunni And dreaming about his munni I mean naku 😆 ...awww he so miss her ... not bad ..bibi..humour coming out of you, me like it haaa
So major is up and ready with his gear to work up the lazy kids :...
Loved the way u describe there living ..so real ..I could imagaine it all :.hai every one is totally Fida on major .. tuhje rehana hai us barrack mein?shall I get you enlisted??.
Hain mein marjawaa what a teacher 😍 yess training skills ,teaching skills are to die for ...Loved the routine ...brillant writing ...from fitness to healthy eating habits ... bahut despo lag rehe hai tu naku/baji type!!!
The shower scene ...major takes my breath away ... oh my word !that confirms it you bad girl ..what ever hapened to the shy quiet suhana ,hammie knew few months ago ,bahut challo hoti ja rehi hai tu...
Oye girls u can drool all u want but he only belongs to naku ... 😉
Awww Naku also misses her Saab alot ...o my fav song ..love the whole part ...o Saab ..Yesss Naku maar jayegi without him ... mujhe pata hai ,tera he nehi bahut girlies ka fav song hai
O man subha subha is cat ne rastaa cross kiya I mean harshad seriously can't stand him for a sec ..arghhh ...whatever ... chup ker su,phir Harshad ke back pe you and I bet woh teri dost daya ka bhi yehi hal hoga...
I love Nandni and naku a really sweet and cute bond 😃
Baaji is back so ab aayega maaza ... 😆 Full on masti and nauntanki ...
Loved AS and baaji scene ..she sure does cover all the chicks ...awesome .. .
Naku is suprised to see baaji and baaji is shocked to see naku like 😆 But really love these two great ..hehehe she complaining about dutta"s habits ...poor naku ... ab she sounds like biwi material nag nag
So our baaji got a plan ... 😉 Played a Cupid for these 2 ...
Omg baaji also ready to knock harshad down ...but Naku says she knows to handle him well ...
Really loved baaji and dutta meeting ...great :..omg baaji making up whole story ...hehehhe ..he knows dutta well ..hitting the right notes 😆 chaal thuje bhi tu kush kerna tha ,caal smile de ab hammie ko
Hain mein phir se mar gaye ..that bike ride ...totally hawwt ...with ray ban all .."suhana faints "
Cant take my eyes of him :.. why were you thinking you were sitting behind him ?
So finally he arrived at his destination to meet and help the poor girl ..but then when she didn't speak up ...when he was about to leave she said Dutta shriram patil ...zor Ka jat Ka hai zor se laga...haaa
Haila sher just pounced on his sherni ...straight to the point ..time nahi waste karta ... 😉

loved this line suhana,what did you think ,woh hello ,hi kera ga ,I don't think so ...ponce on prey!
LovEd loved loved the whole part ..between them ...beautiful ...never wanted to end ..let the time stand still forever and ever... haan,aise hai dutta or naku ki prem kahani...oops me sounding cheesy now ...
Naku bhi na pagal hai bilkhul why did she annoy him by taking harshad"s name ..but he also should know that she only loves him and no one ...he knows how to paatao his naku ...
That bike ride was really scary ... 😆 Poor Naku ... wanna ride than on a bike?
Loved batasha in same frame ...awww ...was fab ... glad you liked it...
Once again thanx for the brillant UD ...loved it to the core ...will wait for the nxt part ...u take care and see ya ...
suhana ,thanks for your lovely comments as usual ...however hammie a bit upset ..the reason is I have a question..where is your signature picture and Dutta/Naku video ? why?have you deleted it ?...I dont want flowers I want my Dutta /Naku back as your signature ...got it ...

chaal main ne kahane tha thuje I'eve said it ..so... any way thankyou xxxhammie

Lots of love and hugs suhana

Originally posted by: AzMishy

ME :D

Originally posted by: daya0628

R E S E R V E D...😆

i am coming soon with comments ...but need to go read previous one first na lol...will try to fit it both in today ...
oh meri sharmilee...
EDITED ...

Here I am again...one after another ...could not keep away :P exam prep na ker daya ,tu mujhe marwai ge apne dad se...

Chapter 25: When shall we three meet again...

Morning routines. All getting up bright and early to begin their warm ups and considering all the need to have done as well like making beds and stuff ...thats always a good sign ...

Oh all standing in horizontal line as he checks them out...lol ...well for work purposes haha i guess inspects them to ensure appropriate and proper gear on :)

Oh what commands exercises he has given...and with what speed changing commands ...and wow ...lol ...I actually quite enjoy watching him order people like that :P and the way he directs the OUTs ...it very well written...I am not sure what it is ..but i have noticed even in films and stuff military concepts are intriguing for me ...and also love anything with like mysteries and being solved with likes of CIDs and all the fancy dancy gadgets heehee ..anyway moving back to this update...the discipline, the approaches used, standards set, the order, the routines...it just makes it all fun to read :) yeah and YOU know,me love war films, uniforms ,weaponary,brass medals ,bravado..the lot..and I think our Mishal fits into it like a pea in a pod...Aww when he was instructing them about healthy eating i had two thoughts...one of how in LTL-1 Dutta and eating were almost impossible to be linked together unless naku was in the picture but even then he was always full have one bite...and then MR *sigh* how he is such a food cautious person ...wating healthy is like his thing ... true say,have to say,that I did have him in mind ,also wanted to emphasise dietary logic as well...gyan ..naku style ..hence

OH MY LORD communal showers ...haha i loved Dutta's comment and ease with it LMAO ...all the officers seemed embarrassed haha ... oh my my hammie u r going to kill me...first he is in the shower and then he comes out in polo shirt...black joggers and his burgundy towel around neck ... I thought I would include that scene its a very

foot ball dressing room /shower room scene happens in UK all the time ..even when taking classes for swimming in school.

Aww NAKU is missing her LIVE shows lmao...OHHH hammie...madno...sajaana re u used the lines i specifically like in this song...like the whole song but these lines more so :P errr Harshad!!! I am telling the mention of his presence...just really want to whack his head with a bat :P ... I love how Naku handles Nandi ...very lovely way to create such relationships with patients... I knew you would go off for Harshad...like your saheli suhana

Baaji Baaji Baaji my man...love him ...and AS wow she does cover all her chicks...lets just hope she never falls over and faints on them jagadambe ROFL ...loved the way baaji talks about meeting Naku ..his most fav person lol for lots of reasons :D so off he goes and am so excited to see they happenings with his presence in both places.. teri jaise hai Daya ,you give surprises in your UD,tu hammie got inspired...

OMG baaji bi na...sent you as a girl and u become a boy ...well then she's the man LOL and lovevd his comments : college ki sere lardkiyaan thujhe pe fida hoon jaye gi and his ab Bhau thuje is haal mein deh le tu thujhe goli se urdh de haaa" and naku all like he did see her and called her CHOKREE BOY and him saying he doesn't hug boys ROFL ...good times na ...just gotta love the things D says lol...and Baaji is no less haha

Aww i love how Naku is complaining about Dutta to Baaji...its so cute...he wont give photo, he wont let her visit ...wont discuss work ...haha complaints for the distance really...aww baaji has a plan and am sure i will enjoy this even more...aww he wants to skin Harshad alive ...mee too ...same same...I will join his forces...muhahaha ...i will also whack him with my bat...i just really badly want to do that haha nagging naggingsome times naku ,dumb blonde bun jate hai ,she knows the snags but phir bhi

Oh i knew baaji will stand out there...he is already a shiny star and in such a disciplined...dress coded place he shows up in purple LOL ...haha

he is what he is our Baji ,simple ,down to earth

OMG ROFL ...baaji letting Dutta know about the dry fruits and saying not that you'll need them ...love that guy man ...

OH MY MY hammie...am laughing like crazy ...Baaji talking about a bechaari girl and Billa Badmash LOL and then something about land and this was it when Dutta ask what he has been doing ...he was sitting on his back side laying golden eggs indeed LOL I love baaji's plan rofl...and Dutta so worked up now...chal i knew this meeting between the three would be one fun filled one

Baji tu lotecha ka king hai! his lotecha giri rules

Chammak challo!!! :P heeehee ..i am sure his ride is ...lol

Dutta has arrived at the most awaited destination...the 'girl' standing facing away and him trying to get her to respond to him LOL and then she says Dutta Shriram Patil :D haaha and he froze...he knows LOL ...haila what a hungry man ...again starting his feasting on her ROFL...

You mean bhukaa sher arrrhhh

Loved the entire scene with Naku and Dutta...lmao oh he hears harshads name and also gets worked up like me ROFL ...haha he gives Naku the ride she wants but gets more than she bargained for..she stops him herself ...and then Baaji comes in his own ways lol and speaks his tademark way lol ..hmm it was such a nice update..me loved it all ...very well done...hmm so they have gone their own ways..now even I have wondering when shall these three meet again? have to say in a wicked evil way enjoyed this scene myself...but you know about her dress/disguise issue do'nt you sharmilee?

Hammie...loved it to the core...sach mein ...what a treat in btwn studies lol...sorry i ended up pausing in reading for some time to do something for dad and so took long...interruptions i tell u ...cant even read peacefully LOL ...

thanks for the comment sharmilee..chaal ja ab parthie ker..with much love xxxhammie

Anyway take care re...love you lots...phir milenge chalte chalte 🤗

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

hey hammie 😛 helloo ranju again

amazing and awesome update dear👏

dutta's daily routine, the officers or collegues ,girlss talk about dutta, dutta instrution about balance diet and exercise superb😛
kahana pe gyan..mishal a foodie kept all this in mind...excercise..well stamina tu test kera ga .Major ..karecter dheela nehi chaale ga fauj mein!!!
communal shower and dutta's comment 😆😉 everyone is flat at major dutta from girls to lady officers😉
yaar itne hit gaye hai ye scene...ab thore aur masala add ho ja ta tu censor ke scissor chal jati .haaa
nakku's routine and the song lovely😛

bas fimli hoti ja rehi hai chookri..dutta ko chaiye lagan bana le jald us jald!
nakku and nandi scene beautiful😛
yes i have to say i liked doing this short scene..
baaji come to meet nakku and the idea he gave to her superb😉
lotecha ka badsha humara Baji...but han he lovvves naku and that beast as well.!
baaji lie to dutta about a women seeking help and only want to talk to him 😃
lotecha giri..to the full..Baji knows which buttons to press on Dutta ,for him to comply...haaa
tasha scene amazing 😳

masalllaaa...mirch namak wala ..chat...

baaji's dialogue picture abhi baaki hai kya😆😉

haaa ..yeah baji foot and mouth disease...

wonderful update hammie👏

thanyou my dearesssttt ranju...xxxhammie

thanks for pm