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Posted: 14 years ago
good love nakku can't write big comment because of my idiot brother please understand leki after 10 day i give you good comment
Edited by rrs1391 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
R E S E R V E D...😆

i am coming soon with comments ...but need to go read previous one first na lol...will try to fit it both in today ...

EDITED ...

Here I am again...one after another ...could not keep away :P

Chapter 25: When shall we three meet again...

Morning routines. All getting up bright and early to begin their warm ups and considering all the need to have done as well like making beds and stuff ...thats always a good sign ...

Oh all standing in horizontal line as he checks them out...lol ...well for work purposes haha i guess inspects them to ensure appropriate and proper gear on :)

Oh what commands exercises he has given...and with what speed changing commands ...and wow ...lol ...I actually quite enjoy watching him order people like that :P and the way he directs the OUTs ...it very well written...I am not sure what it is ..but i have noticed even in films and stuff military concepts are intriguing for me ...and also love anything with like mysteries and being solved with likes of CIDs and all the fancy dancy gadgets heehee ..anyway moving back to this update...the discipline, the approaches used, standards set, the order, the routines...it just makes it all fun to read :)

Aww when he was instructing them about healthy eating i had two thoughts...one of how in LTL-1 Dutta and eating were almost impossible to be linked together unless naku was in the picture but even then he was always full have one bite...and then MR *sigh* how he is such a food cautious person ...wating healthy is like his thing ...

OH MY LORD communal showers ...haha i loved Dutta's comment and ease with it LMAO ...all the officers seemed embarrassed haha ... oh my my hammie u r going to kill me...first he is in the shower and then he comes out in polo shirt...black joggers and his burgundy towel around neck ...

Aww NAKU is missing her LIVE shows lmao...OHHH hammie...madno...sajaana re u used the lines i specifically like in this song...like the whole song but these lines more so :P errr Harshad!!! I am telling the mention of his presence...just really want to whack his head with a bat :P ... I love how Naku handles Nandi ...very lovely way to create such relationships with patients...

Baaji Baaji Baaji my man...love him ...and AS wow she does cover all her chicks...lets just hope she never falls over and faints on them jagadambe ROFL ...loved the way baaji talks about meeting Naku ..his most fav person lol for lots of reasons :D so off he goes and am so excited to see they happenings with his presence in both places..

OMG baaji bi na...sent you as a girl and u become a boy ...well then she's the man LOL and lovevd his comments : college ki sere lardkiyaan thujhe pe fida hoon jaye gi and his ab Bhau thuje is haal mein deh le tu thujhe goli se urdh de haaa" and naku all like he did see her and called her CHOKREE BOY and him saying he doesn't hug boys ROFL ...good times na ...just gotta love the things D says lol...and Baaji is no less haha

Aww i love how Naku is complaining about Dutta to Baaji...its so cute...he wont give photo, he wont let her visit ...wont discuss work ...haha complaints for the distance really...aww baaji has a plan and am sure i will enjoy this even more...aww he wants to skin Harshad alive ...mee too ...same same...I will join his forces...muhahaha ...i will also whack him with my bat...i just really badly want to do that haha

Oh i knew baaji will stand out there...he is already a shiny star and in such a disciplined...dress coded place he shows up in purple LOL ...haha

OMG ROFL ...baaji letting Dutta know about the dry fruits and saying not that you'll need them ...love that guy man ...

OH MY MY hammie...am laughing like crazy ...Baaji talking about a bechaari girl and Billa Badmash LOL and then something about land and this was it when Dutta ask what he has been doing ...he was sitting on his back side laying golden eggs indeed LOL I love baaji's plan rofl...and Dutta so worked up now...chal i knew this meeting between the three would be one fun filled one

Chammak challo!!! :P heeehee ..i am sure his ride is ...lol

Dutta has arrived at the most awaited destination...the 'girl' standing facing away and him trying to get her to respond to him LOL and then she says Dutta Shriram Patil :D haaha and he froze...he knows LOL ...haila what a hungry man ...again starting his feasting on her ROFL...

Loved the entire scene with Naku and Dutta...lmao oh he hears harshads name and also gets worked up like me ROFL ...haha he gives Naku the ride she wants but gets more than she bargained for..she stops him herself ...and then Baaji comes in his own ways lol and speaks his tademark way lol ..hmm it was such a nice update..me loved it all ...very well done...hmm so they have gone their own ways..now even I have wondering when shall these three meet again?

Hammie...loved it to the core...sach mein ...what a treat in btwn studies lol...sorry i ended up pausing in reading for some time to do something for dad and so took long...interruptions i tell u ...cant even read peacefully LOL ...

Anyway take care re...love you lots...phir milenge chalte chalte 🤗

Edited by daya0628 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey hammie

great update dear

love it

dutta's first day great

baaji and roops convo amazing

tasha convo lovely

wonderful update dear

thanks for p m

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Posted: 14 years ago
just read last update this one remaining
i'll be back
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi hammie great UD😊thanks for posting on friday busy on weekend ,the training part was very informative & dutta is a strict task master 😊
atlast on public demand bole toh baaji style the meeting of D-N ,😊
naku should stop giving harshad dhamke she never know the sher will wake up & break his neck ,the good thing is they have reached the comfort level & trust each other
i was thinking they will get to meet their fly too on diwali coz of vacation 😊
it was awesome & you have great writing style while reading we are transfered to the visual world 😊wish you a great weekend tc hammiee
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Posted: 14 years ago
brilliant update, good to see the OUT's moaning a groaning, such a normal atmosphere goin on there and loved the fact that baji and aayi sahab are still looking out for Tasha and liked this line 'ultimate mother ,who covers all her chicks no matter where they are with her warm feathers of love'
N really missing her saab, then she gives her care to Nandi. loved her small touches like combing her hair, i know what it's like in hospitalso when you have someone looking out for you,the small things really do count!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey hammie 😛

amazing and awesome update dear👏

dutta's daily routine, the officers or collegues ,girlss talk about dutta, dutta instrution about balance diet and exercise superb😛

communal shower and dutta's comment 😆😉 everyone is flat at major dutta from girls to lady officers😉

nakku's routine and the song lovely😛
nakku and nandi scene beautiful😛

baaji come to meet nakku and the idea he gave to her superb😉

baaji lie to dutta about a women seeking help and only want to talk to him 😃

tasha scene amazing 😳

baaji's dialogue picture abhi baaki hai kya😆😉

wonderful update hammie👏

thanks for pm


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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks again for another awesome episode, Hammie🤗

I could smell the dew on the grass and feel the cool crisp morning air on my cheeks during the exercise routine. And Dutta standing majestically nothing missing his lion-like gaze😍 . No wonder the girls are already head over heels in love with him and the guys are totally in awe.

Thanks to Baaji that Naku and Dutta met today...Ahem..Ahem😳
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Dutta should be more sensitive towards Naku and she should also stop baiting him with Harshad.😆


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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice update👏, Surprise visit of Naku & expected visit of Baji were quite good. Waiting for the next part. Thanks for the PM.😊
Edited by mnx12 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Man has will, but woman has her way!

My friday treat is here, thank u! thank u Hammie!!! Big Sorry [kaan pakadke😳] for the delay in commenting, blame it on diwali preperations., pehle bol maaf kiya phir dungi comments🤔.

Major's morning routine, his typical military style dealings with his pupils was awe inspiring, grt to see all the girls coming good at the routine. Atleast some of them are now aware of his no nonsense attitude. Who is the lady stalking him yet again, miss Bhatnagar I guess argh😈! I am imagining how it will be if ever naku happens to see major with so many female admirers as his pupils, bechari ka dil tut jayega.

Naku desperate to see him nd his obtuse behaviour not helping. The song Saajana is I feel made for this pair especially, it is one of my alltime fav❤️, as it fits the two perfectly. AS sending stuff to naku shows that she has accepted naku not just as daughter in law but more like a daughter, dil se.

Baji is the hero of this UD, wow! luvd every word between naku nd baji, she complaining like a child denied of a candy nd baji like a doting daddy immediately fulfilling her wish, hehehe! He too is worried about the mantal buoy😃.

Oh God! Naku in a gown nd a veil what an idea sirji👍🏼! Dutta fooled to meet naku, he is not complaing thou he would still show his disapproval, andarse kushise pagal, baharse khafa khafa!

Yaar Hammie maarna hai humko? Dutta firstly a shower scene then on an Harley with his glares, his beret, his uniform above all his attitude nd his looks, Gosh! How do u expect us to survive this visual onslaught.

All his discipline gone with the wind as he had his rosogulla, rasmalai, misti doi, etc in front haha!! 😆 Yes! liked this naku who was all ready to [but was she?] to severe relations, oye oye! dhamki derahi hain dutta bhau ko. Yeh hui na baat!! Girls are like phones. We love to be held, talked too but if you press the wrong button you'll be disconnected. Also felt bad for the two when, [did i read it correct?] major's eyes moist after she decided to leave. Oh! baji consoling naku by placing his hand on her shoulders was cute when she is sobbing in the jeep, sigh!

Its diwali time, so shouldnt the two have a few days off nd i also wonder howcome she has not thought of visiting her parents at the dera?

Do continue, pleazzze, and Promise will be ontime next onwards, sachi!! Take care dearest hammie, adios!! 🤗

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