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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 23

Thanks for the beautifully detailed and well written episode Hamlet🤗. Sorry for the late comment….Maafi😳

Major Dutta is back to what he loves doing. The army, duty, service to the nation, discipline and challenge, not necessarily in that order, are the things our man is passionate (Of course his queen of heart—Nakusha!) about and thrives on. It gives him a sense of purpose.👍🏼

Girls drooling over Maj. Dutta is expected but ladies beware he is already committed to his Naku in each and every sense. He just needs to make it official for the society's sake. For D-N, they already belong to eachother.

Dutta has Naku's dupatta for comfort. Thankfully we get to see the romantic side of the Major. Naku talking to the lion is so cute. Real lion na sahi tho stuffed bhi chalega after all it has been gifted by the Lion King himself.😍

Harshad reminds me of a strange mutation of Slimy Suds and Creepy More.😆

Will catch up with Chapter 24 and comment on it later.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ivy_11

Harshad reminds me of a strange mutation of Slimy Suds and Creepy More.😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 24

Another awesome episode Hamlet. 👏

The impact of Major Dutta.😍.Hai mein mar jawan. Dutta will make the perfect instructor with practical and theoretical knowledge combined with organization, attention to detail, open mind and a great attitude.

Tasha conversation was interesting but our Major Dutta blows hot and cold. Poor Naku.

The girls can dream about DSP all they want but he should think only of Naku and steer clear of them. Wasn't one Lauren enough😡

Thanks for the pm😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant update! now we get to see Dutta in action (i mean how he works and how he ticks) poor N has to work with that🤢 HARSH guy, hope she doesn't fall into any traps he lays
D is lucky having the chunni but poor N didn't even get a photo (maybe Baji or roops could post her one😆 )
Baji coming to give Halwa, wonder how D will recieve him,
good update waiting for next
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dear hamiee Sowiee Iam late ..
Reserved will be back soon ...
Hey dear hamiee"hugs"
First of Iam truly very Sowiee for been late .."maafi"
Thanx alot for the superb update and pm as Always ...loved it as always
Hain mein marjawaa dutta is going to kill ..hai yeh teacher toh jaan Le ga ...seriously gals are drooling ..well gals stop drooling ..he is hooked and booked by Naku ...
Loved baAji and roops Convo ...and AS and baaji"s Convo ...awesome yaar ...
Nandini and naku"s interaction was superb ..loved the way she explained her man ...a true fighter ...
Harshad arghhh can't stand that creepo ..so no comment ...
Finally dutta called her ..yess naku also miss him terribly 😭
Dutta And his mood swings romantic and then angry at times ..but Naku knows him in And out And loves him madly ...
The phone Convo bought tears to my eyes 😭 Awww pls make them meet soon ..
Thanx once again for a brillant UD Will wait for the nxt part
Lots of love and hugs
Suhana ..
Edited by suhana19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW Hamie loved your update awesoem read
thsnk
i coudl visualise the class room ,, and the entire settign and ofcorse hats off to you of cmng up with the terminology for the new officers ,, i felt i was attednign the 1st day of the course my self ,,
Dutta commands respect just by his attitude towards life , his work ethics and respect for privacy
rao the shy girl ,, seems to be like nakku ,,how will dutta look upn her ,,, is going to be interseting
infact how dutta is gonna behave with his class is going to be interstign
hmm this greedy reader is lookign forward to your pen or ur fingers movng faster on the key board 😆😆
loved AS worried abt her son's food needs ,, baajii worriedd abt Roops studies 😆 he is tryign to win his trust back that i for sure
omg the best is yet to cme ,,the ph convo between dutta and nakku
i just loved the line nakku tells
"Saab mein hoon na ap ka bas, ap ke dill mein, ab challo aj raat ko abhi thore der baad mujhe sapno mein apne bahun mein le laina" she whispered
loved dutta ,, missing her "this is ridiculous Naku...its becoming difficult to stay away from you" he gruffed. ,,hmmm lets see whn they meet n get married ,,,
soon
waiting for ur next update hammie loved it !!! fri is so faar 😳
Edited by prncz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update👏 He is admired by most of the students, his 1st meeting with his students was quite good, enjoyed reading about his expalnation about their work. Naku haddled Harshad well. Both are missing each other but are honest to their respective duties, very good. Thanks for PM, waiting for the next part.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

lovely part hammie loved their phone conversation a lot sorry for late comments.plz unite them soon thanx for update and pm.😊

Edited by krishaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem episode as always love dutta come to his duty and please close this harshad chapter but i totaly love it hi mate,good to hear from you,and pleased you enoyed the UD...yes Dutta proceeds with the job he loves doing...Harshad..well he is the spanner in the works...he thrives on reactions...so Naku has given him a cold shoulder so far...and as far as I know she will continue to do so...with much love xxxhammie
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: brvr

Good One Hammie!⭐️ "The one who tells the stories rules the world." (Native American proverb) liked the quote,especially the word rule...gives me a power ,supremacy feeling ...haaa ,i hope it was for me and not that Major..ju diloon pa raj kar raha hai..😉

I just had a virtual tour of the academy nd was a student myself gaping at the tutor wide eyed. Such was ur description of the entire class nd the happening there. Luvd it! Actually thinkg of changing my profession now but i guess its a tad late in the day from advocacy to military life😎.
haainn da!!yaar you in litigation..pheli batna ne tha ..Baji ka case free of charge you would have done ..but I guess Dutta would never allow any hing for free.haaa
The pupils blown away by the aura of this man nd his intensity. Well that was expected... the ladies drooling nd a couple of them taking it a bit far,... that was expected too,... but what was not expected was our Major recollecting one of them nd being reminded of naku, how dare he do that?😵
haaa yaar kitne jealous aur one track minds hain tumhare..oh for heavens sake what se did was something naku is likely to do ..look after others...jus calm down ..
Naku nd Harshad calling a truce was needed for them to concentrate on their jobs at hand atleast naku. But, she would be well advised to steer clear of this "mantally the sssick buoy"🤣.
haaahaa .this cracked me up and me floored once again..had to pick myself up bruised my bum cheek .haaa,.
Actually how i wish naku would use him to instigate dutta.. i mean behave as if things were hunky dory with harshad nd things like that, then watch the drama😆. the chances are that dutta will say naku tu ghar baith!! bas koi kam sham nehi..sit at home like a victorian times lady... aur Harshad ,i dont know brvr koi evidence bhi tu nehi hai Dutta ke pas of the man's bad be haviour??
Yeeaah, Naku is too innocent, too timid to try something like this, infact she is a bit boring for my taste. She is so giving and forgiving nd even forgeting. She has to play it haard, atleast not receive his calls immediately to start with, i know this is asking for TROUBLE, but what is life without some adventure? so you want a bit more spunk from her...well kiss shiss main tu kafi aage hai choorrie,
Yaar, Baji toh gaya kaam se, roops ka baap bangaya hai nd he wont let her breathe till she's finished her Uni i guess😃, man he needs to take a chill pill, bechari toda masti karna chahti hai Bus!
but really ..roops does take liberties especially with him.and dutta has given him a task ...and above all he does want to marry roops so he's on the straight and narrow...
AS remembering dutta nd as ever mother's pet project of feeding their sons. Hahaha! Baji on the dot,... not giving those dried fruits or anything to this man who is all but fired up anytime, sach me!!! 😆 haaa.yesss long may he live Missile Man!!
Im begining to suspect foul with your major's intentions. Khud toh maze leraha hain, aur naku ke liye mana karaha hai. He is like this cobra waiting to take a bite at every small provocation, NO photo, NO visitation, No this, No that, Not fair!🐷 Wish somebody stole the chuni nd see what happens, think iska sabr toot jayega nd he will be with naku the very next moment.
haaa ok time to get he other bum cheek to be bruised...haaa ..haven't thought of hat that would be nasty likre his woman being kidnapped!!!!!maar de ga apne ap ko!!!
Donno why i experienced palpitation everytime Bhatnagar was mentioned,,,, okie dokie! im ready for the battle of wits so bring it on baby... oh nehi yaar keen student hai if at all he admires the kuri gytsy hai
A short update as u said but nonetheless very happening one indeed. So Miss Hammie decides to get back on track with her friday schedule, TGI Friday! for me.🥳..
Thank u dear, u take care, 'ciao' till next . yesss wakeel shahiba... thank you for your case ...loved it with lots of your honour ..your honour...xxhammie
[oops!! donno if im allowed to post it other than the reserved place, somebody help! i promise not to 'res' again ever😆 comedy of errors] haaa what were trying to do me belly wobbling when i noticed the firsttime ...hopping all over the place haaa

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