Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37 - Page 68

Originally posted by: suhana19

Reserved.. 🤗 will be back soon..

Edited😃

Hey dear Hamiee🤗

Thanx a alot for the wonderful and Brillant Update as always👍🏼👏Loved it as always❤️...I know its a lot of hardwork that one have to go ...But its a worth and very much appericiated dear hamiee⭐️,,,Thanx so much ...🤗

The tittle as always Fab ...👍🏼... thanks for your praise and appreciation su

A new world with a new beginning as our brave solider steps into it once again But this time more content then before ...He is happy to be back to work ...Where he has given his blood and sweat and whatever he has earned till today ...👏...

I used this quote bcause of the play on words new and brave

Loved the details about the military college ..up too mark ...very well written ...⭐️

enjoyed writing this portion

So rahman has tagged along ...Great

Hain mein marjawaa ...Girls are already fancin him ...😆oye kudiyo zara door rahiyo ...he already taken by naku😉...So keep a safe distance from him ...nahi toh Naku is ready with the ...

To play golf 🤣...Knows to how to handle the situation ...😆

wow suhana is you new gift of jesting when giving comments

Loved the convo between dutta and that officer . rajat...great ...he wants to know when he is gettin hitched ...Well i believe that"s just a formality he already hers ...Forever ...🤗and same with her wedding ?no one knows ,not even the two

Hain mein phir se mar gayee ...he bought that chunni along ...☺️...Chori chori chupke chupke😉

Sarki joh sar se voh dheere dheere,

paagal hua mein dheere dheere ..

Teri chunariya dil le gayi❤️

aar suhane are singing this song? completey nutters courtesy of major dutta

Awww naku missing him and thinking to call him ..But then drops the idea ...and talks with that lion ...so sweet😆... the lion is her comfort blanket

Yeh lo aa gaya Dukhi and batak ti aatama isko chain nahi ... Harshad iska toh band baaja na hai hum ne oh my word this FF his becoming a batting grond a game of cricket .where Harshad happens to be the ball ..the batsgirlies Daya and now you too suhana..and asking for more ..haaa

what say daya and all the Forum friends ...iam ready with my bat ...Show him is right place ...😡 ...He better get his mind check ...Oops my bad he dnt have any ...

Good naku gave him back ...

Loved the Convo between nandani and naku ...just superb 👍🏼... that shows Naku's compassion that is needed in caring

Yipee baaji is has given a leave with a warning and with this we hope to see a new baaji ...omg he is already proving that ..been a responsiable ...⭐️...Loved him and roops ...

love baji..miss him,the guy has turned a new leaf

Hain mein marjawaa him talking to chunni again ...😉...awww but that was sweet ,,he misses her ...😳but she is always close to him ... haan chunni ka bhi role hai

Haila all eyes on our major ...But his eyes are only on naku 😉...

Waise can"t wait to see him teaching ...😍,,,,,,,,,,,

yes it should begin in chap.24

Loved the convo between Dutta and naku ..Finally she called ...😳...He is rushing ...Class hai and she is gettin annoyed ...😳...awww and asked for the pic ...But he said no ...Yeah dil mein hai tasveer ...hamesha and forever ,,,True ...Uppar se man is possesive 😆 about his women ...😉,,,,,,,, haan he is possesive.waise bhi teekh kethta hai..naku to pagal hai

thank you once again for an amusing and fun to read comment suhana ..thanks for he flowers..keep reading and enjoying my FF..WITH MUCH LOVE xxxhammie

Thanx once again and will wait for the nxt part ...u take care and see ya ...

Lots of love and hugs

suhana🤗

Originally posted by: daya0628

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Hammie mein aagai mein aagai...and with all my equipment...first self protection is important na so I have come all geared and ready to bat hahaha

oye sharmilee you sound realy militant! need to put my protective gear on

Chalo let me get straight to this ...am so eager to hit a sixer !

Chapter 23 : Oh Brave New World <-- watch out daya is coming bat in hand LOL

You know what a lovely start...he seemed so delighted to be going back into uniform and doing what he loved most. That feeling of getting it all back, very clear how much he's missed it...and the thought of getting back to the swing of things had him all happy...

once a fauji always a fauji ..even after they retire...

wow loved the intro into the Military College...from the tight security :) to the respect from soldiers...the flow of the arrangements...shows the discipline in the place...well woven together hammie...great work...

thanks daya .loved writing this bit..it's been ages since I saw an army area..basically it was from memory..grew up in Cantoment area

ROFL bat man Rahman...can I add him to my batting team when harshad comes around: P ...anyway ii do like that it's all so organized and prepared for them...

no Dutta will never let him go..ask Dutta iam sure woh tere team zaroor join kera ga!

Hmm some gals all gaga over major Saab...don't blame em...its hard not to have a fast heart rate with such hotness in front of you haha ...just wait till him being engaged comes out...so senior officer asks about ring and being married...D clarifies they are 'just engaged' ...he has by heart accepted her as his wife has he not ? so what is it 'JUST engaged :P

kya baat hi hert rate .hottness pe bahut zorrar hai.haaa.oye just engaged meaning not married yet...some times I wonder too what he's on..so elusvie this sher dil

I liked the convo btwn the senior officer and dutta...about family...and life changing ...nothing certain in their line of work...always indefinite and most loved and agree with this line here : "life in itself is another name for change, for it is random, erratic and changeable" well said...his entire dialogue {applaud} well done...wise man ...sure does think thoroughly about his every move...

thanks khabi khabi for a change...i may come out with some profound😉

Much like Rajat..we all are wondering when Major plans to get official hitched :D jaldi batao :P

yaar even dutta and naku dont know ...may be Bappa knows?

Oh ho ...he brought the chunni...that was expected...his sweet fragrance filled baby is with him haha ...

comfort blanky baache ka awwwh.

Aww Naku is so cute...talking to her lion ...pulling his whiskers ...hmmm slapping gently on its face...and wondering whether to call or not...but made the decision to let him call when he has time and test the waters of distance: P lion king naku's comfort blanky

Ohhh she will confront Harshad...hmm...perhaps my bat will be useless if Naku can handle this pest on her own ...oooh la la ...naku spitting fire at Harshad...am loving it :D

well I think this one was coming..i told Naku DO IT ..other wise balla le ke wack kere gi on Harshads block

Again dialoguing done btwn Naku and Nandi ...very well done...the way she comforts the crying young girl...you have nailed it.. the way u mention 'i cannot say i know how you feel but..." that is perfect beginning ...cuz saying i know how u must feel only makes is sound fake ...and then this line 'think of life like a game of cards ,how you play the hand that you are dealt..that's what makes a winner!' I believe there is a quote quite similar to this..but I love this line :D

loved writing his part..enhancement of Naku's role ..the lsaying?is it life is like a box of chocolates??

Oh this harshad ! eerrr I have brought my bat hammie...u said u wanted to see me hit a sixer na...first take a look at my beautiful bat

Ab if naku does nothing..I will step in :P

the bat is hamazzzing Daya...haaa 😆😆..you and suhana are on a roll with new found love for batshaaa

😲😃😃 haha harshad gave her the wonderful opportunity of yelling ...

Bach gaya saala...from me of course and my batting...lekhin not from Naku ;)

for the moment daffa kr us ko ...dont forget Naku ka colleague bhi hai

Ohhoo ROFL...wohoo Naku gave it to him good ...and me also cheering with the others in the room hahaha

ye harasssment ..go get girl ..but hai he besharramm Harshi

😲😲 'tera gussa se bhi pyar jahlaktha hai'😡 omg my my ...he does not want me to leave him does he... go on DAYA swing the bat haaa

Baaji brought to magistrate...and again ...dialoguing here to was wonderful...his guilt to the magistrates understanding of Baaji's guilt yet still concerned for the situation is not to repeat and clearly states the repercussions if he dare do it again...aww baaji thnking about the stigma now associated with his name...but hopefully that will be gone soon...

yes this was hard to do as have not really been to court room proceedings , but did want to make a ho ha about drunk driving ..hence

Aww loved the way Baaji makes Roops go to uni and attend the remaining lectures..very responsible...and it's one way he hopes to redeem his tarnished image...aww and he is home sweet home :)

Loved the car convo btwn Roops and Baaji ...lots of respect both share for Dutta and both are willing to ensure all is well...

thanks...again to big up Dutta..also how he wors no dilly dallying

Aww omg chunni all entangled and him questioning 'baby what have you been up to' ROFL ...his relationship with this chunni is going strong haha

yeah had to give him something tfor time pass😆

Haaye haayee...Major Saab coming out of his vehicle ...what a description 😍

mar gaye tu..cheez he aise nayeeb

haha the girls are all realizing who he is...haaye haaye there is a sharmilee in this group :P ...of course all chking him out ...no reason not to ;)

yesss she's dedicated to you😉

8males and 7females...oooh this should be fun...

the girlies would may be drive him up the wall thres 4 in his family and now naku 5th poor DUtta FEMALES KA MARA

Ooowww tasha phone convo :) finally they talk ...haha his no picture policy...damn possessive man HAHA... hmm so no tasveer for her ...call ended...

WAISEbhi do you seriously think us ke tasveer! lagye ga?i dont think soo

:D precap = love it...am quite excited ...waiting for next UD soon :P

thanks daya for your timely comments such a great girl you are...never disappoint hammie..with much love hammie

Great update hammie...loved it to its core...thanks for such a treat...

Love you lots...take care...phir milenge chalte chalte

Originally posted by: prncz

awesome updte hammie 🤗

good to hear from hear from you raguuu

loved the way u described dutta's drive to the instituion ...the entry , the statues, the road signs ,security n all

i could visualise alll 👏👏 thankyou raj...loved writing this section

the girls all fidda on the wel muscled, broad shouldered man in civilian clothes ,, n now in uniform ,,hmm lets see hw major dutta sets thm right if they try to cross the line i can see it cmng ... haaa cross the line i love this line raju well said

loved how nakku took cre of harshad epi of lying , but the humiliation has no eff on him looks like ,but nakku is no less she will face him one on one, in cmng days , hai na,,😳 i certainly hope so ..sherni full on kafi kuch seekh gaye hai dutta se

aww bajji has been freed with a warning , I wanted to see that only i am relieved n he is so concious of gaining dutta's trust ,,he will ,,he is next best to our dsp 😳 love Baji too have to have him do his bits

thnx for the lovely update hammie loved reading it ,waiting for mre

Editied ,, Hammie i forgto to say Dutta hidign nakku 's chunni and sleepig wth it as naku with her tiger was a clasic tght and scne 👏 wow what language raju ...me shy wiye... be sharam hota ja reha hai pyar mein

and dutta's reply for pic.i understand that ,,, i too belive in keeping the pic in mind and heart is more imp 👍🏼 thank you for agreeing raj..

thanks for your lovely comment ..read the next one when it comes out ...xxxhammie

Nice updte👏 Both have resumed their duties. Harshad is going to be a pain, Naku will handle him well. It will be interesting to see Major Datta in his classroom, handling his students.Thanks for the PM, waiting for the next part😊

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

Hi busybee, Hammiejee! Thought u would be struggling even on monday to UD but u surprised with this late sunday night delight. I was so impatient ended up ruining my sleep. there's no pleasing you is there?

It is rarely spoken but the truth behind many joinin the army [atleast in India] is not all bravado but the basic need, a means to fend for one's livelihoood. They find this life bumpy risky nd unpredictable. But for men like our major who knows where his heart is, its smooth sailing or as bumpy as any place. One word defines life and that is indeed 'Change', well said Hammie! .

Aaha! Major's white lie

Naku reconciled to the new reality of waiting for his one communication. She proved to herself that she was capable of handling her problems. Harshad seems to have lost his mental balance too. I mean he is stooping too low wonder how naku even tolerated him earlier. well I thought because, he was first a class mate and now a work colleague..

Who is this new guy in the name of Baji? What transformation? He is on a mission to set records nd reputations straight, hope we dont lose his ever endearing personality in this mission😊. new baji ..but the guy he does muskaryee with is missing DUTTA! plus his Bhao has left hm so many orders to carry out .so he may goo who am I?

Dutta in his uniform will be the death of all. He is all but unaware of his effect nd already into his job at hand, how can one be so aloof. Naku's demand for the photo was met with scorn from the other end, poor girl🥺, she will have to just do with 'Sheroo' for now.🤗 WELL IF HE wasn't so aloof and awkward he wouldn't be Dutta would he?

Thank u Hammie dear, sorry 4 bein selfish for the updates, cant help it either. Bracing for another week of delays, will wait as ever, do bear with my new found luv for shayaris haaa.😆 ..thanks a lot for an interesting feed back xxxhammie carry on reciting verses