Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37

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Azy

@-Azy-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

Thank u sooo much for the long update Hammee :D

Will come back with my comments soon ;)

So till then

RESERVED... :p

I typed a one whole essey like comments only to go kaput in the net!!!!😡

so this will be a short one... sorry😒

Major Dutta in an angry mood n missing his early morning Tea...

and doing the work out alone...

but Nakku comes he put up this "i dont wont ur help" act😛😆

ohhh he is so hurt is she has her own plans in life... come on major she said na if Bappa think so na😉 Bappa wont do that😛 he will put her straight in to ur arms to ----------😍 [senserd for small kids😛]😆

the outing scene n the Dishoom Dishoom was

he looks mighty Hwaattt when he is majorly pissed off☺️

serves them right😡

LOL ... AS is in action n Gadha says nothing like that kab suderain ga...😕😆

Baaji u have to do some thing😛

and the pre cap .. Ganapath😕

thanks for the superb and long update😃

i read this 1st thing in the monrning n i was in a this some evil Dinchak mood i typed a whole long update but kya karu all gone..

but this FF ka asar u can c from Raj s FF😛😆

now soon update the next part.. will be waiting to know what our M. D 's plannig to do with Mrs . D😉😆

Edited by AzMishy - 14 years ago

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suhana19

@suhana19

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#172

Omg thanx a lot for the long update🤗

Reserved🤗😉

Edited😃

Hey dear Hamiee🤗🤗🤗

Thanx alot for the wonderful and lovely long update and PM yaara🤗Loved it to the core❤️

Wow they are both in love ...can"t wait for the confession 😍me waiting eagerly ...now i wonder if major is going to put is foot forward😆...i hope he does ...coz he is so deeply in love with naku ...

Omg gadha throwing tantrums in btwn ...old habbits die hard...😳...wasie loved there outing the songs were great and Dutta standing up for the ladies ...😍 he looks more hawwt when angry ...

So finally AS asked D about what he thinks about Naku and whole marriage part ...Awww D is shy ...Omg loved the last part ...tasha romance ..."sigh Baaji KMH"...Haila ganpat is back 😲i hope he not here to take her back or is it marriage issue ...Omg cliffhanger ...pls jaldi update karo ...thanx yaara ...u take care and see ya around...

Love and hugs

suhana🤗❤️

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mnx12

@mnx12

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+ 16

Posted: 14 years ago

#173

Very nice update,👏👏 very well written movements between Datta & Naku. Ganpat want's to talk about Naku, must be about her marriage. Waiting for the next part, thanks for the pm.😊

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norey

@norey

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#174

that was an awesome update but i wonder if Dutta will except Nakku and marry her now that he knows her dreams, hope he does accept the marriage proposal and give a positive answer to ayi saab

keep the updates coming 👏

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Warda.

@Warda.

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#175

i ve edited my comment...sorry for the delay 😳

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naina

@krishaa

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#176

hey lovely update as always,hope ganpat will not create any problem in tasha marriage,may dutta agrees to marry nakku soon,please make it soon may be in your next update,update soon.thank u for update and pm.😊

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#177

how do you get better with vey update ? superb loved it ,ganpath ke entry looking frwd i hope he is different from the serial ,i hope dutta says yes for the proposal ,aab mishal ke tarah iexcessible mat hona ,update soon waiting for it 😊

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#178

awesome update hammie
He stopped her to go to university so that she can't meet that boy ah jealous Major Dutta Sriram Patil...everything is fair in love and war and its love
and nakku great she understands why he say all this wow what a love.
Love their little fights
Har baat par naraz ho jata hai major and naku hamesha manti rehti hai exactly opposite is going
baaji like always funny person
i think Dutta don't want her to work and hope so he say yes to ayisahib after listening nakku's answer.
doubt that ganpat is here to tell AS that he finds a boy for nakku and doubt that dutta will agree with him as he don't want nakku in same condition as his AS but that's sure he can't see her with some other man so he will say yes immediately if ganpat is there for nakku's marriage
i know after reading above lines you will be throwing chappals at me for writing such a mess
love the update hammie

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.scorpio10

@.scorpio10

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#179

@ Hammie

Sorry Girl for commenting late . Someone just rubbed me on the wrg side ..so needed time to cool

On to the update…Naughty but Smart Dutta …I like it , he was not upset to see her in the sexy avatar. If there was another guy apart from him ….. there would fireworks but even with the fire there was smoke . What a smart boy to use the situation to his advantage. Hahha loved it

Nd the next day ..Too restless to see lady love ..too see if she did as he told her to ………She loves him too much and he is being a baby . A baby with mood swing and tramtrum ..But yet very very cute

Oh ! He is feeling low becoz he thinks she her career is more imp than him ….someone pls this Baby that a girl can handle both career and home quite well . Nd wait he went all shy why when AS mentioned shahdi with NAKU …Dil mein Ladoo aur zaban pe na

Now with entry the Father of the bride ..Kya Hoga Major Ka