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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
kya karu hammie ur update as always is totaly awsome so tumhe bhi entertain karna toh banta hai na ;-) waise everythng i write is exactly how i react 2 reach scne lol mwah.xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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edited my spot :)

i just posted last night i wanted an update and in the morning i got one ...my luck was good today :P


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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
Loved it..now get Dutta back to patil niwas asap..so that nakku dutta can fall hard and fast..loved the jealous dutta...hoep to see more of that..thanks for keeping the convos in english it makes reading so easy..

wow some research u have done on physiotherapy..quite awesome detailing...u put so much hard work in your updates that it shows...and u leave me stunned with your command on english...

tahnks for PM dear!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
Hey dear hamlet,

Its a superb update . I really love long updates. Your writing skills are awesome . Hats off to u .👏

Dutta with his rascal so energitic and funny . I love the way dutta treats and interacts with naku and throwing tantrums at her . He already fallen for her but trying to avoid that feeling . whenever opportunity comes he stares at her so romantic .😳

Dutta's interaction with his army officers at shakthi ward is too good . Naku can't stop crying by hearing how dutta injured . Dutta finds that she is upset after hearing how he was injured .

Dutta asking her what she will do when she married to a soldier and after hearing her answer he decides to stay away from her . But he could n't . So lovely interaction of tasha .❤️

Aai saab and dutta's interaction is so heart touching . Duji interaction is always hilarious .

Dutta always trying to avoid naku's touch inside he knows that he had already fallen for her but don't want to accept it . Feared of naku's closeness .😉

Baazi wants to test rascal funny . Ohhh good naku's class mate harshad came and dutta is so jealous and possessive . I love love to see this jealous and possessive dutta . Dutta saab u even can't bear any man's presence also beside her and u thinks that u don't love her and strictly wants to keep her away from u . 😊

Its not possible dutta saab ur heart always wants to be with her , ur mind says to stay away from her . But finally always heart wins naa ? can't fight with ur feelings so long . ❤️

Lauren another physiotherapist to dutta . all the physiotherapy sessions are so funny . Dutta's reaction to each of the and naku doing all to him are really awesome . dutta's stubbornness and throwing tantrums at naku funny .😃

He just enjoys and feels her touch each and every second and wants her to be with him always . He had fallen already for naku no doubt . while massaging he just dreams of naku and he always staring at her beautiful face so romantic . 😳

He can't bear naku's absence even for short time . Duji drinking as usual .

Oh naku 's exam and she won't come to dutta for 2 days and dutta asking her "waapas to aayegi naa " .Oh god i miss mishal much much when reading this ff . 😭

Waiting for the next update filled with tasha romance . Please update soon.😍


This is swapna . Its difficult to check it out daily . So Please add me to ur pm list yaar . Thank u .



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Posted: 14 years ago
#95

Very interesting update,👏👏👏, Waiting for the next part, thanks😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ dg thanks for your feed back haan drama baaz hai Dutta! drama tu kara ga lardki pe roub jo jamana hai.. glad you enjoyed it..me to love him loads!

@shil glad you liked the english dialouges I still think they sound blaah! but kya karon ,guru ke advice tu maniy parehy gi. oops hope you can read this goobledeygook! yes I get what you mean!
@ziks thanks for your great long feed back ,you see it shows a readers appreciation for a writers pen and imagination .. sure Mishal is a hard to follow ca't really shrug him off! so our show about him and his love goes on,haina.kye bolti hai?
@ eternity/luv thanks for reading the update,lovely to catch your remarks encourages me to continue.
@ mnx soo pleased you enjoyed the update,as much as Ienjoyed putting it together for you...here's to Mishal/Duttaaa arrrh
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
hammie u updated??😲
gosh how did i miss this?
ahhh i think i did not receive ur pm for this update. did i?
will come back later to comment..*runs to read*
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
like always you are great ,thanks for mentioning the dutta is based on mishal ,he needs our support fb message proves it ,plz update soon looking fwd to some explosion from dutta on nakus query
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
Hey Dear Hamiee🤗
Thanx alot for the wonderful update yaar ...LOved it to the core like always 🤗,,,,,,
Dutta is having with rascal😆...Iam loving Tasha"s Interaction ..just awesome ...😍...He is having feelings for naku but dnt wanna show it ...Gadha kahi ka😆..i know i know it takes him time ...But i will wait 😉till he confess his feelings😍
Awww she went and cried and he understood ...Omg she said she wont let her hubby go away from her ever ...😳...Dutta is in dilemma😆...But aint working for him either ...he is falling for her even more ...
Omg he was jealous ..seeing naku with harshad😆,,,naku knows that ...and wouldn"t let him drop her to library ...this going to be good ,,,,

Haila he wants her bk in few hrs ...Iam loving this ...
Awww Duji scenes were cute and even loved AS and dutta"s interaction ...she bought the whole shop for dutta😆

So baaji told Dutta about how naku feels about him ...but he thinks otherwise ...

Wow the whole PT part with lauren and Naku ...was very well written ...
Loved the update ...Superb👍🏼👏
.Thanx yaara,,,,will wait for the nxt update ...pls jaldi update karna ...
U take care and see ya around
Love and hugs
suhana🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

@ nakku thanks for your comment x hammie

@ sona thanks for your comment hunxxhammie
@ suhanaaa. phelay apnay pm[3] check kar lardki🤔 .any way thanks for your emocon remark ..loved it ... keep them coming hummm ..xxxhammie

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