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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

OMG Rose !

i deserve all the abusive words present in the world !

im so sorry , i though i have just not commented on this one ,

actually the last comment was ready nd i wrote my comments in Ms word and it was saved in their

i though i have posted it

im sooo sorry

Plz forgive me !

i will be careful from next time and will never make u angryyy!

coming to part 2

Dude im confused now whay are u lashing at me !

first part pay comment hua hai , second par hai and its short , uknow the treason

and third !

Oyee Kal u updated part 3 and today she are dhamkifying me !

OH MY GOd tum ko Rose kaho ya chota DSP !

ek din nahi guzra and u calling me dhoke baaz :P

God Rose , you are too much but u know what i was in need of some dhamki

i will cover part 2 also , cuz my comment on part 2 update is yuckkk !

ok so here it goes !

the pond scene !

its just too good to b etrue ,

i love the fact u take her to pond

where first time D says it all to her

and ROse wow and wow D appears and ask why she take so much time to remember her !

nad her reply !its magical ,

the dialogues here are the ones which touch ur heart in the way that u just want to hear them ,

theyhave a pain in them !

LOve this part that all bitter memories are gone cwhen she came adn Rose what a point ,

he nevr mind what evr and whoever thinks whatever but with Naku , he doesnt like the way she thinks ,

he want to tall her his truth !

why ? cuz he cared abt her a long time , he took alot of time for realization

but the love for her was alwys tehre !

and his dream ,

the dream his eyes are still seeing but he knows he cant have them

but his Naku will take care of his every dream and she will make sure his dreams didnt ruin ,

they will come true !

and he disappears then leaving her all alone !

but tthank god , when their is faith ,

God hates to break our faith and there we have our Dutta living for the faith Naku has in him and her Bappa !

part 3

and nooo who is this gyu who is now become D body :(

but love Naku loove for D , she is not beliveing it and neither she is going to !

she make her point , if she is alive its mean D is alive !

the love she has for D is immeasurable . its illogoical but so pure so true !

LOve taht she didnt care and left the house !

and OMG DUtta is tied up and they are giving him injection , i love how Dutta think quickly and went back to sleep making them Fool 1

he is a real sher ,KINg of Pailwadi !

and yes he make him self free !
aw D is remembering Naku on everyting !

and Naku goes to mandir now she is through all , now she wants DEvi Maa to doa ll !

she wants her D backa dn she will have it nd DEvi maa will make it sure that it happens !

This update is classic ROse !

and the shayari by u is just sooo pre , straight from heart !
love it !

and the picture says it all !

cant wait !

Though u hate me

but i still love you :P

and cant stop from telling u how fantastic you are !

OH MY Fantastic Rose !

i may get late but dere is no way k i wont read ur work !

so chill babyyy !ok

ab ur wish is fulfilled its my turn now !

i wnat next update realll soon :P

warnaaa😡 u dont want to hear that :P

and oh yeah the most imp point Rose i love how u use natural setting in describing their love in STM !

u once describesd

the dialogue which im nevr gonna forget "

main jalta hau suraj ho and ur the sea and main tum main doob jata ho !

god they were magical words

and here u told abt"" aur tujhe mere itne kareeb dekhkar abhi jaise suraj in lehron mein doob raha hai tab chand baadlon mein chup jaaye":

beautiful dialogue my ANil Deshmuk :P

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Angel_Mishee

@Angel_Mishee

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Hey just read all three parts...thank u for bringng dutta back...nalaykon ne dutta ko drip laga diya it must be hurtng grrr...waiting for next part :D

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

@ azymishi ..thanks a lot dear for appreciating the updt . m glad u liked it so much ..will updt the next part soon .
@ sinak ..thanks so much

@ geeta ..hey glad u liked the updt ..hmmm i know waiting for tasha reunion . dont worry will try n updt this weel itself . and thanks once again

@ divya ...yup time for tasha to meet ..hopefully in the next updt ..thanks for enjoying this one too

@ mlshe ..so happy to know that u liked this part so much , will updt soon and hope it lives upto ur expectations.

@ spandy ..yup our nakku is fearless just like our dutta , glad u liked the updt ..now time for tasha to reunite , hope u enjoy that part as well. so happy to know that u could feel tashas emotions now wont keep u waiting long for the next part and thanks so much

@ dutta rose ...omg u read all the 3 parts ..m impressed ..yup someone is drugging dutta but dont worry our sher will bounce back soon

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

@ kiran omg kiran first u say sorry ..plzzz forgive me for late comments and then u start bashing me up😲 ?? ur making me sound like phoolan devi aka bandit queen 😒😆...dear when did i threaten u ???😲 i just asked u to comment as ur always very quick with ur comments and i wait for them impatirntly .😳.phew ..but if someone reads ur latest cooment then god save my image ... coming to ur valuable comments like always they were wonderful n fantastic .👏..really they make my day ...glad u liked all the 3 parts so much and even remembered STM while reading them .😳.well thats huge compliment ..but baby stop calling me anil deshmukh its really embarrassing ..ha ha ... ok now coming to ur demand ...will updt soon 👍🏼..promise but expect u to reply also soon ..u know i dont like to wait .🤗

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: stranger2rose
@ kiran omg kiran first u say sorry ..plzzz forgive me for late comments and then u start bashing me up😲 ?? ur making me sound like phoolan devi aka bandit queen 😒😆...dear when did i threaten u ???😲 i just asked u to comment as ur always very quick with ur comments and i wait for them impatirntly .😳.phew ..but if someone reads ur latest cooment then god save my image ... coming to ur valuable comments like always they were wonderful n fantastic .👏..really they make my day ...glad u liked all the 3 parts so much and even remembered STM while reading them .😳.well thats huge compliment ..but baby stop calling me anil deshmukh its really embarrassing ..ha ha ... ok now coming to ur demand ...will updt soon 👍🏼..promise but expect u to reply also soon ..u know i dont like to wait .🤗

Hey Rose

you know may be i have over reacted , actually im guilty thast why over reacted :P

kya karo even my reputation is at stake :P

and baby who knows u well know u no Phholan devi

though u can be PHOOLON ki Devi 😳

u stop writing amazing dialogues , i stop calluing u Anil Deshmukh :P

nd im so ready b

bring it on :P

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

@ all hey gals i have uptd the 4th part on the first page ..will pm u tomm ...sorry

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

coming with the comment :P

Ahhh Rose !

what can say ths update is just mindblowing !

im head over heels for thios one !

The way she didnt care abt the sun she is so determined !

she knows she will have him back

her faith is getting strong with every new step !

and dere Dutta the kind of our hearts lying like an injured Lion but when he heard abt

that his so called dead body is sent to his home and everyone belived except the one

they even didnt say her name he wouldhave known its his Naku ,s

and the faith Naku on him that he is alive , did make him alive ,

when he knows he is at roads looking for him

it worked as magic , he know he had to get out at anycost 1

and the sher was back ,

he out class everyone , NO one could stop him now !

No one can keep himaway from his Naku

na there his Naku doing the prayers and when her saree got stuck , she thinks he is back awww

poor Naku she look back with so much hope

but all went in vein !

and she called him in pain "" sahab ab wapis laut bhi aao , meri umeed tootne se pehle, mere bhikarne se pehle mujhe sambhalne ke liye aa jao."

awww

andthen he sses the face of culprit , he didnt belive

but like always he didntlost his temper he had only onething in mind

Naku all alone

and he left to look for his queen :)

and OH MY God !

he is there he stopped her the way , she thought

but she didnt care but then the way hehold her tells a million story !

he was resting hischin , he wants to get lost in her

and she too dint believe first

but it was destined !

and finally the hug
which i was waiting , the way he tightens his hold , giving hera tight hug !

and the dialogue she says

so true

ahab apke aane ki khushi se zyada mujhe apko phir se khone ka darr laga rehta hai

she is so right !

how can she forget thatthey just meta nd were seperated :(

and oh my gdo Naku fainted !

im scred though i would love when D holds her in his arms !

OH rose fabulopus update this is !

Loved it so much !

You again prove who u are to me

MY Fantastic Rose :)

Edited by kiran255 - 14 years ago

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Priyanka gangwar

@__priyanka__

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Reserved
its my spot
EDITED :

Bhej kar comment humne tumhe yaad kiya h

Phir naa kahna nazar andaaz kiya h

Naa koi shikwa , naa koi bahana hoga

Ees comment ki kasam tumhe abhi muskurana hoGA😊😊😊😊😊

Hiii Rose,😊😊😊😊

What a nice update👏👏👏👏👏 , iam in tashaland.

So, our sherni nakku started her journey, that's great ( it reminds me the old LTL )

Wow dutta smiled on hearing that his nakku is the only one who had believe that the dead body is not of dutta, her saab is alive, really she is really a different woman much stronger than her husband wid her belief , wid her hope , and wid her true love.

I heard a story from my grand ma when iam almost of 9 year old, that story was of three friends (1) education (2) money (3) belief.

The three friends love each other so much, but a day comes when they have to say good bye to each other. The three frnds questions each other that where they will go????????????

Education said that " I will go toward temple and school "

Money said that " I wll go toward rich people "

But belief , he remains quiet and not utter even a word.when the other two friends ask him for the reason of his silence, he takes a deep and cold breath and said that " main ek baar chala gaya to phir kabhi laut kar nahi aaunga".

Today my grndma is not wid me but her stories of love, belief, hope always remains in my heart.

Okkk bahot sadness failadi , now its time for tasha reunion. J

Thanks rose for this awesome tasha reunion , its above my exepectatoins. She felt being pulled back by something, I thougt that dutta comes but no it was a spectulation. Wow how cutely she said that " saab ab wapas laut aao , meri umeed tootne se pahle, mere bikharne se pahle mujhe sambhalne k liye aa jao".

And then again she felt being pulled back, I thought now it must be her dream but no its not dream , dutta was really present there.

Its superb rose👏👏👏👏👏👏

Loved the romantic scene between tasha, especially when nakku took his wrist in her hand and kissed it gently which brought a smile on his. Face. And said "ye sach h nakku".

Owww

Loved the tasha hug😳😳😳😳😳

But ye kya nakku faints, dutta shooked her, tapped her cheek but she remained unconcious.

Kaun h wo jisne dutta ko kidnap kiya, jisne do pyar karne walo ko juda karne ki koshish ki, kya dutta or nakusha jeeyenge apni aane waali jindagi khushi khushi jaanne k liye Intzaar karna hoga rose k agle update kaa'''''.

ROSE PLZ UPDATE NEXT PART AS SOON AS POSSIBLE😊😊😊😊😊

Edited by priya6gang - 14 years ago