SS - Fanaah Ho Sabhi Dooriyaan LAST PARTupdt pg-1 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
hey nice update dear...
so dutta is aware of his surrounding...interesting...
looking fwd...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
Wow Rose!!! amazing dear how u write it so beautifuly!!!
Loved it so much n plzzz update the nex part soon!!!
Can not wait to c the re union!!! * dreming muh*
Thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
hey rose,

the update was very nice dear... so, its time D meets N...

waiting for the next part... jaldi, jaldi update karo...

tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
simply beautifful...dil bhaat aya in donu ko aise dekh kar...seriously no wordz 2 describe der love...n ur wrote is with such each n it flowed so gracefuly...
thnx 4 pm hun
do cont soon...wil b waitin 4 all d dhooriyaan 2 disapear...leaving tasha in eachothers embrace...safe...x



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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
Hi Rose,

It was really nice...can't wait for next update...Hope they meet in the next update...Thanks a lot Rose...Loved every bit of it...😊

Plz update soon...😊
Edited by chitrakshgeet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
Rose very well written ,awesome part ,dutta is back and some injecting him😲 who is that ,oh our nakuu again in trouble but do not lost her hope ,this is our nakuu not the one present in the show,dutta to in same stage his first worry was nakuu hope he goes to her, very well chown the feelings of Tasha👏she is going to temple hope she finds dutt soon😳 precap tasha union😳😊,can not wait for next part jaldi update karo😊

PS:Hope in serial also we will see soon our dutta back in action thanks for writing this and making me smile
Edited by spandana11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
@ minaxi ..thanks a lot dear ..nakkus prayers will be answered soon . wait for the next part

@ pooja ..glad u liked the updt , yes nakku doesnt lose hope so easily and thanks for liking the poem

@ eternity of love ...yup tasha will meet in the next part for sure , hope like that updt as well

@ pinky ...omg u read it so quickly this time ..hmm.. m impressed ..and thanks so much for appreciaiting the updt

@ bluepal ...thanks so much for ur positive feedback will updt soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
Oops sorry rose, don't know why i forgot that. When u send me the PM earlier abt ur OS, that time iam little bit busy, i saved that page to read it later but i forgot .so sorry dear, give me a tight slap...
Iam not ur heart ,but i miss u. Iam not ur family, but i care for u. Iam always ready to share ur pain becoz iam ur idiot frnd.
Ok i will read it now, and then give u comment.
Sorry again
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
Hey rose,😊😊😊
i read it, what a nice update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Where is dutta , who are these strangers, why are they injected the glucose bottle connected to him via a drip and now whose body is this?
these question are now start performing marathon in my mind vuuup suspense suspense susoense🤢🤢🤢

I loved the dialogue of nakku when she said " meri saansein chal rahi h naa , mera dil dhadak raha h naa, yeh sab kaise hota agar saahab zinda nahi hote" ( hopes and belief never dies )

Wow dutta woke up when he felt being called by her, thats the true love.
He remembered how whenever he got bruised and everytime his dear nakku tears her saari to wrap it up.

So nakku is gone in search of dutta.😊😊😊😊

Yup ur update lived upto my exepectations and now iam waiting for tasha reunion.

i know that i will remind the tasha reunion of LTL-1 by reading ur next update.


So update next part asap

Hey rose,
How dare u to said that iam no more interested in ur writing, don't say that again okkk ( i know that there was my mistake that i forgot to comment, pr iska matlab ye nahi h that i don't like ur writing anymore)



Here is some lines for u ( i also wrote it for shilpi earlier)

Takdir par aitbaar kisko h,
khushiyon se inkaar kisko h,
Arre LTL forum m h aap jaise FF writers👏👏👏👏👏
warna hum to kabke LTL forum ko alvida kah gaye hote😊😊😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: priya6gang

Hey rose,😊😊😊 hello priyanka
i read it, what a nice update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 thanks so much
Where is dutta , who are these strangers, why are they injected the glucose bottle connected to him via a drip and now whose body is this? they r injecting sleeping medicine so that he doesnt wake up coz u know our sher is impossible to handle when he is awake and glucose bottle is attached to keep him alive as far as who these ppl are havent given it a thought m more interested in tasha reunion , dont want to give importance to these new characters like NS or deegu introduced by cvs
these question are now start performing marathon in my mind vuuup suspense suspense susoense🤢🤢🤢 ohhh dont worry about who is behind all this just think about tasha leave the kidnapper to rot in hell

I loved the dialogue of nakku when she said " meri saansein chal rahi h naa , mera dil dhadak raha h naa, yeh sab kaise hota agar saahab zinda nahi hote" ( hopes and belief never dies ) thanks again , yup true love n hope never dies

Wow dutta woke up when he felt being called by her, thats the true love.
He remembered how whenever he got bruised and everytime his dear nakku tears her saari to wrap it up.

So nakku is gone in search of dutta.😊😊😊😊yes our sherni will bring back our sher once again

Yup ur update lived upto my exepectations and now iam waiting for tasha reunion.hope u enjoy the next part as well

i know that i will remind the tasha reunion of LTL-1 by reading ur next update.well keeping my fingers crossed , hope everything goes down well


So update next part asap

Hey rose,
How dare u to said that iam no more interested in ur writing, don't say that again okkk ( i know that there was my mistake that i forgot to comment, pr iska matlab ye nahi h that i don't like ur writing anymore) m sorry what to do i got such a lack lustre response this time so thought may be ppl are now no more interested in reading my updts . but glad u r still with me ..THANKS SO MUCH



Here is some lines for u ( i also wrote it for shilpi earlier)

Takdir par aitbaar kisko h,
khushiyon se inkaar kisko h,
Arre LTL forum m h aap jaise FF writers👏👏👏👏👏
warna hum to kabke LTL forum ko alvida kah gaye hote😊😊😊
WOW beautiful lines

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