SS - Fanaah Ho Sabhi Dooriyaan LAST PARTupdt pg-1 - Page 3

Originally posted by: --SONEE--

Edited :-) 😳

Hiee Rose🤗aa sonee tenu chand ki main choodi pehnawa ..lol.

soo sowree for late.but i still love u the same oh god 😡..😛omg...wht an update yaar simply superbbb👏👏

wow ...loved evry bit of it.thank u so much jee .n lyk always ur dialogues*sigh* superbbb👏

ok let me start...first ws nice wer N tk AS's care n all...i thought ppl would find it boring but glad u liked it ...but later wen she cm to pond ..yup pond pa aaya asli mazaa.wow...all flahback scenes run infront of my eyes😳 wen D drag N to dat pond arrhhh kya awesome epiz tha yaar...n omg wen i read dis... she opened her eyes and found him sitting next to her, throwing pebbles in the pond "aaj itni der lagadi mujhe yaad karne mein, kabse tera intezaar kar raha tha." The disappointment was clearly visible in his tone, ...omg i ws lyk 😲 he is here?? how?? ohh dam.yaar till now u should have known that she was remembering him and this was the way she connected to him ...soo amazing yaar...my heart ws jumping lyk errrmmm...anyway😆... ...but finally he smiled😍 arhhh .yup his million dollar smile ..wow...

n ohh god... Aur waise bhi intezaar main apka kar rahi hoon?subhah sham raat din , ab bahut ho gaya laut aao nah, itna pyar karte ho toh kyun itna door rehte ho." He lowered his head and didn't reply " wht an emotional n heartwreanching part..ohh i know tasha miss each other badly but dont worry main hoon nah , they will meet soon ... her fellings n Dutta's helpless..both r visible in dis lines*sniff sniff*

u always show D is laid on nakku's lap😳...is it ???? yah sometimes i had shown such a scene in sweet tasha moments as well ..sorry repeating myself but it was unintentional ..believe me ...favo scenerio😉...awesome...n kya sapna tha yaar.ohh wish this dream cms true .. jheel kinare ghar...os ki boonde ..waah waah😍...awww aur tujhe mere itne kareeb dekhkar abhi jaise suraj in lehron mein doob raha hai tab chand baadlon mein chup jaaye" She pressed her lower lip slightly and moved her head back in shame..awww choo chweeet😳 dis two lines r awesome...one is very very sad n other is soo romantic😳

"par nakku hai toh yeh sapna hi, aankh khulte hi toot jaata hai aur aansoon niklte hi beh jaata hai." & " main apke sapne ko apni palkon mein sajaa legi , inhe toot kar behne nahin degi , jis tarah apka pyar inmein basta hai usi tarah ab yeh sapna bhi meri aankhon mein chamkega aur pura hoga." yeh khwab jald se jald pura ho 😍

awww Kissed on eyelid😍..yup the way she said she will keep his dream in her eyes safely ..😲he had disappeared once again, 🥺 ...nahinnn arey stop crying he will cm back dont u remember the title ..fanaah ho sabhi dooriyaan ..so just wait for sm time...😭 saab...again u brought tears in my eyes ..but nakku dint cry brave gal😛

laid unconscious , with hands tied to the cot and eyes flickering to open he whispered softly "NAKKU"... 😲 what ?? tied to d cot?? who d hell did dis?? Nana sahebbb i hope ye is story ka villan ho.who cares ??? atleast i dont for me the real villian is someone else ..coz i dont lyk dis character*shakes head*

Dat ws awesome Rose loved it.thank u so much ..u disappear for some time n i end up writing something lol..very beautifully written sweety👏...now plzzz jaldi se second part de do😎.yah sure miss cool..

@ pinky ...thanks so much for ur wonderful words of appreciation and glad u liked it so much n found it romantic. i need to thank u once again for sending me and sonee that testimonial , its beautiful

Good update, Naku doing parikrama, let's see how fast her wish is granted😊