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Angel_Mishee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

Hey kirran...soo glad u are enjoying the whole ff... next part asap...hope u keep reading...

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mnx12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#112

Nice update Thanks,👏👏 waiting for next part😊

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Angel_Mishee

@Angel_Mishee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#113

Hey ranjana u are first to reply wow and this time after pm lol glad u enjoyed the whole update and sahi kaha our dutta saab is a sweetheart and not a trouble maker i wish he comes back soon...next part asap..hope u keep enjoying it...

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Angel_Mishee

@Angel_Mishee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

Hi dhayani...soo glad u are enjoying the whole ff... And i knw mere se a little angry too that i made naku loose her voice...but yaar i want dutta to fall for naku all over again...hope u understand...next part asap...hope u keep reading...

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Angel_Mishee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#115

Hey mnx...glad u lyked this part...next one asap...hope u keep enjoying it...

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spandana11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#116

Part 14 Ek Ajnabee

Naku stood staring at the dead goons when she hears dutta almost yell at her before he closed the door- -ANDAR HII REHNA...JAB TAK MAIN NAHIN AATA...baahar matt aana...THE door closes and naku realising dutta must be out alone fighting the rest of them...rushes to open the door...only to find it closed! Worried she leans against the wall and closes her eyes...TRYING TO MAKE SENSE OF THE THINGS HAPPENING AROUND HER!...NAKU KNEW HER LOVE ...HER DUTTA...WAS A CRIME LORD WITH A HEART OF gold and bloodshed had become a way of life for him!...ONCE AGAIN...MEETING HIM IN A SIMILAR SITUATion...where naku had often found herself...being with him...SHE REALISED IT WAS ALL REAL FOR SURE!...WHAT SHE didnt understand was why didnt she saw the love she... last saw in his eyes ...the night before they went to temple and lost him!...why did he seem to be different...why wasnt he acknowledging her...naku wished all her fears were wrong...

Naku opens her eyes and notices her reflection in the mirror...her heart stops beating as she walks upto the mirror to take a closer look at herself...she stares at the redness in her maang and then at the blood spread all across...she recalls dutta wincing in pain as he had closed the door...and as she realises it must be injured dutta's blood...a smile crosses her face...and a sense of relief calms her...NAKU KNEW FOR SURE THAT IT MUST BE HER DUTTA SAAB!...just then a series of gunshots are heard outside...colour drains off naku's face as a wave of nausea hits her...thinking dutta might be hurt!...she rushes to the door and begins to bang on it hard ...desperate to get out and make sure dutta was fine...

Outside dutta is busy fighting all the goons...inspite of all the pain he keeps on beating them hard...when he hears one of them call out to him--iss ladki ki jaan pyari hai toh ruk jaa...(lol this gunda has no idea ki dutta ko iss ladki ki jaan kitni pyari lol)...dutta turns around and seeing him hold naku at gunpoint...makes him dead angry...he leaves the man he was beating and walks upto the gunda who held naku hostage... The goon laughs with his fellow men about how true a lover dutta was...and doesn't realise when dutta reached him and kicking him hard he frees naku...making her stand behind himself...he snatches...the gun and as a horrified naku watches on...dutta guns down all of them in one go!...

Turning around dutta glares hard at naku almost wanting to kill her...he shouts--PAGAL HO KYA?...MANAA KIYA THA NA?!...MANA KIYA THA BAAHAR AANEY KE LIYE TOH KYUN AAYI!...the goon had heard naku bang at the door and decided to hold her...naku remains silent and dutta notices tears well up in her eyes...and he finds all of his anger melt away as he says softly--APNI GALTI KI WAJAH SE TERE KO KUCH HO JAATA TOH MAIN...MAIN APNE AAp ko kaise maaf karta?...naku still doesnt speak...seeing her quiet dutta asks her---kya hua chup kyun hai...theek toh hai?...naam kya hai tera?...NAKU FEELS THE GROUND Under her feet give way...as she feels dutta's last words bore her heart like a dagger"NAAM KXA HAI TERA"...AND THE REALISATION TORE HER APART!...DUTTA DIDN'T REMEMBER HER...AND WHAT SEEMED MOST LIKELY...HE HAD LOST HIS MEMORY!...AND NAKU COULD FEEL WARM TEARS ROLL DOWN HER COLD CHEEKS AS SHE FELT HELPLESS THAT SHE HAD NO VOICE TO TALK TO HIM TOO...

hope u liked..😳.

Edited by spandana11 - 14 years ago

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Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#117

once again me first yippe😛

poor naku can't tell him about herself and their relation
but love the way dutta save her
after hearing last line from his mouth ,she will surely understand that he has lost his memory that's why he is behaving with her like stranger
love the update
waiting for next and thanks for pm sheeba

Edited by eternity_of_luv - 14 years ago

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mnx12

@mnx12

Channel Moderator

+ 14

Posted: 14 years ago

#118

Nice update👏Thanks Sheeba😊

Spandana,thanks for pm😊

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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#119

oh me last agen i ges

oh wel..

nywyz u wrote it all so wonderuly sheebz

i loved it hw she realisd d blood on her maang

n duttas conern 4 here...sent me bak 2 tashaland...

ha naku bein d sherni she is..i knw she wont stay inside n watch it all silently!!

awww dutta's dialogue 1ce agen left me speechless wen he sed he wudnt he abl 2 4giv himslf if anythng hapend 2 him...bless

n nakus tears dus somethng 2 him na...hope he dsnt jus leav her der while she jus cries 4 not being able 2 say or do anythng...she is so vulnerable...poor thng...

sheebz bbe i miss u n ur regular updates...plsss cum bak agen...pretty pweez.x

Nd pls update soon...

ps.sory cudn use my other emoticans..dey wrnt wrkin 4 sum resun lol.x

Edited by mIsHeZ.x - 14 years ago

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Swapna

@ziks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#120

Hey dear sheeba,

nice update . somewhat story is moving now .

But really feel sad for tasha . How many difficulties they have to face god looks like born to face the problems . 😔

Dutta fighting and naku confusion at his behaviour .

even though he did n't recognise his naku he still feels so protective of her . ❤️

Naku looked at her maang and feeling happy but not for so long she now knows he lost his memory .

Oh god what a tragic condition she lost her voice , he lost his memory asking her name . I pity her how her heart would have broken when he asked her name .💔

Bring back happiness soon to tasha . can't see them like this .😔

Thanks for pm . waiting for the next update.

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