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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi kirran glad u lykd this part too yup naku lost her voice and i m sure u wil agree as to why i thought of it...next part asap hope u keep reading!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lol omg dhayani u used blue font to match ur dp pic par dear i thought u used it coz its mishu's fav colour
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: dutta-rose

Lol omg dhayani u used blue font to match ur dp pic par dear i thought u used it coz its mishu's fav colour

lol both works na his fav color to match my fav man pic ..me also very fond of that color ...beyond words can explain ...I have so many blue things at home ...itz not even funny ...my mom is like i am banning u from buying anything blue from now on...i also like red my but i dont really have anything red😆 except lots of stuffed animals holding red hearts or something...maybe itz the red heart i am fond of lol i dunno :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 12 Ik Mulakat Zaroori Hai Sanam

Its late in the nght...Naku lay fast asleep in the hospital room...u see her having flashbacks of seeing dutta and how he shouted at her...naku wakes up with a start...beads of perspiration streamed down her forehead as she looked around and found no one there. ..she was thirsty and seeing baji stand outside the room talking with roops...naku tries to call out to him! But NO! Naku heard no voice! It seemed she was talking to herself! NAKU gets up on her arms and TRIES TO SPEAK AGAIN BUT IN VAIN...she fell back on the pillow...tears rolled down the sides of her eyes...as she realised that she had lost her voice!...baji and roops who had come inside had reen naku fall back in bed crying and the UNDERSTOOD SHE KNEW! Roops walks to naku and embracing her forhead she says--bhabhi aap chinta matt karo...aap zaroor theek ho jaogey...NAKU SMILES NODDINg her head...and after a while when baji left to drop roops back at patil niwas on naku's insistence...NAKU LAy ALL ALONE...STARING AT THE dark night from the nearby window...

Naku lies alone staring into the dark sky visible frm a nearby window...tired she feels her eyes heavy and closes them...lost her voice...and left challenging her sanity after seeing dutta...naku felt her heart ache more than ever before! And as she remembered vividly all the moments spent with dutta the song Janiya plays from the movie haunted...TUJHE PAA LIYA YA Kho diya...ISS BAAT PAR DIL RO DIYA...TUJHE RAKH LIXA INN XADON NE...IK PHOOL SA KITABON MEIN...ISS DIL MEIN TU RAHEgA sadaa aur mehekega inn saanson mein...raaton mein tu jal jaata hai...CHEHRE MEIN TU Dhal jaata hai...taara hai tu mujhmein toota saa...neendo se jagaa deta hai...PALKON KO BHIgo Deta hai...DARIYA HAI TU MUJHMEIN DOOBA SAA...HAR WAQT KHWABON KI TARAH TU AATA RAHA JANIYA...JANIYA O JANIYa...DIN KYA RAAT KXA AAHAT HO KOI TOH LAGTA HAI SADAA...KI TU HAI WAHAN JANIYA...

The song ends and Soon naku falls asleep...wishing lyk always That she wouldnt have to live another day without dutta...its almost midnght and the guards outside naku's room had gone to have some tea and baji had yet not returned...the hospital staff was gone too except for a nurse who was busy sleeping in her room...a black sedan comes to a halt outride the hospital and u see dutta gets out...holding his shoulder and a gun in his hurt hand he opens the back door and throws out a man all beaten and bruised...he glares hard at him and says--CHAHOON TOH YAHIN TERI KABAR KHOD sAKta hoon Gaikwad...par nahin...TUJH JAISE DHOKEybaaz KO ZINDA CHOD RAHA HOON ...TAAKI MERA DIYA HAR ZAKHM TERE KO YAAD dilaata rahey ki tunney kitni badii galti kii hai...the man falls unconscious...and dutta turns to sit back in the car when he feels dizzy...he stares at his bleeding arm and realises the Knife wound which he had sustained while fighting all the gundas was quite deep and he had lost quite blood too ..dutta tries to gather all strength and decides to go into the hospital and attend to his wound first and then set back for mumbai...and after he is gone in u see the other man take out his phone and say--woh...woh bach gaya aur andar haspataal mein hai...the phone falls from his hand and he falls back unconscious knowing In NO TIME MORE OF HIS MEN WOULD COME...SAVE HIM AND CAPTURE AN INJURED DUTTA EASILY!...

Inside dutta walks along the dimly lit passage of the hospital...he was beggining to feel the pain all over his body...and staggering in between he kept on moving ahead hoping to find some place where he could find the right things to look after his injuries...JUST AS HE reaches outside nakus room...he..STOPS...HE COULD HEAR FOOTSTEPS BEHIND HIM...THEY WERE QUICK...HURRIED FOOTSTEPS...AND DUTTA WAS LONG ENOUGH IN THE buisiness to understand what was going to happen next! IN A REFLEX HE OPENS THE DOor behind him and entering the room he closed the door behind him...ONCE INSIDE HE LOOKS AROUND THE ROOM AND FINDS his gaze fixed at NAKU LYing in the bed...

The flute music plays in background as dutta reaches naku's bedside and found himself staring at her beautiful face and lost in her child like innocence as she slept like an angel...he found it even hard to take his eyes off him...he notices a window behind her bed and bending over her headside he tries to reach the window ...and wincing in pain he moves aside the curtains to look outside with his injured arm...SOME OF HIS BLOOD DROPS ON HER FOREHEAD AND SMUDGES ACROSS IT...while dutta looks out to find a dozen of jeeps and he clenches his jaw in anger...as he drew back the curtains...he steps back to see if he had woken up the girl but what he saw left him stunned...THERE WAS HIS BLOOD FILLiNG UP THAT GIRL'S MAANG...AND TO HIS OWN SURPRISE...DUTTA WASN'T CURSING HIMSELE...HE FELT WHAT HAPPENED WAS RIGHT AND THAT THE GIRL BELONGED TO HIM!...

HOPE u all liked this part too😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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me first
i think i haven't given you a chance to send pm dear sorry for that

awesome
beautiful update
love it
feeling bad for naku but love the last part's last line that she belongs to him

fabulous dear

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey spandana,

Nice ff .

Very pathetic condition of nakku . Poor naku can't see her in that condition she lost her voice also . Oh how many problems she have to face more ?😔

lovely scene of tasha . Dutta comes into her room , stared at her beauty and innosence and admires her 😳 but oh god still he is unable to recognise her .

Naku's maang was filled with his blood unknowingly . Lovely and heart touching scene . deeper side he knows she belongs to her but he can't recognise her . 😭

Please get back dutta's memory and unite tasha . we can't bear tasha seperation for so long . 😔

waiting for the next update .


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ahhh


OMggg !

D and N in same room !

and D blood on N forhead

yahooo !

Im so loving it :D

This is aweosme :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi ranjana ya wow u were first to reply great! Glad u lykd this part too...now u knw why i made naku loose her voice? I didnt want her see him and scream saab! I want dutta to fall for naku again!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey mnx glad u lykd this part too...next part asap hope u lyk it too dear!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi zikes glad u started reading the ff enjoyed it too...next part asap and wow love ur profile pic dear...

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