New Short FF '~Miracle~'updated EPILOGUE on Pg 24!

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#111

hey bushra

lovely update

so they both are in love with each other but they both don't know

dutta can't even remember her name and gonna ask her name 😆

wow itni baar milne ke aur help karne ki baad bhi naam yaad nahi lagte kafi weak memory hai😆

love the update
thanks for pm
looking forward

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Subii

@Subii

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#112

fundoo update bushy.. 👏

wow! they already in love my my!😍

the song is one of my favs... love this song..

so he came to the even.. such a cheeky monkey he is!😆

such nai bola that he was forced to come by her and not his mother..😳

loved the way they both were thinking about each other! same thoughts crossing both the minds..

plz update soon.. i am desperate to see how they will express their love to each other..

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Khushi

@--khushi--

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#113

Hey whyn't u lyked this part??????

hua kya hai tujhe upset kyun hai???

yeh le ek biggggggggggg🤗 & ek piyari si 😊 ....................

Always keep smiling dear..........................

Its a nice update dear..................

his mom teasing him................. thats so sweet.............................

Thank GOD he went to event.................... I thought Gadha Sachi mein nahi ja raha..................

he is so lost in her that he didn't even noticed her mom..................kuchh nahi hota beta ur

mom noticed u 😆 ............................

Hailla ye Gadha bhi na, he forgot her name......................

So finally they r falling for each other.................

waiting for next update............................

thanx for the pm & update soon................

always cheer in lyf 🤗 ................................

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Sophia Khan

@Sophia21

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#114

Woooo beautiful Update Bushy..

Hailaaa wat a choice of song... one of my favorites!

Lool Dutta to gaya kaam se lol..

Awww AS had to force him.. but im so glad he actually came and was stunned by her voice n song!

hahahah he wanted to drop her home ... awww poor him..maybe next time when their parents aint around!

Im feelin a bit scared now.. thinking she might be ill n that.. *shudders* no no bush aint that mean .. Nakku is fine!

ohhh maybe her dad is ill!

ahhh I wnt even predict... will just wait lol..

Awesome update.. continue soon :)

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Bushra Iqbal

@Sanely_Insane

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#115

@SOPHIE: OH my my...U didn't reserve a spot...direct to the comment😲

*rubs eyes* 😲 Sophie..u COMMENTED 😲

Ok i should stop being immature...😆

will reply to everyone's comments later 😆

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prncz

@prncz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#116

Hi Shursh's Chulbul 🤗//that was lovely update, dutta is a good person,, he dnt want to go but yet buckled under his mom ;s pressure 😛 upar se he offerd to drop her , you may show him as a happy go lucky person but he is a gentle man within,

the song sequence was so romantic ,,u picked an apt song and described the entire event so wonderfully , i coudl visulaise the kids dancing , she singin and dutta walkjng in trance

hey he doent remeber her name ,,cool .but is thnking abt her all night long,.... hmm,, kya hoga aage,,, eager to read post update soon

🤗

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Sophia Khan

@Sophia21

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#117

looool...

If i reserve a spot then I won't even edit it for comment any time soon.. so i thought i wud comment directly lol...

hehehehe

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Naina :)

@NainaSengal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#118

amazing update hun----ust loved it how his mother pull his leg...LOL

uploD asap......mwaaaaaaaaaaah

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usha

@ushankitvc

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#119

a nice updt........... His mom forced him to cum to the function......... god he acted to hav no interest in her.......... he is rooted to spot listening her song and then kept moving towrds the stage as though possessed by her............ Both are in luv with each other...........

Looking frwrd fr nxt updt.............. updt sooooooooooooooooon.............. thanx fr PM..........

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#120

lovely jubbley bushra and you said you dont like it,,,I thought it was well written,quite romantic, in places humorous with his dry wit... and of course the Dion song choice was befitting... one time in my life the words ...once more you open the door...used to make my eyes well up........ they still do ,on account of Dutta and Nakku not being before my eyes ,any more... I also understand your un willingness to write ,and being depressed.... i felt like that today when I was updating something i had started on Dutta/Nakku.

still thanks and waiting for the next one luv, thanks for the pm too x hammie

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