New Short FF '~Miracle~'updated EPILOGUE on Pg 24!

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@ivy_11

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#131

Thanks for the update Bushy.... Beautiful, innocent and its got a freshness.

Thanks for the blue jeans and white shirt casual attire...have often wondered how he would look in them😳 ( instead of the brown/green/ matron/?? jacket and checked shirt of the CV's)

Positive Ganpath is so sweet. Loved the way Dutta asked for his permission to take Naku out on a date.

The Priority No 1.. is an interesting challenge😆

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@tinkerbe11

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#132

OMG Bushy....I luv u, noo I luv urr Duttaaaa !!!!!!

Howeva many tyms I say dis it will never b enuff, ooohh dat was such a perfect date.....😍

dat was such a gal meets boy kinda ting, and t didn't need all dat extra bling bling lool, dat was gr8....i luved every bit of it, the whole situation wid it's simplicity keeping the front seat, well DONe !!

I soo luved his appraoch on how he said 'i dnt hav gf coz ur nt allowed a bf'..!!!! WOwowWow

....but i hav 2 admit i did feel a litte jealous....

ooohhh Bushy, such a wonderful luvstory, ur doing real gr8 hun, it's fantastic, i'm not one 4 d typical dates, but sumtyms dey do happen 2b more perfect den ne other given efforts....superb !

okkkaaay, u know i fink dat Daya's cracked the code of d teaser....😉😉😉, cz walk to remember is indeed lyk ur ff....but i'm def nt complainin😛

Bushy pls pls update soon...

Main aur patient nahin ho sakti....😉

Tink😉

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Khushi

@--khushi--

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#133

oye hoye Bushy Awesome update..........................

wow yaar Loved this Dutta.................. he is sooooooooo straight forward....................

he ask her dad for permision...................... and the way he started with that her trust and all , Ganpat deffo confused with this & thought isse pehle yeh fir shuru kare han bol do 😆 .............

date pe jane ke liya itna ghumaya , shadi ke liya pata nahi kya karega 😆 ..............

OMG he asked her for kiss soooooooo innocently & kiss 😍 😍

their convo is superbbb .................. So he is Nakku's first priority & I hope soon Dutta will prove his self too.............................. Thanks for such a wonderful update Bushy 🤗.......................

update soon................................

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

Alumni

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#134

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Ok i have to say this........Bushy this FF reminds me soooooooo much of a walk to remember

lol so much like every scene has given me that impression ......i keep having flashes of that movie

not being allowed to date, the asking her father on a date, her list....the date ..😆 hmmm i need

to watch that movie itz been a while

as for your update love

amazing.....enjoyed reading every bit of it........ love how Dutta is getting up earlier now...

and just walked over to her house for no reason....

i loved the little part about flirt that was soo cute, haha cuz shes not allowed

aww and the way he asked for the kiss it was soo sweet and innocent

and then thinkin about priorty list lol well hez already no.1 on it now :)

I loved that ....great work bushy in writing this i absolutely loved it

and i love that it reminds of that movie so much from ur teaser to this

itz by far one of my fav movies and now this is one of my top fav ff :)

keep it up.....and do update sooon :P

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Shally

@shally_m

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#135

very nice update ..... can't believe that dutta went to ganpat's office for permission to take nakku out for date 👏👏👏👏👏

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#136

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awesome update👏

like the way in which he asks permission from her and then from her dad for a date😳
love the way he admires her and asks for a permission to kiss her.😍
she understands him perfectly 😉
beautiful update .👍🏼
thanks dear for pm

Edited by eternity_of_luv - 14 years ago

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#137

Bushra ,firstly thanks for your pm got it this morning,...

yes read chapter 4,loved it especially Dutta's display of gallantry in asking for permission from nakku's dad. Enljoyed the conversation it was very to the point,no faffing about. Also worth mentioning is the conversation between Dutta and nakku after dinner very true to their characters.I liked the Dutta's thoughts behind the choice of venue for the date meal,very good! waiting for the next one buddy...

ps have you read my update of dutta nakku baji shopping from page 2 check it out,i think its on pagge 4 of the forum..see what you think?

xxx hamlet chaz

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chithoo

@chithoo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#138

Whooooo Bushy!....................you are on a ride..😊...........literally😉............

first of all, the scene in the restaurant when he got up and wiped the cream off her cheek.😳😳😳....i was like bushy stop coz u seemed to be in a hurry to end it..................damn😡 somebody pull the reins of that horse so i can enjoy the moment....... the scene has scope for so much more romance😕...........but it ended and i continued reading cursing you all i can.......but where did it lead me..........😍

chandni raat.😳😳...........flirting datta😍😍........and THUD SWOONS................a passionate kiss on their first date😳☺️😳☺️..................LOVE U GAL...........😛😛😛........

daya.....kuch to seek...........at this rate,

by the time your DN have their first kiss 😳

bushy's DN will be having their first kid 🤣

chal dano....er bushy......

thanks for starting my week so beautifully😛......🤗

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-Srushti-

@-Srushti-

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#139

Ghar pahonch gaya Besharam...Ladki na naam bhi nahi jaanta and ghar pahonch gaya...Gadha kahika😆 ..
Flirt bhi kar raha hai...usi ke ghar mein..wah wah!! and he asks for a date.and gets permission from her father...so sweet....reminded me of a scene from a movie 'A walk to remember'....I love Nakku's simplicity yet humourous perky nature....
Oh he is not in her priority list is he?😆 that was such an outright lie.. but I liked the way he wants to become her priority??
and how can you say you are not good at romantic scene..the romantic scenes to Chulbul aisa laga you wrote after wearing your dil wale glasses😳😆

Thank you yaara...Chulbul wonderful update....🤗