New Short FF '~Miracle~'updated EPILOGUE on Pg 24! - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
today is tuesday still waiting for ur update so plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
Sorry dear for commenting sooooooooooooo late................ Finally read both parts.................
nice start Bushy .......................... wow Dutta is achha bacha .......i lyk it................
He doesn't do betting & all................. but his frnds, they r not good............... he has bad company................ Hope it will not effact him.................. So she work for NGO...............
good............. Oh second meeting in just few hours.................
he didn't left her alone............... he is a gentelman.......................
So finally he is going to accompany her to her home but dunno want to tell it to her...............
OMG he screamed on her............... so he is not intrested , dont worry dude u
will soon😉............................ Dutta said this right, girl has guts.................
and he confessed that he is here just to drop her.................. oh so he is a careless spoilt brat.......................... I wondered he must be.......................
oh they again met................. n he actually went to her.....................
didn't expect this from him.................... I thought he must be sadu types but m glad that m wrong...................... he is touched with her words .................. and he actually think for that..............
I think soon he will start taking care of his father's business..................... he helped her in preprations.................... so sweet of him.......................... Loved both parts Bushy ...............
thanx for the pm dear ......................
update soon....................
BTW u r supposed to update it today 😆........................
Edited by --khushi-- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
Chulbul😡
Tere ghar me aisa kaunsa calender hai jisme ab tak tuesday nahi aaya😡
U better update soon, warna u know i am always ready with my famous belan 😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: preety_219

Chulbul😡

Tere ghar me aisa kaunsa calender hai jisme ab tak tuesday nahi aaya😡
U better update soon, warna u know i am always ready with my famous belan 😉😆

Tomorrow pakka....😳
u see i updated my long ff yesterday 😆
so my this ff will be updated tomorrow.....no more shikayat 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
Finally Edited my comment lol...
Im sorry for the delay..
Hailaaaaaaa I don't like Yuvi's prediction!! *Facepalms*
Nooooooo she can't have cancer.. She's absolutely fine :(
Haina bush?? Please say yesh! :(
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
Hello everyone! Not a lot of talking from me.....will just give you the update......Not in a mood to speak! 😳

~ Miracle~

Chapter-3

The next day'.it was the same day for Dutta'but a different day for Nakusha'.it was the day she waited for'.the day for which she planned so much'.she worked hard for this day..it was the day for the charitable event'.she was happy'.she was nervous'nervous about the event'and she was scared'sacred because she was going to sing in that event'.the last touches were being given to the venue'.the last rehearsal was going on by the kids..who were to perform tonight'..the time flew like a jet plane'she thought coz it was already 5 pm'she was making all the arrangements'getting the props and the kids ready'..the guests started coming'.the back stage was looking like a market of many sellers trying to sell their products'.and the customers showing their skills of bargaining'.it was noisy'.and irritating'.

Here at the Patil House'It was a usual evening'.with the servants doing their daily chores'.the head of the house Shakuntala Patil'.busying herself in prayers'.she was ready in her royal cream color sari'. She stopped her prayers when she saw her son coming down from his room'."Hey mom'.you are going out?' he asked'.forgetfully'.

'Hello son, it's not just me who is going out'it is WE who are going out' she said nodding her head slightly'. He stopped his arms in the mid way as he was stretching them lazily''Where?' his eyes spreading wide'..

'To the charitable event, I told you about it didn't I?' she asked'.expecting a yes from her son'.

He dropped himself on the couch covering his face with his palms'.'Mom, you know I hate these events'they are so boring'.and what am I going to do there?' he asked'.irritatingly'.

"Give me company'.simple'.and I promised Nakusha'.that we both will come'' she tilted her head at one side'..'she came forward 'And I heard that you and her get along well' she asked teasingly'."Who?' he asked looking at her mother in a questioning manner''You and Nakusha' she raised her eyebrow'.controlling her giggles'.he looked down''No, it's not like that'I was just helping her'.stop making a mockery out of it' he rose and started walking'.saying for the last time that he won't come'.while his mother just stood there looking at her son go into his room'.

It was 8 pm'.his mother was gone losing hope that his son would accompany her'..he was still in his room'..

The event started'..with the little kids dancing adorably'.not knowing what was happening around them'.they didn't knew why so many people sat in front of them'looking at their dance'.they just danced because their sister..Nakusha told them to dance and their teacher taught them dance'..they enjoyed every moment'.shaking their little legs to the rhythm and spinning their arms to flash the ribbons tied around their tiny hands'the dances stopped amidst a huge noise of claps'..the kids were taken in'.and there were many such dances and skits..and dramas'..performed by those little kids'.little angels'

Soon the event reached to its last and the much awaited performance'..The singing by Nakusha Mahale'..

There was a silent spread across the auditorium when she approached the mike'.wearing a pink knee length frock with leggings complimenting the frock'.he hair were open'.few strands of her silky black hair laid in front'.. 'she looked at the crowd'who was waiting anxiously to hear her singing'.she was sacred'she closed her eyes'.prayed to god'.and the music started playing'.she started singing'.

Just click on the "listen to song" option and listen to it while reading the following update 😳

Every Night in my dreams

I see you, I feel you

That is how I know you go on

She felt someone around her

Far across the distance

And spaces between us

You have come to show you go on

He came in'.and stopped near the doorway'.

Near Far wherever you are

I believe that the heart does go on

Once more you open the door

And you here in my heart and my heat will go on and on

He crossed his arms across his chest'..a sweet smile playing at the corner of his lips

Love can touch us one time

And last for a lifetime

And never let go till we are gone

He felt each and every word that came from her lips....he scanned her every move'

Love was when I loved you

One true time I hold to

In my life we'll always go on

He started walking forward'not caring about anyone'.not even his mother'.not beating his eyelids for even a second, he kept gazing at her while he still walked'..He stood right in front of the stage'.just looking at her in awe'.

Near Far wherever you are

I believe that the heart does go on

Once more you open the door

And you are here in my and

My heart will go on and on

She felt someone's gaze on her'she opened her eyes'and found him admiring at her'.lovingly'.

You're here, there's nothing I fear

And I know that my heart will go on

Just when she saw him her voice rose high'she felt as if she got the inner strength'

You'll stay forever this way

You are safe in my heart and my heart will go on'.

She smiled at him'moving her palm towards her heart'fixing her gaze on him'.

And the song finished'.they both were lost into each other'when they were brought out of their world by the roaring sound of the applauds'..the whole crowd stood up'.and applauded her'..

His mother was looking at her son'.she could say that he was changing'.and this change was good'.she smiled'.He was still standing in a freeing motion'and before he could capture her last glance the curtains fell'.he looked around'.and came running back stage'.

"Hey," he said from behind'she looked at him.. "Damn'you sing so beautifully'.I mean it was so'.so'' he was struggling for a word'a proper word'.when she tried to help him''Melodic' she said'.moving her head forward'

"NO, it wasn't melodic'I mean it was melodic...but it was Heavenly' he said'smiling'.and hitting his head for his goofiness'.

"Thank you, for liking my singing'and thank you for coming'' she said frankly'.'I thought you wouldn't come'' she chuckled'.

'Well'.your singing forced me to come here'' he laughed'

"Glad to know that my singing was the reason behind your coming'but one thing'.how did you know I was going to sing?' she raised her eyebrow'.

He looked around'he choked'.ran his fingers through his hair...of course he couldn't say that he was forced to attend the event because of her'..he had to find a reason'an excuse'"I was forced by my mother'.so I came little later'.' He sighed'.finally finding a good excuse'

"Thanks to your mother then'..for bringing you here'' she chuckled' "Ok..now, I have to go'.bye'good night'and take care' she picked her coat and smiled at him''May I, May I drop you?' he came forward''Thanks'.but you have your mother waiting for you'.and btw'.i have my father waiting for me too' she nodded and went away'.

That night'.was a sleepless night'to both of them'.he was walking restless in his room'.and here she was turning her sides lying on her bed'.there was no trace of sleep on her face or her eyes'she sat up'."Ahh...what's wrong with me?'' "Something is wrong with me' he said walking up and down in his room'.'Why am I unable to sleep?' she asked herself''Why am I thinking about her?' he asked himself'confused''What effect did he have on me that I am not able to find peace at all?' she asked herself frustratingly'.'She has made me crazy' he said'looking up'.'I am going crazy" she said..worried''God I don't even remember her name and she has already made me crazy" he murmured placing his hand on his hips''The name Dutta is making me go insane' she said'walking up to her window'."Am I in love with her already?' he asked himself'.widening his eyes'.'Is this called love?' she asked her God'.looking at the dark sky which was brightened with the light of the moon surrounded by those twinkling stars'.

She sighed''God can I ever see a falling star in my life? 'she asked her God'.diverting her attention from Dutta to the stars'in minutes'."I'll ask her itself'what her name is? I'll try to sleep'' he convinced himself'lying back on his bed and pulling up the duvet to cover himself'.while she slept too'.after thinking about him'.


Hope you guys like it.....as i don't like this part at all.....i was so depressed while writing it that i have no idea what i wrote

Sorry guys if you don't like it.....Press the 'like' button ONLY if you like...no compulsions...and leave your comments....criticisms will be appreciated too 😳

Love

Bushra

Edited by Bushy_92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
My spot Chulbul😃
Oye pehle ek Chulbul wali smile de...Belt buckle wala dance bata ..and phir updating my comments...itna udaas chehra mein kaise dekhegi tera
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*sniff * *sniff* ,...chal ab ye dekha to me happy😃
Ab updating my comments...Oye tu Celine Dion ke gaane mein Taank jhaank le ke aa gai...😆
so sweet!! Gadha cant control na....pehle se hi besharam hai...
I liked his mother...has a sense of humour....
Kitna natak karta hai na...asking his mom where is she going knowing fully well😆
he said Damn😕😆...manners naam ki cheez hi nahi hai na.... and he doesnot remember her name😲....Gadha kahi ka...kab sudhrega😆....after falling in love he will ask her name...how...'Aye Ladki, I love you...tu apna naam batane ka kasht karegi kya🤣'
Oye!! ab no udaasi and tu bolna bandh karegi to mujhe aisa lagega ki I have gone back to the period of pre-Alam Aara...to the period of silent movies😆😆😆
Fantoo update Chulbul....🤗🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Srushti- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
res :)

*Edit:

Bushy 🤗 nice update :D

aww i loved the way his mom knows and pull his leg 😆

and he shows up too lol and is lost in her 😍

and I love that song and to add to it ur comments after each part 👏

haha they both having sleepless nights....thats how it starts!!!

update soon Bushy :D
Edited by dg0628 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Srushti-

My spot Chulbul😃
Oye pehle ek Chulbul wali smile de...Belt buckle wala dance bata ..and phir updating my comments...itna udaas chehra mein kaise dekhegi tera

Yeh leh....😆 and my buckle dance...*Hudd hudd dabangg* 😎 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

res😉

ok read it......don't be too hard on yrslf girl...😉.......can see that u r lost in some world......what happened sweetie.......but u truly brought out the essence of the song by yr comments after each stanza and i could just see them both in front of my eyes....lovely👏....................keep at it and cheer up cos that's what u did to us😃😃😃....
jump on that horse of yours and ride like our warrior D😍 and chase those blues away......we want our galopping gal back.....😆😆
come and give me a hug.....🤗🤗🤗.................there....i am sure that helped😛
Edited by chithoo - 14 years ago

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