New Short FF '~Miracle~'updated EPILOGUE on Pg 24!

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

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hey bushra

lovely update

so he find a good friend in her

looking forward

Edited by eternity_of_luv - 14 years ago

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Shally

@shally_m

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

very nice update ..... interesting story ..... liked nakku's attitude very much

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rubal

@rainurubal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

dutta is falling for her ,,,,,,,yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Sophia Khan

@Sophia21

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#74

My Sweet Little Spot (: x

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Im so so so so sorry.. But this will be short... not that short but short cause my cooking lesson starts in 10 minutes lol.

Awesome update Bushy.

Haila Dutta was so rude at the beginning lol.. LOL she caught him going back😆.. So he only came to drop her. how sweet but has a very weird way of showing it.

Aawww he feels a bond with her already na? .. Cause he keeps finding his way to her lol..😆 how cute!.. Woooo he's helping her out and stuff.. dats very sweet. Maybe he sud leave his goldiggers friends and hang out with Nakku😉..

I promised next time I will comment early lol😆..

Update soon😳

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chithoo

@chithoo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Oh nakku and datta in a different light.😊.....in a more sophisticated environment........wow great idea bushy👍🏼.............and still you retained their core strengths👏..........as it is in LTL............

it was like seeing datta and nakku playing their part right in front of my eyes and D ofcourse in his inimitable style.........the tilt of the head, the wry smile, the arrogance, the attitude and those dreamy eyes😍😍😍 ......your story portrayed them all..

mmmmmmmm will wait for more......

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Yuvika

@Yuvika_15

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+ 9

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

hey bushy

i think i guessed ur teaser...i think mayb she's gt cancer n didnt tel him cos she thrt there wud b a miracle n she'd survive bt nw docs tld her nuthin wtsoeva cn hapn so she tld him...am i right or wrong? i'll come bk 2 c after my exams---20th may

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prncz

@prncz

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#77

hi srush;s chulbul bushy ,🤗,

nice update , so dutta did not let her walk alone ,,😛

ya so dutta has met sme one who doesnt care much for his money and has a selfless attitude ,,she is gnna make him a responsible gadha😆 looking forward to see what happens next ,hope u update soon raj ( i missing elysia here so much )

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Azy

@-Azy-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Hey Bushy!!!
V nice update dear! :D
So it was D, knight in shining armour to rescue his beauty in distress lol
I loved when he ask 365 days u distributing leaflets hehehe
Wow so he has came their unknowingly and now ready to help!
How chweeeeeeeettt!!!
Plzzz update the next part soon :p :D

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mnx12

@mnx12

Channel Moderator

+ 15

Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Hi, don't make it very short min 10 parts should be there.Good update👏

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usha

@ushankitvc

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#80

Congrats on ur new FF...........read all the parts in one go.......... Like the story moving........... So Dutta an idler ............ but not a gambler.............. luved Nakkus character........ she really makes him see facts.......... updt sooooooooooon.............Thanx fr PM...........

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