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Posted: 14 years ago
let me see guys...if inspiration strikes it will be soon...and anyways i am being unfair to the other FF...my epic ek thi kahani...btw pooji where are u on that one?
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Posted: 14 years ago
😡debu is such a badmaash..total tp character! but i do agree when i was a kid, i also thought ki 19th century ki cheez kyun yaad rakhun!..hmm.. seeing the way kala handles the kids, i m a bit pacified regarding how theywil deal with naku's absense..kala will not make up for naku's absense, but her motehrly presence will surely calm the kids..she is a great woman and these kids have sort of fulfilled her life..
kaise easily bahaana banaya doc saab ne to get his naku on the line! and aaaw naku throws the peas away and puts the chilka in the pan😆 i can so imagine this and relate to this.. imagine being surrounded by so many ppl, u r bound to get so conscious na..
loved this bit.. Holding the phone to her ears she listened. His husky voice murmured,"Meethu?" She turned to look around her to check if anyone was paying her attention and walked towards the stairs still holding the phone. OMG, how classic is this.. lagta hain, mam ne aise bahut saare scenes dekjhe hain😉 maybe gender reversal mein apne ghar mein?!😳 but i have to tell you this is so difficult to do.. to try and escape everyone.. when everyone will seem like they are busy just so u can escape but they know and u know that they know all😆😆.. but loved the way he says meethu😳
rimpi..i dont know tera kya higa when u will fall in love sweetie.. u hv pictured it so well.. it was so deja vuuu for me.. the way he was sprawled on that bed and she running up and hugging that pillow😃😳..aaw, and how do u know all of us who have been in love always ask that miss me😆😆 and for a guy like dutta, his response was absolutely spot on.. bechari dar gyayi.. arre naku, tu nahin samjhi abhi tak.. bas he is only saying that phone rakh dega, asal mein toh mann mein ladoo phoot rahe hain😉..i love ur little touches, how she imagines that smell.. tehse are subtle things, but so imp for a reader like me😳
I cant believe the sazaa he gave her.. seriously yaar, that was just too good.. i am rofl reading it and imagining it, naku saying that like a parrot every single day🤣 too good, i tell ya!
ooohh, i felt a bit bad when naku asks a bit softly matlab as these words and jargon are second nature to any one of us, not her na.. oh, god, pls i hope she doesnt feel inferior later and just like a cute gf, she tells him not to give gaali! and he caous out with debu being smarted than him.. lol.. i can so imagine that really.. give anotehr 10 years, and we will have a dutta like debu na.. thoda thoda donon ka attitude same hi hain.. bechari naku, bhai aur hubby, donon aise nikale😆aaww, she is trying to get him to kick the butt.. but itna aasaan nahin hota.. i dont know how dutta will do it.. waise love can move mountains.. so let's see..but great that even though they are so far apart, he can assess her mood and she can catch his lies.. truly connected dil se😛 hmm.. sach much, are u getting rid of leela tai from that flat😉 ya pohir doc saab phek rahe hain just to score one over her. i dont think he will ask his siter to move out, but maybe leela on her own accord might na? but pls trust me when i say that this phone convo is extremely real, original, not ghisa pitta but what every coupld go thru.. very authentic👏
kala is so gonna miss naku and vice versa.. though they both know this is the best rishta for naku, they will though miss each otehr so much.. almost like kala is sending off her daughter and naku will miss kala as if she were her mum.. leela so far has not shown that maternal instict, that soft corner.. who knows maybe the hardships and blose dealt by life has turned her a bit cynical..i like how u had sangeet, mehendi, sagaai on same day.. so typical of small middle class families na..hehehe, loved how kala looked at her sdideways and said phone aaya tha😉 and then 4 baar😆.. i really like the comfort level that naku-kala share.. she doesnt need permission to use the phone na.. just runs off
this convo is even better..just sooo natural.. gussa gussa when he doesnt find her when he wants to😡😆aur bolne ka mauka bhi nahi denge😡😆but have to admit, nakku handled him so sensitively and beautifully.. just letting him vent and become free of all that negative energy.. just staying with him on the phone, just being with him and gently pushing him to let go but giving him the assurance she is there come what may.. truly wonderful.. wonder if dutta will ever get to this level if naku needed him.. itna samajdhari se, patience se will he deal with her?! the lil girl's story is very sad.. cant imagine how much the brave girl suffered.. naku can see the posiutive that at least she wont sufer again.. but for dutta, he cant and rightly so as he has treated her, seen her day in/out, she had become a part of his life.. so obviously he will be affected..but as leela said it was the way she handled him that truly lifted this incident..he could have gone out and got drunk like last times, but that will give him a sense of senselessness for a few hours, but the pain will never go away as he will never be cleansed.. naku is a lot more clever than dutta as she does not just look at things from a straight yes/no pov.. she equates things to so many otehr things in life and how she finds positivity in everything..esp the way she explained the way the lil girl's death was amavasya, but how life will continue was just superb, but our bookish keeda doc will not understand😉😆
the wedding baraat sounds superb.. baarish.. cleanising everything..hmmm, dutta with wet slicked back hair😳 kya pharak padta hain if the garland had only a few flowers left😉and yest again she remembers his smell! he does take marriage seriously, but not the rituals! and comes up with such cute comments na! OMG, he will give tudu a close fight on how to make goof ups on wedding day😆😆 seriously he wanted to do gatbandhan and help debu..more like jaldi ho jaye so that he can go off with naku🤣 but he stole my heart whispering to her tying that mangalsutra and the ey lock during maang bharna.. swoon thud😍all the otehr rituals, he was carefree but not for sindoor bharna on maang.. how beautiful na.. when it matters the most, he is there with all heart and soul..not that otehr rituals dont matter, but sindoor andnaku hold a special place in his life😉.. hey,great she has sindoor on her nose , she will be loved to bits by hubby.. and really loved how they walk hand in hand to take elders blesings..hope aise hi haath tham ke rahe forever 😃
sorry, i was disturbed a lot in between today and had to make 3-4 attempts befor could post the comments.. so there might be a disjointed feel to my comments today kids and hols😆
Edited by prettywoman - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey shilpi

lovely update dear
very beautiful conversations of tasha
sad for pinky

what an exciting marriage...rain..love it
continuously saying something to her ears whenever there is a chance

love it
thanks for pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
Dear Shilpita,
Lovely climax to the first part, should I say, for Dutta/Naku's love story. Been busy and will get back later with detailed comments. The best and most intense is to come now with Nakusha discovering a new world.
Somebody mentioned the rains as being a negative portent... I feel that even the skies opened up to bless two lovely people in Imp. Perfections.😍
See you later on the same thread
Cheers,
Kavita😊
Edited by KavitaDR - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shilpita87

let me see guys...if inspiration strikes it will be soon...and anyways i am being unfair to the other FF...my epic ek thi kahani...btw pooji where are u on that one?

Emmm... woh wale FF me i am still stuck with madhu's new yr. party.😳
Kya karu,u started with Imperfect Perfections, & since then i am stuck here😆
But,i promise will definitely catch up during royal wedding wala hoildays😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: preety_219

Emmm... woh wale FF me i am still stuck with madhu's new yr. party.😳
Kya karu,u started with Imperfect Perfections, & since then i am stuck here😆
But,i promise will definitely catch up during royal wedding wala hoildays😉



Catch up girl...wahan bhi mast action daala hai maine...😆

But now mujhe hi yaad nahi ki what i had written there..😕

I have to go and read it to start writing it!😆

I have learned my lesson though...one story at a time...i can't handle too many balls in the air at the same time...😛



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shilpita87



Catch up girl...wahan bhi mast action daala hai maine...

But now mujhe hi yaad nahi ki what i had written there..

I have to go and read it to start writing it!

I have learned my lesson though...one story at a time...i can't handle too many balls in the air at the same time...



aur hamara kya shilpi jo kabse tumhare update ka intezaar kar rahe hain



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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorry not been able to post my comments lately..been crazy busy...great update..loved the phone conversation and "Meethu"..that was so awww :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
thaks for a lovely update😊 .just read it and found it very thought provoking...especially the bit ,where he lays open those moments when a doctor feels he's lost a personal battle when an under treatment,loses life,his sharing his professional trauma,made the scene very moving. Also her comparison of the moons's journey in a given time,to spiritual acceptance of life coming full circle and culminating in death,as opposed to his scientific Lunar cycle concept, was very well written.Poetic I would say! Also welcoming was the contrast after Pinky's death, with the hilarious ,fiasco wedding ,his face,his actions and reactions were all very well described ,and very pictorial..the last bit of meethi.. well well very Punjabi,like it... oh yes loved the phone convo,gosh they do bicker.. more so him...and does she seriously think,he's going to give up his fags? not in the stressful job he's in,Idont think sooo,she is already beginning to sound like his wife...and you know what, the git seems to enjoy winding her up.So my looovely yes hammie enjoyed this post...
watching this space! till we speak again over and out[12.30pm uk time!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey shilpi,

oh shilpi, wat an update😲😊... the title is superb again...

oh u started off the update with making us laugh with D n N's cute phone convo... then gathered us to take us through an emotional journey through his professional failure... but the 3 a.m. and pinky did it for me... it made me remember something...

n then u made us go through one more comic situation that too with the marriage😲... wow, D dropped the spoon😆😆... i totally can imagine😆😆...

now wat to tell abt ur writing skills. amazing and awesome...

wil wait for ur next update eagerly now...

tc
divya

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