'Ek berang zindagi sahab ke naam' conclude p95 - Page 51

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krishaa thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
may be nakku tell about some good news and dutta may feel relaxed .she should take dutta to that women and tell her son's truth to her and tell her to accept sia and her son.and then naku ask for apology and tell dutta to wipe the soot of her face and we get some cute and intimate tasha moment with nakku leaving her hesitation and making her first move making dutta happy and relieved that her nakku trust ,love and care for him with all her heart.😊 update soon . today was my exam so can't comment yesterday sorry.nice work keep it up ,update soon thank for pm and wonderful update.
Edited by krishaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww bby dutta is such a sweetheart..i loving him evn more..!!1
he is soo caring
naku how can u b so foolish!!
damn how is she gona face him
she beter make up 4 causing him so much pain!! Ahem ahem...
thnx 4 the wonderful yet emotional update n d pm..x
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Posted: 14 years ago

Very nice update👏 Kala tried once again to spoil their happiness. One more aspect of Datta's generosity you've revealed, keeping that old lady unaware about her son's crime. Waiting for next update😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

@Buttbhai: Thank you ever so much for your birthday wish/ the fact that you took time out to read when you were busy. Thanks!

Yep I guess all the mystery was broken In the last two chapters and all your questions answered. Glad you enjoyed it and your suggestion is as always fabulous thank you soo much..really not thought much about the next update but I really love your suggestions so may just make use of it with your permission that is.Thanks again…will try to update soon. Keep reading and I hope you dad gets well soon. My best wishes!

eternity_of_luv: Hiya! Thank you for reading and giving your feedack! Much appreciated. Yep everything is out in the open in the last two chapters. And it does mean that dutta is really hurt emotionally ..i'm not too how nakusha is going to console him or how things or going to progress..need to give a thought I think. Will try to update soon..thanks again.

-Ritz- Hiya! Thank you for reading and commenting..yep so far everything is out in the open but it does mean nakusha and dutta are both in a bit of state. Dutta is quite hurt within and nakusha feels really bad too. don't worry I don't think I could separate them for two long even if I wanted too.

krishaa: Hi, hope you exams went well, I'm sure you will do fine. As for the update glad you liked them, I'm not to sure how its going to turn out..not thought about it yet..but all your suggestions are fantastic and so will keep them in mind.

Thank you so much for taking the time out to read when you are busy ..obviously academics are more important so spend your time with that but its nice to know you are able to read my ff..when time allows so thanks.

Will try to update soon.

alveera_rckz Thank you so much for reading and commenting glad you enjoyed it ..please keep reading ..nice to know you are following my ff.

mIsHeZ.x Hey thank you very much for reading and posting your comments means a lot and as for the update yep you see a more softer side of dsp in this update. There's a lot to him …from being DSP to being nakusha husband…to being a son/a brother..and somewhere within there is a very soft..caring almost prone to emotions dutta that just cares for everybody that is shown her.

I think that's what I love about dutta shri ram patils character..he is so different on so many different layers. I guess naku just did what she think would be best…she tried to do something that in turn would make him happy yet the contrary happened. Her intentions were not bad but she didn't really think about what she was doing..for she should have remembered dutta is a very self-righteous in a sense and shes goes and apologies on his behalf angers him. as for how she is going to face him .and make up for it..well not thought about that yet..

Thank you very much..for reading.

mnx12: hey thank you for reading and commenting..nice to know you liked the update and yep this part of the ff kind of went a little deeper into dutta's character and showed just the type of man he is behind that harsh exterior of his.

Will try to update soon- thanks again.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey dear jagruthi,

Thank u for giving us the update so fast .


What an update from u ? Iam quite relieved after reading this update .

After knowing sia and her son's secret i also feel ashamed for doubting Dutta Sriram Patil;'s character . Hey i love dutta he is such a gem indeed . But that is not fully my fault . U wrote the scenes like that wonderfully .😊

Its really brilliant awesome the feelings , the hurt expressed nicely . The way Dutta observes naku in koel avatar , and his hurt on thought of apologising to the old woman , applying soot again on her face hurt him so much . 😔

I can imagine the dutta and naku's feelings there . Dutta's anger is purely justified .

The dialogues of dutta were awesome .

"Aaj tak dutta shri ram patil ne apna sir kisi ke aage nahin jukhayay..lekin aaj tune yeh kasar bhi puri kar di nakusha!!!! "
"Samaj ti kya hai apne aap ko tu?…jo dutta shri ram patil ki taraf se maafi ki bhik maang ne chali gayi!!
i can imagine mishal saying these . 😍

Naku did absolutely wrong thinking that dutta did some harm to that old woman's son .

Dutta is so hurt that naku did n't understand him completly . Ohhh dutta saab i love u so much .😊

U never ever do any thing wrong in ur life . we know that how much respect u give to women but iam also sorry for having doubt on sia .

And what a mind blowing twist jagruthi ? I loved this one . That dutta did nothing wrong in case of old woman and her son is only the culprit . The way dutta managed to hide the truth from that woman ad taking all her bad duva is really heart touching . Dutta is really a king .

U handled that old woman character who was also on the show
very nicely . I like it . Tasha conversation is awesome . Each and every dialogue is heart touching .

When dutta tolds "pee nahi raha hoo" "dutta shri ram patil anpe vadon se mukr ne valon se mein nahin hai." are very nice .

"Woahi toe galti hai teri..nakusha..tu ne bhi soch leighyay naa ke dutta toe khuni hai. afsos is baat ka hai ke tu apne pati ko samaj hein nahin paayi". Oh dutta how much he hurted that naku did n't understand him
properly .

After knowing the truth naku won't keep the soot i think as there is no point as it is all kala's plan .

Oh god now what will naku do ? Dutta is so hurt with her i think she have to console him , asking his forgiveness , in a sweet lovable romantic and touching way . 😍


I also love if Dutta removes the soot on naku's face . But he is so hurt how our naku will tackle this situation ? mm think quite difficult to naku now .

As he is disappointed with naku now she only can make him again happy may be with some romance or with good news ?

Oh no i am not having any idea but iam confident enough that u will come up with the scene so sweet heart touching and romantic .

Waiting for the next update .😍




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Posted: 14 years ago
great update ,i was hesitatant abt your last update coz of dark naku but your ch 19 put all to rest ,nice turn of event naku should do something special to get back dutta :0
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Dear Jagruti🤗
Thanx alot for the wonderful update and PM🤗Loved it like always😉..Awww finally the truth is out 😳...Omg Dutta is hurt by naku"s behaviour😳...I naku redeem herself ...Pls dnt separate them ...i wanna see them happy again ...waiting for the nxt part eagerly ...u take care and see ya around..pls jaldi update karna..
Love and hugs
suhana🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Jag i dereserved both spots...pg 63 & 65 ...
krishaa thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
please make next update soon full of romance as last post was full of tension and anger that does't look good between tasha,please next update full of romance.update soon.i m waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dg0628

RESERVED...


EDITED:

Jag!! *kaan pakoding * sorryyy ...unreserving sooo late ...
hiya..! aw no not at all ..dont like the kaan pakoding..not on my thread..🤗

I know...what can I do still got no laptop
...i really don't know how you can deal with not having one..i would loose touch with the
world!! 😆

so me unreserving all spots every where right now 😳
.i can imagine..lots of bhagam bhag..then.

and guess what ...i have a streak going here. LOL first AGAIN :P
...i cant teil you how fast you come across to be..i click the post button and the next
second you are already there..wow is all i can say.

Amazing update ...as usual 👏
...thank you very much..too kind with you words.!

I honestly enjoy reading the way you write ...
...nice to know you are enjoying the update..even if there is something you
dont like tell me!

it's so well written...
...thank you..all though trust i know how many spelling errors and incorrectness there
is within each update. never read through it also..i do write in note form..sorry about that.

the tasha scene in the beginning was cute...haha poor baaji ...he actually got confused as to what to do...LMAO 😆
...yep i thought i would start it on a light moment..glad you liked that! bitchara did
get confused.
and haha D's romantic dialogue...hayeee 😍 love him
...romantic dutta.. is out in the open is all i have to say..love him too.

and then you had to change it all serious didn't you
...yep sorry kuch toe hona tha..

*sigh ...so Naku manages to convince him ...goes to meet that women...with Baaji
...the way i see it is that..the more chamcha giri that naku does the more reason i have for..
some moments between dutta/naku.
and then Baam she in her dark avatar again 😲😲😆
...yep little bit of a shocker..!!

haha but i know whatever you do will end up right in the end 😛
...yey i really wasnt going to go along the make up ..storyline again..
serial mein hein..fed up hogayey the..not in my ff..no..no.

now i did love how baaji came in and D all panicking and the way that whole scene played out 👏...aw..thank you..i didnt really know how to play that bit..but all worked out i guess.and now i quite like it too..

amazing part
...thank you very much..again.. far too kind..

normally i would say jaldi update karna but ...i already reserved next one too ...
...will update soon.. and im sure you will be the first..
that too first again 😆

*daya runs to unreserve that spot now 😳 ...im going to run ..and feedback on that one too..thank you again..thanks!!

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