'Ek berang zindagi sahab ke naam' conclude p95 - Page 53

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: AzMishy

V nice update n v well written!!👏

Sorry for short comment, will come with a long one next time..😃

Thanks a lot for the update n for the PM.. 😳



thank you very much hope i didn't bore you..dont worry about the commenting..
following it..that is enough for me. thanks!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi jagruti, thanks 4 making my suggestion part of your update. very nice update but very much tense,sad n depressive.donot want dutta 2be rude with nakku .dn r love birds want them 2live with love.after this sad update the next one should be a treat 4 us.waiting 4 a lovely love update,
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: buttbhai

hi jagruti, thanks 4 making my suggestion part of your update. very nice update but very much tense,sad n depressive.donot want dutta 2be rude with nakku .dn r love birds want them 2live with love.after this sad update the next one should be a treat 4 us.waiting 4 a lovely love update,



thank you very much for reading and commenting yep i'm aware this one is a little sad yet there is no fun in the more lighter updates if there is no down points in the storyline. hope you under stand what i mean. next one will be lighter...much more airy..and hopefully fun the read.
thank you very much.
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb updt... Dutta luvs Nakku a lot but cant cum to terms to pardon her... luved the part where Dutta wipes her face her off the black colour... God he cares so much fr nakku that he cant bear tears in her eyes... she too follows all his orders without any question ... she went to eat eventhough she was not feeling like jst bcoz he said so... she was eating frm his half eaten plate... wow!!! really luved both the updts to the core... looking frwrd fr the nxt updt... continue sooon...thanx 4 PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great update
thanks for double chapters
though update was emotional but i still love it
really touching
though he don't talk with her but still care for her and she did everything to not hurt him so not facing her
love it

thanks for pm


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Posted: 14 years ago

great update felt it should go on & on ,loved reading it ,update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the double update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi! thanks for update and pm. but again would demand for some cute tasha moment will love to see start of tasha romance and a new relationship of love and trust between them please make next part full of love and lighter moments as last 2 update were full of tensed moments.lovely work keep it up.😊 update soon,😊 do not let us wait so much like this time
Edited by krishaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Read back to back 3 updates n wow love the way its going!!!
Feeling bad for nakku but Dutta on his side too right to angry over her na :p
Last part Dutta is standing before her n she is with his half eatten food!
We gona get a romantic update this time , do we :p *wink*
Loved it sooo much n waiting for the next part eagerly! *blushing*
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Posted: 14 years ago

@ ushankitvcHiya thank you very much for reading and commenting..glad you liked the update! Yep you got it right there dutta does really love nakusha its just that he is hurt and therefore finds it a little harder to forget. Although all the moments in the last chapter do express that dutta does see that nakusha is upset..just going through a little bit of a dilemma within i guess. Anyways thank you very much nice to know you are enjoying my ff ..please keep reading.

Nakusha thank you very much..glad you liked the update.. will try to update soon. I did kind of think i went on too much but.. if you didn't mind it then thats ok.!! (as long as i don't bore you, when that happens tell me!)

subhas123 hey thank you very much for reading and its all my pleasure. Nice to hear from you keep reading!

Krishaa hey thanks for reading and yep after 3 chapters of serious emotion the romance is over due.. will try to think up some light and lovey dovey moments for the next chapter..but that totally is the hardest thing to do..

Will be sure to keep it in mind.. thanks again for following..will try to update soon.

AzMishy reading 3 chapters bk to bk totally takes effort..omg hope i didn't bore you but i'm glad you liked the updates. Yep the way i see it is all these more serious and emotional ploys in the storyline are so i have a reason to give you guys all the light and lovely dovey tasha scenes you keep demanding. As for the last two chapters and duttas cold shoulder to nakusha..i think i tried to show a more softer side of dutta..beneath that extirior of his..for every time he hurt nakusha with his silent treatment and actions..he was hurt in away too..

Kind of going to touch on duttas character a little more in the next chapter..and yep the closing bit ..was dutta..walking into nakusha..and seeing his half eaten plate of food in her hands and as always...ive created a moment and not thought of the end so..i am unaware of what is to happen as well. Until i think of something anyway... i guess you guys want some sweeter .kiss and make up type stuff . i'm thinking along the same lines but not too sure how to end that moment i've created..your suggestions as always are welcome. Pretty much blank at the moment in time in terms of creativity sure i will think of something.

All i can say is 3 updates of emotions and seriousness i think the romance is overdue..!!

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