'Ek berang zindagi sahab ke naam' conclude p95

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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#301

res...

sory wil edit dis asap..as wel as my last post.

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#302

Hey Jagu !

Third place not bad :D

Love Love Love the update !

Start he khasay ahem ahem jagah say hua:P

hehehehhe

Dutta all naughty shaughty 😳

HMM Love how naku wokes up and realize in what state she is ,

she is such a sweety , she feels ashamed taht Dutta has seen her like this !

a very sensitive thing in my regard (she was with the man all night but in morning she doesnt want to be all besharam , ttheir is a fine line betweeen love aur besharmi (and still she needs time )

she always manged to have haya😊

thast a nice thinga nd love Dutta understands that too :)

he doesnt tease her all n not staring her , he knows she needs time

though he tries that she understands that its not a big deal but may be he like her feeling guiltyin innocence more :P

do i need to tell u

taht ur word "saab "

here is soo much meaingful

its everything in ur FF ,

saab is the word to mano to ask forgiveness

everything is Saab😳

love his reply that he will soon be back !

and woooooooo no body is home

and Dutta dont want to keave Naku 😃

and he ask baaji to go

OH my Baaji , bechara he is the one jo har jagah phasta hai :P

and he walks back to room

hmm ahem ahem momenst

and in my opinion he must said

"kaha that na jaldi aaon gay , tu dekh agaya "

i mean khasa jaldi a gaya but i tink its the best which fits here :P

heheheh

and hmm then Dutta all in mood of romancing and no doubt he enjoys his wife innocence :P

and hayeeeee

romance kay bad ye sab

Dutta shouting at baaji , bechara baaji he is spanked badly by Dutta

and what Nooooooo Nakud drop tea on Dutta

OH no its just fuel the fire :P

Dutta is super madddd but in anger he uses a hell of dialogues :P

and aw my baby Dutta he realizes that he makes a mistake :😳

oh chotu leads Dutta to others and whta does he hear their

Lil complains abt him

that is so sweet Baaji here is more chota bacha than chotu

love how he is complaing aye Sahib

and wo Naku is changing too , or may be baaji ko dekh kar she is confiednet

and spits out her heart

thast is sooooo sweet

and wht NOoooooooooo
dutta calling them up !

This is a real cliff hanger

expecting a quick update !

PLz jagu update fast :D

Edited by kiran255 - 14 years ago

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droopy_asleep

@droopy_asleep

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#303

Wonderful update....and to answer your question, here is what I think he would have said!
Thodisi....mujhe bhi pilade :)

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Vika

@vikadesigirl

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#304

ohh.. this so made my day.............. i love how innocent naku is like she had not idea what dutta wanted to do.............. and yep i think baaji-naku will not listen to chotu and not go to dutta, which in turn will make dutta come to them ha

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Azy

@-Azy-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#305

Thanks for the update n just loved it!!! :D
Answer to ur Q errmmmmm come will complete ur task of making a heir!!!!! Hehehehehe just kidding! :p me have no idea! Hehehehe

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-Ritz-

@-Ritz-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#306

that was a wonderful update jagrutid. 👍🏼 and I'll try and guess and he might have said: mein tumse bahut pyar karta hoon Nakusha!. ☺️ Not that he ever has to say that since Naku knows it. 😳 but this is the only thing in my head right now. 😆

waiting for the next update.

Edited by -Ritz- - 14 years ago

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divya17-7

@divya17-7

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#307

hey jagruti,

nice update dear...... thank u for the PM........

tc
divya

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jessica10

@jessica10

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#308

loved the update

Dutta is so in character here..naku is also so sweetly innocent.

loved the tasha scene

poor baji got shouting and naku too.

Baji is so adorable complaining like a small child..liked how naku too opened up

i wonder if they will go up..real cliffhanger

hope u update soon

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Subii

@Subii

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#309

lovely update jagruti!👏

i loved the way you have managed to show the different traits of dutta's personality..

in the morning he was more like a lover boy who was in awe of the woman sleeping next to him and couldn't help to admire her beauty and innocence like a lover would do..

then the next characteristic of dutta when he was shouting at baji madly anger for deal not been finalized.. wow! just like a man woh is pakka professional and possessive about the work he does.. he doesn't want a failure be it anything..

Oh my god! nakku dropped tea on him *final nail in the coffin! *

ohh dear! she had to face the wrath along with baji.. she must be completely mad seeing the mood variations of her husband.. "ek pal main naram aur ek pal main garam"😆

he was so calm and all lovey dovey in the morning and look at him now ruthless..

bechara baji what was his fault? what would have he done if dutta didnt accomany him.. see his plight everyone in the family was enjoying some or the other way - patil family at farmhouse, dutta and nakku ehem ehem 😉 it was only baji who was working and even then he got scolded by Dutta shreeram patil..😕

awww loved the way baji was complaining to AS.. he is too cute..😍

i have always loved their equation be it on the FFs or the show.. even though there don't have any blood relation their bond seems to be stronger than any sibling.. the way dutta always treats baji as a punching bag koi aur hota to kabhi ka bhag gaya hota chod ke.. this guy is just awesome!👏

then comes dutta's care wala trait.. he knows he has hurt them and now he will have to make up for it... sending chotu in.. hehehe

lets see what happens next...

update soon!

and what he said in nakku's ear could be "ghar par koi nai hai.. ho jaye ek-ek" 😳😉😛

thanks for PM...

Edited by Subii - 14 years ago