'Ek berang zindagi sahab ke naam' conclude p95

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jagrutid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: mnx12
good update👏

thank you very much..please keep reading.

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jagrutid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: Subii
lovely update jagruti!👏
i loved the way you have managed to show the different traits of dutta's personality..
in the morning he was more like a lover boy who was in awe of the woman sleeping next to him and couldn't help to admire her beauty and innocence like a lover would do..
then the next characteristic of dutta when he was shouting at baji madly anger for deal not been finalized.. wow! just like a man woh is pakka professional and possessive about the work he does.. he doesn't want a failure be it anything..
Oh my god! nakku dropped tea on him *final nail in the coffin! *
ohh dear! she had to face the wrath along with baji.. she must be completely mad seeing the mood variations of her husband.. "ek pal main naram aur ek pal main garam"😆
he was so calm and all lovey dovey in the morning and look at him now ruthless..
bechara baji what was his fault? what would have he done if dutta didnt accomany him.. see his plight everyone in the family was enjoying some or the other way - patil family at farmhouse, dutta and nakku ehem ehem 😉 it was only baji who was working and even then he got scolded by Dutta shreeram patil..😕
awww loved the way baji was complaining to AS.. he is too cute..😍
i have always loved their equation be it on the FFs or the show.. even though there don't have any blood relation their bond seems to be stronger than any sibling.. the way dutta always treats baji as a punching bag koi aur hota to kabhi ka bhag gaya hota chod ke.. this guy is just awesome!👏

then comes dutta's care wala trait.. he knows he has hurt them and now he will have to make up for it... sending chotu in.. hehehe
lets see what happens next...
update soon!

and what he said in nakku's ear could be "ghar par koi nai hai.. ho jaye ek-ek" 😳😉😛
thanks for PM...

aw thank you very much for this..😳 i loved reading your comment, and im so happy you all liked it!! the time you have taken out to read and comment trust me does not go un-noticed. As for the update yep your right..couldnt be anymore right. kind of explores the different sides to dutta. I guess thats what makes his character stand out so much and to be honest i think thats what naku loves about him so much. He is so different on so many levels.. he is her lover..her husband..her sahab...an leader for his people. A brother..son..and even a farther figure to some of his family and his people. All in all there is so much too him and secretly naku loves the way he has the power to switch roles.😉

As for the steak of anger.. well we all know he has an temprement. .and the thing is dutta and baaji should know that too but today they just slipped up and yep first baajis news of no deal!
and then naku goes on drops tea on him just sparks the lion inside him!!! tab toe dar lage ga naa!!😲 and i guess bitachari naku bhi phas gayi. If she had dropped it on him this morning then i dont think it would have made a difference..actually would have give dutta an excuse to take his kurta 😆😉off.. yet the timing was BAD!😕 and yep you got it right dutta hates faliure even in the matter of that old woman..he would not accept defeat to her words and answered it with anger.
but yep baaji and nakusha..just take it to heart.. do you blame them..bitchare sirf aapna aapna kam kar rahe the!! daat pad gayi!!
And dutta does think about how wrong he is in the end hence he has sent in his trump card chotu!!
wait and see what happens next!

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jagrutid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: Sophia21
Awesome update...
Hailaaa ahem ahem..lol... bechari he didnt let her sleep all night.. so if she wakes up late then its not her fault lol..

Dutta is so sweet...but doesnt really show it lol...

awww bechari baaji.. he even went to the meeting but didnt complete the deal cause of Duttas absence.. n now D is shoutin at him :(

Hailaaa.. bechari Nakku now.. Dutta shouldnt hve shouted at her ... well we all know he does something first then think it through and then regret lool..

Nakku and Baaji are so cute n childish lol... complaining to AS haha.. bless them.. are they going to blank Dutta? or not go to see him? lol

He deserve that for one day lool..

hiya.. thank you very much for commenting...means alot to here your thoughts on what i write so thank you soo much. As for the update its self..lol ..yep i started on a romantic note guess it finished on a lighter one.! 😳 aw i thought i took that line about the lack of sleep. out..😉 guess not!!
yep thats the thing here dutta is very soft centered but he cant help it..hes dutta bhao he cant go around being all..jack the lad no one will take him seriously.! hes got a rep to protect.
As for nakusha and baaji i guess its not baajis fault but bitchara phas gayay and naku just has really bad timing!! and yep in the end dutta does think about it so all is not lost.
lol..i actually thought both nakusha and baaji taking it heart would really make for an adorable..read and so i went for it.. as for what happens next u'll gave to wait and see. - anyways .again thank you very much.

Edited by jagrutid - 14 years ago

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inosh

@inosh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#324

Great update specially the last part. I want N not shoe her face to him :) just because he ordered so and she should take that seriously :D

When are you posting next?

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#325

beautiful update dear

so baaji and naaku is angry with dutta
love the update

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: inosh
Great update specially the last part. I want N not shoe her face to him :) just because he ordered so and she should take that seriously :D

When are you posting next?

hah..lol thank you very much for reading/commenting..guess i'm still thinking about my next move but you kind of made i valid point..nakushas not the type to go against duttas wishes.. aw heck..give me some time and i'll think about it 😉
but anyways..again your feedback is always loved!

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv
beautiful update dear

so baaji and naaku is angry with dutta
love the update

hiya!! thank you very much for commenting/yep ruth gayey hai dono is the phrase to use i think.
thanks again..😊

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Anupama

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Posted: 14 years ago

#328

Nice update. Loved it. Thanks for the pm.

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jagrutid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: anupamas2
Nice update. Loved it. Thanks for the pm.

Thank you very much for reading/commenting.

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kiran255

@kiran255

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Posted: 14 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: inosh
Great update specially the last part. I want N not shoe her face to him :) just because he ordered so and she should take that seriously :D

When are you posting next?

@bold very valid point

jagu do something like Naku goes to him cuz she never disagrees what he asks

but she stand like he cant see her and she also tells him why she si doing so !

thats would be so awesome

note :i love to babble go with ur own imagination :P

nut inosh superb pint :D