'Ek berang zindagi sahab ke naam' conclude p95 - Page 30

Originally posted by: buttbhai

hi jagruti,thanks 4 replying as u know i have quited the show.i am here in this forum just because of u .i daly repeatidly read your ff and wait 4 the next one.i also dont want physical love but need the silent hidden love as u alwaysshow miss LTL AND MISHAL alot.i know its not easy 4 u 2 update soon but still when ever u get time update it.pls donot ever think of stop writing.

Originally posted by: alveera_rckz

awesome update yaar cnt wait 4 da nxt update plez add me 2 ur pm list

Originally posted by: kiran255

Hey Jagu !

i love ur FF and i think u habve been writing amazingly

but with this update

u have take ur FF to another level !

You have nailed it this time !
you just give us ur real identity

that is practical and brutal

what should is say and what not !

i dont know

jagu the way u make Dutta deal with the situation is ohenomenal !

Hats off dear !

you see Dutta is a god of Patilwari and here he is accused by a women

that he cant be a father !
what could u expect

this is a personal attack

and he who speaks for other rights and respect will make sure that the women is wrong !

he is mad , fuming in anger ,

he is blind in making to prove his point !

amaizng jagu amazing !

Love how Baaji was trying to calm him

but sometime no one can calm u unless u want to !

and then he stops Naku !

i just hold my breath that time ,

the way Dutta looked at her

he didnt realise she is the love of his life and what she will think of him

but he was looking that she is the answer of every accuse !

Love the scene

and when she said "saab "

the magical words

he came back

though he knows he may lose it agon he just ask her to go !

Bravo scene !

very nice !

and Jagu the way Dutta start the conversation , the way he apologised

its just him who can do this way !

uknow in ur FF

u make sure Dutta Sriram Patil even how muc in love or pain knows that he is DSP !

and all the dialogues were outclass

so Calculated yes thats the word i ws looking for

no more and no less

love it <3

hehehh a boy IN PN hmm

cute and he calls Baaji bandar

ahhahhah

love it

and wow wow wow

kya scene hai

Dutta got Naku off guard

as i menioned before he is Dsp and he makes sure that anyone closes to him didnt come his way !

he has make alot of errorts to be here !
he is here to rule !

but even as husband he is no less , he makes sure when its wifey time

ove thie little and subtle romamce

and love how Naku ask him to give a lil time to madhu !

LOve brother n sister talks

hmm Dutta also knows how to play guitar !

thats awesome

he is at peace now so now it doesnt hurt to rejoice old life hobbies !

hmm love the kid Dutta scene

innocent n fresh !

and hmm Naku comes to safe his Hubby

and what a beautiful lorey she sing tio the kid

and last scene

they are just so relax and at ease and are seeing the dream which im dreaming for a year now for them :P

heheheheh

jagu awsome ob dear !
really but u really need to strt updating fast !

cuz i hate to wait :P

ehheheheh

no no just kidding take ur time but when the update is so awesome

i jut want to read ita ll !

awesome update !

Originally posted by: prncz

hi jagruti , 😛 raj here , i missed this post ,last week ,, finally caught up ,, that was awesome update ,,, dutta's anger after the lady rampage , his reaction, and then his disgust at his actions,,

his apology and nakku;s understanding was so well portrayed,

also got to see dutta's soft side , his interaciton with madhu , guitar playing was soo good ,,and 😉 ofcourse nakku missing dutta and tryign to ask bhajji when meeting is over ,, duttta was enjoying to see nakku is tryng to make bahana to be close to him , the button wala scene was cute and dutta telling her u dnt need bahana u r my wife ,,😛

finally the little boy who has enterned their life ,, is enjoyable , nakku singing lori and dutta thnking her ,,else he woud have to sing 😛 may be next time we hear dutta singing 😆

hpe u update next soon

Chapter 11 :

As duttas eyes flinch with the morning sunlight he takes a squinted open to his eyes..feeling a existing daze of tiredness through his bones..the rays of sun through the window give off a warm feeling to his bare skin. Lying there under the bed sheets duttas takes a soft turn on his pillow and in doing so he hears nakusha murmer in her sleep. More so the way in which her hand rests on his bare chest stops dutta from moving it. For a second dutta turns his expression to nakusha who Is lying beside him and his heart flinches..a kind of extra heartbeat is taken, boy did she have some influence over him. dutta never let it on, because he was none the less dutta shri ram patil. The one whose eyes insighted fear..insighted love..insighted power yet deep under that influnceal persona was a soft centre that nakusha made tick. For a moment dutta just admired her..admired her beauty, her simplicity. A soft smile came to play on duttas face as he thought over his wife. How lucky he was to have her. very silently and softly moving her hand away from his chest dutta places it to the side.. quietly leaning over nakushas expression he kisses her on the forehead before slowly moving away the green bedsheets and stepping out of bed. Taking a glance to the clock on the wooden sidetable..it was 8.30 am. This was unusal, nakusha usually walk up at the crack of dawn.. commenced her puja..prepared breakfast.. and put a morning cup of tea by duttas bedside before he would wake up.. but today it was different. it didn't really bother dutta, it was pleasing to see nakusha taking it easy once in a while and dutta let it be that way..the late night was his fault after all. Pulling the bedsheets over nakusha..duttas eyes searched for his kurta. Looking around the room..duttas eyes fall for his white kurta that lays on the floor from the night before. Picking it up..dutta comes across nakushas yellow saari that lays amongst it…pulling away his kurta dutta hoops it around his head..before throwing nakushas saari onto the bed out of the way.

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Sometime later and as Nakusha wakes…turning in the bed to find dutta not next to her and realizing how late it was Nakusha begins to worry a little. Sitting up in bed ..looking around at her sorrounding..and at herself nakusha realizes that today she had failed in perfecting her routine. she was in that same state..from the night before..pulling the bedsheets around her even more..as a cover up nakusha sees her reflection in the mirror that resides on the opposite wall. Her hair was out of place..her sindhoor as smuged.. notcing her saari hung to the end of the bed..she realizes dutta must have picked it up and feels even worse with that thought. She was in no presentable state..it was rather embarresing for her. just hoping dutta had left the house..yet when her eyes fall on the cup of tea on the coffee table at a distance…duttas overcoat that lies on the bed..his shoes..sit on the floor next to the waldrobe nakusha knows that he is still around and she hits the extent of worry. How was she too face him in this way? Nakusha was always very timid, innocent these matters..for nakusha it was her duty to be duttas wife. To present herself in a respectable way ..to act in a certain way which was acceptable and by her standards this was not. She felt horrible within for doing such a thing. Thinking to herself, all she had to do was wake up a little earlier like she would always and there was no need for his situation. Before nakusha had time to curse herself even more duttas presence was apparent.

As dutta walked out in his all black attire, he look..his presence as ever was very sharp. Not taking a glance towards nakusha..yet she watched him ..still embarrassed. Approaching the bed.. duttas concentration was more so on his attire. folding each sleeve of his kurta with perfection..dutta approaches the bed..picks up his overcoat.in doing so dutta sees nakusha wake.. his expression gives away nothing but nakushas is flooded with embarrassment. Going a shade of red..nakushas eyes search for a comfort zone yet they just scatter around nervous. Dutta notices the way nakusha feels extreme discomfort at him seeing her this way. Grabbing onto those bedsheets as a cover up..naku really feeling the heat of the moment really wishes she could run away from this situation. Dutta says nothing..his expression is blank, maybe dilibaritly as he didn't want to put nakusha in anymore embarresement but if she was look into his eyes she would see a loving …more understanding comfort beneath that harsh extitior. But nakushas sight crossed all areas but dutta..she wouldn't look at him…scarred of seeing disspointment…or just seeing him and feeling ashamed of herself. As for dutta he had given it very little attention.. he knew..nakusha was always going to be the silent..reseved and innocent soul..and was going to do nothing of the sort to make her feel bad. He already new she would be feeling arkward in this situation. Maybe his way of helping was to be silenlt yet this is what got to nakusha even more. Dutta..didnt say anything..he simply went about his routine as nakusha watched from the bed. He swung that overcoat around himself…put his feet into his shoes ..walking towards to coffee table and sofa he took a seat …and began silently drinking tea. Nakusha thought over the situation a little…now dutta wasn't watching maybe she could sneak into the wash room..quickly..but something within her wasn't that confidient. It wasn't long before dutta had finished his tea..rising from the sofa…his footsteps played against the wooden floor as he stopped in front of the mirror to straighten his look. The look was as ever perfection..stern..sharp and influnencal. As dutta approved of his own appereance he caught sight of nakushas embarresment in the mirror but again said nothing. Nakusha was the one to break the silence..after plucking up some courage naku strung some words together and dutta replied ..watching nakus reflection in the mirror in front of him. very silently nakusha speaks..a little histant of her words, "Sahab..galti ho gayi.."

Dutta pulls a curious expression at mirror when he hears nakushas words. he watches her wilt away in the reflection. She couldn't even raise her expression as she spoke..dutta found this innocence of her attractive. "Mein aapke saamne aise paish aayi..galat hai. phir se nahin hoga."

Dutta turns around … and notices the way in which..nakusha instantly flinches at his eye contact something inside him warms to the way nakusha is always so innocent There was a certain passion in his eyes as he spoke …there was something a little mischievous. Something ,a little alluring about his words that embarrassed nakusha further. Without expressing that teasing nature directly he was hinting. Duttas words were very normally spoken yet the impact of those words left nakushas heartbeat at unrest.

"Puri raat jo meine tume sone nahin diya..woh..bhi toe galat hai."

That look in his eyes as nakusha happened to glance at his expression, it was possessive, attractive his words played with nakushas feelings…and her expression turned even more red. Dutta simply watched the impact he had on his wife and then adding something to ease the intensity. "Waise..teri baat bhi theek hai… muje kisi aur ki haat ki chai nahin bhaati." Nakusha was left with a feeling of immense attraction towards dutta ..his words..captured a mishivous side to him…his eyes carried an undifying love..and as feeling dutta approach and hearing his footsteps as he stepped closer for a moment nakusha was fooled in thinking that dutta was getting close. However …even his expression. Seemed to forcus on nakusha with intensity..his closness, the way he approached maybe he was going to make a move yet contradictory to what nakusha thought and wanted..dutta simply reached over to the bedside table drawer..took out his watch..clipped it around his wrist..pullling out a blue file he simply shut the drawer. Nothing of the sort that she had expected ..he was about to leave.. turning away to leave the room nakusha..called him back as she felt him walk away.

"Sahab.. "

Hearing that reference to "sahab"..dutta turns back..to see nakusha drop her eyes as she finishes her words after a pause. – "Jaa rahe ho?" something about the way she had spoken told dutta that she didn't want him to leave. Those eyes of hers were a little like the puppy dog look that could never go un-noticed. Within himself there was an urge to spend more time with his wife yet he had other responsibilities..

-"jaldi aajaaunga.. "a promise to return home as soon as this meeting is over leaves nakusha content.

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A little while later and as dutta is ready to leave Patil Niwas he walks down the staircase to the hall and notices the silence throughout the house. Seeing baji waitng for him..in boredom, dutta questions him to the strange silence.

"Baaji..ghar mein sanaata kyun faila hai.?"

Bhao woah..koi hai nahin naa.. kishore bhao sab ko farm house par le gayey hai. jaana toe muje bhi tha..lekin.

Dutta looks at baaji with a seriousness, work should always come first was duttas attitude. But today looked a little softer in character….looking around the silence and empty house the thought of Nakusha being alone in the house fills his mind.

"Atcha baaji ek kaam kar.tu "meeting mein ho ke aa mein yaha rukhta hu." Baaji gives an unhappy look…it was ok for the rest of them to have there own way yet baaji was not allowed..pulling an irritated face..baji had to follow his instructions.

As naksuha walked out of the wash room her choice of color today was an emerald green her saari as always complimented her fair skin tone.. with a just ready look nakushas hair drips with water…but before she gives any attention to her apprance she looks around the room..spotting the out of place bedding..her saari from the night before..nakusha aaproches the bed.. tidies the bedding..takes away that saari.. and just as she walks to the coffee table to pick up the cup and sauser dutta had left..she notices that he drunk very little of his tea. What he had said was not untrue..maybe he disliked the taste. Just as nakusha picks up the cup to take it away..she hears those familiar footseps..and she knew dutta was present..

As duttas shoes made a mark on the floor..and his footsteps where heard in the room..nakusha was a little surprised that he was back.

Approaching from the back…dutta stood close behind nakusha with a comforting smile.. he knew that she was aware of his presence ust didn't mention it.

Watching over her ..taking that cup…dutta admired nakusha from this close distance. Stepping even closer and…putting his lips to her ear…he whispered something that for me and you was unknown..yet it made nakusha blush.

She had no reply as dutta admired her mischievously, lovingly nakusha parted herself..with only one excuse that would come to mind.

"mein aapke leighyey chai laati hai.. " grabbing her wrist before she could walk away..dutta eyes tell nakusha that tea wasn't the thing he was looking for. His eyes carried something much more profound…mischievous and personal. Stepping even closer..the way dutta looks at her..nakusha is aware of his next move..and she begins to melt in embarrassment. "Aap ko meeting pein jaana tha naa?" dutta looked at nakusha with that certain deep significance like he wanted to hear more from her..he wanted her to be a little bit open. As duttta relies his words start of being of the stern sort yet there is a change of intention mid way.. "Meine baaji ko bhej diya…lekin ek kaam hai joe muje khud karna padega." Nakusha looks up at dutta with an innocence.. not quite understanding what he meant by that duttas amusement is apparent on his face. She was so naive. There was certain playfulness..sharpness to duttas tone, something that nakusha sometimes couldn't really figure out. Looking down at her dutta questioned weather she really didn't take the hint. He knew her well and the look that he gave her was one to capture.

"Ab thuje yey bhi samjaana padega…" nakusha was still lost in innocence, she really didn't think like that..instead of trying to spell it out to her..dutta took the moment into his own hands. Picking Nakusha up…dutta walked her towards the bed.. and the realization of what was happening left naku speechless.. going a shade of crimson red in his arms dutta puts nakusha down on the bed softly..leaning over close to her expression his words leave nakushas heart beating ….

"Samaj gayi yay aur samjaaun?. Nakushas expression was a mix of amusement with timidity…how she loved him.. no matter how much she thought she knew her husband or was used to his ways duttas every advance had an influence and that feeling of love for him grew each time.

……………… Midday patil family returns and finally Nakusha gets the chance to make that chai for Dutta..yet as she enters the Patil Niwas lounge shes a little shook to see dutta's temper fire at Baaji. As Baaji stands looking quite dispointed with himself dutta paises the floor in front of him. sternly in lots of anger

"Tum se ek kaam theekh se nahin hota baaji.!!!, Ek choti si deal bhi thujse final nahin hoti..lakho ka nuksaan hua hai mera.!!! Throwing that file back at baaji the extent of duttas anger begins to scare Naku. His anger was always a cause of worry for anyone and as Baaji stood silently he tired to explain that duttas absence was the real reason. "Bhao meri galti nahin hai..woh..aap nahin they toe unlogo ne mana kardiya."

Dutta didn't accept, taking a seat on the sofa dutta expression hits a level of disappointment.. "Tu kisi kaam ka nahin hai baaji.!!" As nakusha approaches with tea she is just about to put it on the table in front of dutta yet tripping on the carpet piece beneath her feet..she drops the chai on dutta creating an storm of fury from dutta. His black kurta was drenched with tea..not to mention the fact that the walm liquid would have scolded his skin. "NAKUSHA!!"

Grabbing her wrist in anger..the intensity in duttas eyes scares nakusha.

"Meine kaha ke muje chai chaiyey!!..aur bina ijaazat leighyey tu yaha kaise aagayi..!!!! duttas shouting brought a dreaded fear in nakushas eyes. Her eyes filmed in tears but that had no effect on duttas anger. Getting up in anger..dutta made it clear that both of them where blacklisted. As dutta spoke his eyes focused on baaji yet his words were to some extent for Naku too. – "jaaon yaha se!! aur bhul se bhi mere saamne aane ki galti mat karna!"……..

With time and by nature like always dutta thinks over his actions, his anger and realizes that he was wrong to act In such way. Having time to think to himself…dutta feels a sense of regret for treating baji in that way. At the end of the day.. he was the one to opt out of the meeting, it wasn't baaji's fault. And in amongst all this Naku also got caught up. She had nothing to do with it yet he had hurt her too. feeling a sense of regret dutta begins to loathe this temperament of his.

As dutta walks to the dinning table for the evening meal the only three people at the table were Aayi sahab, Madhu and Chotu. As dutta approches the head of the dinlng table and takes his place he notices the absences and questions aayi sahab,

Dutta: "Baaki ke ghar vale kaha hai?"

Aayi..lets dutta know that the rest of the family had eaten and baji and nakusha were not hungry. Dutta knew that both of them were upset by his treatment…

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Sometime later on in the evening as dutta walks the corridors of Patil Niwas in search of naku and baaji..he comes across chotu who seems to wondering the house. Asking him if he had seen any of them chotu asks dutta to come with him. leading dutta upstairs chotu points towards the lounge area from the balcony..and dutta sees baaji siting very childlike in aayi sahabs lap. Lying on the sofa his head is rested in aayi sahab laps whilst he complains. Mother and child type moment for a sulking baaji..upset ..annoyed at dutta baaji sulks to aayi sahab.

"Aayi sahab.. mein toe sirf kam kar re la tha.. agar bhao saath mein nahin aaya toe is meim meri kya galti.? Aap hein kaho..galti meri hai yay bhau..ki..aur toe aur mere ko yey bola ke mein kisi kam ka nahin ..! Mein toe chala aayi sahab..mere ko yaha rehne ka.

Stroking baaji's head like a little child..aayi sahab is a little amused by how a grown man like baaji would take things to heart like this trying to console him…yet It didn't really work.

He simply continued with his stubborn upset.. "mere ko data theekh hai …lekin naku par bhi bhot chilaya.." Aayi was a little surprised to see that dutta had shouted at nakusha too..wanting to know why aayi didn't have to ask as nakus to walked in… aayi saw an upset..expression as naku came and sat next to aayi and rested her head on her shoulder. Now aayi sahab had to comfort both of them.

As both of them were upset..it was nakus time to get her feelings of her chest.

"sirf chai le kar gayee thi, itni zor se chilarahe they, pair fisal gayay aur unpein chai giradi di." Hearing nakus words aayi began to understand that all these little things had added up. But she was a little disappointed on how these two were handerling the situation. They should know better. "tum dono..dutta ke ghuze ko toe jaante ho naa." As aayi sahab tired hard to convince both of them..chotu walked into the room with a significant message.

"Sahab ne aap dono ko upar bulayay hai.. "both Nakusha and baaji look at each other with the intention of not listing to duttas so called instruction.

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Ok girls/guys was going to actually write more but its late night and frankly don't feel up to it.. but I do hope you enjoyed it and o yes ive got something to you guys to think about.

Earlier on In the update..when dutta whispers something into nakushas ear.. ive not specified the actual words..what do you guys think he said to her????

just for fun..wanted to know what you guys would make of it. (but I didn't really have anything in mind when writing that..just left it to your imaginations. Interested to know what you guys think though.)