FF- Raj Gharana,Ch39, the end, pg76, updtd on 21.2

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Suraya

@Ruya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Nice upd8 tin
Man is SP 1 obnoxious man 😡
WHAT Nakku got hurt by Dutta ?????
Plzzz tell me it was not him but sum1 else can't wait 4 d next part
Plzz upd8 as soon as u can

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vahgar

@vahgar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Nice Update Tin, it was refreshing to read this, after all the depressing talks of the turn of events in LTL......... maybe the magic of LTL will now continue in all the wonderful FF's, SS's and OS's 😊 posted by all the lovely people on this forum.

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Dibya Nanda

@swati2008

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

atlast u updated...........i was waiting for it.......u know......i was browsing from my mobile at intervals to check if u hav updated or not.......waiting for ur regular updates.........this part is a nice one.........Dutta is so rude........he whipped Naku........n not even said sorry...........but Baaji seems sweet........he's the first in the family after AS who had reacted well to Naku's stay in haveli.........waiting for Dutta's entry.......update soon.......

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bfunofbb123

@bfunofbb123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

tanx alot tins 4 the wonderful update & 4 ur thoughts yes u r right it is defo helps to shift the thought pls tin no D no D in the epi atleast introduce him in ur story so that we read about him. is D mean like his father he hit N AS knows it is him oh baji sounds sweet !😊 tanx pls update as soon as u can awesome wriitng! ps: tanx 4 pm.

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Wanderbug

@Wanderbug

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

nice update waiting for more

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prettywoman

@prettywoman

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

very different.. OMG dutta whips her.. arrogancy ki bhi hadh hoti hain.. will soon fall off his high horse.. feel for AS ki her hubby is such a namoona!

thanks for the pm Tin

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Kavita

@KavitaDR

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Hi Tin,

I loved the sense of grandeur you have depicted and which should act as perfect foil for the regal personality that Dutta has in the actual LTL. I liked it and also appreciate your efforts to change the setting altogether. That is refreshing. I see that Nakusha has the spunk to be able to take on Baajirao in her first encounter, nice preamble for her meeting with Dutta Sriram Patil who beside cars and horses, does have an eye for girls....Very Interesting. 👏👏Will look forward to the update and see the clash between quiet humility and class.😳

Take care!

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shruti

@shruti10august

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Thnx for PM me tin.

Lyked it. But shock to see that dutta is nt lyk his mother but is lyk his father. Now it wud be interesting to see TaSha's first meeting nd how vl luv flourish between them.

Update soon 😊

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blueopal

@blueopal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great update dear.............
dutta intro n tasha meeting was accident,poor naku she was hurt by dutta n get scold by him also....................hmm interesting..................looking fwd...............