The Second Chances upd Epilogue pg63 on 22thFeb

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Sophia Khan

@Sophia21

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Phewwwwwwwwwww *breathes a sigh of relief*

Thank god it wasnt Dutta who left her... When u said D i guess all of us assumed it was him lool... I take my words back lool.

But D has a point... what if he left her after marriage? Now im glad she didnt get married ...

Thanks for the PM.. Continue soon

Quote

usha

@ushankitvc

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Achcha!!!! Nakusha was to gt married to Daniel....... Thnk gd he went away.............else our Dutta would be so sad.........I luved the way Dutta tried to explain to her..........

Dutta- Nakusha, I will ask you one question. I'll ask all of you one question. What is more painful for you- to be left at the altar today unmarried or being left after marriage at the hospital after you had given birth to your first baby? If he could leave his parents couldn't he desert his child tomorrow? What if his 'selfish phase' started after the marriage?

simply superb............lkd the start.........keep going...... Looking frwrd for the nxt updt........updt soooooon...... Thanx fr PM

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Dibya Nanda

@swati2008

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

shilpi.........finally Dutta comes.........Naku's prince to protect her.......update soon.........

Quote

Bushra Iqbal

@Sanely_Insane

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Wow Shilp....this is really interesting...

The intro made me sit on the edge of my seat...but thank god she was going to marry some Daniel not Dutta...i was sure he cud not do this to her....

Awwww she let her pain in front of him......she must be so heart broken...

But loved the last line Dutta said.....she better let go off that Danile from her life.....this is gr8...

waiting for the nxt part and pm me plz...😳

Edited by Bushy_92 - 14 years ago

Quote

Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

wow.............love this style of writing yaar😊..........awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee job................do add me to pm list..................👏

Quote

triasha banerji

@triasha

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

wowwwwwwwwwww..................shilpi...............awesummmmmmmm style..................luved it..............waiyting for the next part...🤗.............and nakusha's name was stylish😛

Quote

lizdarcy

@lizdarcy

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

I love it. I experiment a lot while writing, so i see what you're trying to do.

Are you planning to take both tracks ahead in parallel? Now that would be fun.

And oh, i loved it that she was gonna get married to another guy and not Dutta. He's a friend, eh? I love stories where friends fall in love! 😳

Quote

kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

OH shilpiiiii

THis FF is soooooooooooooooooo sooooooooooo interesting !

so D is Daniel not Dutta that was a shock

but im happy its not Duttta who broke her heart but a query how could any one fell in love with other guy if DUtta is around :PPPPPPPPPPPPPPp

ahahahahahha

but shilpi the FF is really good

love it :)

Quote

Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Shilpita! OMG I was like shocked when I read it...I thought ki yeh romantic story ek kiddish si animals story kaise ban gayi😆 I was like who the hell are these mannu hummer and all that....but I still continued reading

So that guys wasn't Dutta! omg shriram said that dutta should treat naku like his sister nooooooo

But the flashback was very well written and described, and it was interesting too

Thank god he is back to support her and take care of her and sort everything out...daniel is an idiot for leaving Naku

Quote

suhana19

@suhana19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Hey shilpi thanx for the update and PM🤗Omg u tricked us😆i thought D was Dutta ....thank god it wasn"t him .....Awww dutta is so sweet he going to support naku😉....he is right what if he left her after marriage ....how can u trust that kind of guy😡......this FF is really interesting yaar...pls jaldi update karna... u take care and see ya around.👍🏼👏🤗

Quote

1 2 3 4 5 ... 52

The Second Chances upd Epilogue pg63 on 22thFeb - Page 3

Related Topics

Explore Topics